25.10.2006, 11:52
Hallo ihr Lieben :hi:
Irgendwie war mir jetzt auch mal danach, eine FF zu schreiben, also habe ich mir ganz spontan mal was einfallen lassen Ich hab sie auf Englisch verfasst, weil ich finde, dass eine englische FF einen ganz andere, viele dramatischeren Effekt hat. Ich war zwar ein Jahr drüben, aber mein Englisch ist noch lange nicht perfekt, als behaltet eure fehler für euch Ihr wisst doch schon, was gemeint ist. Der erste Teil ist etwas kurz geraten, aber es ist ja auch erst einmal nur ne Flashback!
Das Genre ist natürlich eine JJ-FF, auch wenn es am Anfang nicht so aussieht, aber lasst euch überraschen.
Flashback
She remembered everything. Every little detail, every thought, every emotion, every tiny movement. June 3rd. A beautiful summer day; warm, sunny, and a little breeze playing with her dark curls. Birds were singing in the trees, children in cute suits and dresses running around and all her friends, the whole town, was gathered around them. In the last row she saw Luke. Their eyes met for a moment. Her heart beat faster. “I’m sorry”, her eyes said. “It’s okay, it’ll be alright”, his answered but they didn’t mean it. As she looked closer at him, she noticed a few tears running down his face. He wiped them away with the sleeve of his black suit. They both knew it should have been their big day. But they messed up.
Chris looked at Lorelai in awe. The dress she wore was plain but looked simply irresistable on her. She didn’t wear a veil or anything but her hair sparkled in the sun and the diamonds she wore in her darkbrown curls reflected the light. One could compare her with an angel or even Audrey Hepburn. He truly was the happiest man on earth. It was a long way they had gone before she finally recognized that he was the right for her. Of course, he had always known that they belonged together. And now they would enter the bond of marriage. Finally.
Irgendwie war mir jetzt auch mal danach, eine FF zu schreiben, also habe ich mir ganz spontan mal was einfallen lassen Ich hab sie auf Englisch verfasst, weil ich finde, dass eine englische FF einen ganz andere, viele dramatischeren Effekt hat. Ich war zwar ein Jahr drüben, aber mein Englisch ist noch lange nicht perfekt, als behaltet eure fehler für euch Ihr wisst doch schon, was gemeint ist. Der erste Teil ist etwas kurz geraten, aber es ist ja auch erst einmal nur ne Flashback!
Das Genre ist natürlich eine JJ-FF, auch wenn es am Anfang nicht so aussieht, aber lasst euch überraschen.
Forgotten
Flashback
She remembered everything. Every little detail, every thought, every emotion, every tiny movement. June 3rd. A beautiful summer day; warm, sunny, and a little breeze playing with her dark curls. Birds were singing in the trees, children in cute suits and dresses running around and all her friends, the whole town, was gathered around them. In the last row she saw Luke. Their eyes met for a moment. Her heart beat faster. “I’m sorry”, her eyes said. “It’s okay, it’ll be alright”, his answered but they didn’t mean it. As she looked closer at him, she noticed a few tears running down his face. He wiped them away with the sleeve of his black suit. They both knew it should have been their big day. But they messed up.
Chris looked at Lorelai in awe. The dress she wore was plain but looked simply irresistable on her. She didn’t wear a veil or anything but her hair sparkled in the sun and the diamonds she wore in her darkbrown curls reflected the light. One could compare her with an angel or even Audrey Hepburn. He truly was the happiest man on earth. It was a long way they had gone before she finally recognized that he was the right for her. Of course, he had always known that they belonged together. And now they would enter the bond of marriage. Finally.
Cause it's you and me and all other people with nothing to do
Nothing to lose
And it's you and me and all other people
And I don't know why, I can't keep my eyes off of you
Nothing to lose
And it's you and me and all other people
And I don't know why, I can't keep my eyes off of you
Beep.Beep. “What the hell is that bugging noise?”, Lorelai thought and tried to open her eyes. A sharp pain passed thorugh her head. Outch. “Lorelai?”, a voice, which sounded familiar somehow, asked but she couldn’t tell who it belonged to. She tried to think. “Lorelai?”, it asked again. No reaction again. Luke pressed the nurse button and waited. She felt that person next to her taking her hand. A nice feeling. Someone opened the door and came in. “What is the matter?”, a voice asked. “I think she woke up, doctor. Her eyes fluttered and she moaned.” The doctor examined her eyes with a little flashlight. Lorelai tried to push his hand and the light away but her hands wouldn’t obey her. “Mrs. Hayden?” Again, no reaction. Lorelai? Mrs. Hayden? Were they talking to her? “Ma’am?”, the doctor tried again. With an effort, she opened her eyes and looked around. Or at the least she tried for her neck was stiff. Everything was white: the wall, the ceiling, her covers and smelled so sterile. I’m in a hospital, she assumed. But how did I get in here? The person in the frock, obviously the doctor, smiled at her. “Welcome back!” She smiled at him weakly. “Where am I?”, she croaked, her voice hoarse and low. “You’re in the Hartford Hospital”, the other, familiar, voice answered. Until now, she hadn’t even looked at the other person who was still holding her hand. He must have been a few years older than herself, she thought. Even though he was sitting, she could tell he was tall. His eyes were blue, his face stubbly and he wore a base cap the wrong way.
Luke looked at her. The wounds and cuts had all healed well. Only a scar on her forehead remained which was now covered by her hair. Some parts of her body were still kind of blue or purple, even now. But they said it would all go away and she would look normal again. Provided that she’d wake up.
Wie gesagt, das war erst einmal nur der erste Teil, weiteres folgt bald! Bitte FB! Und Lyric ist aus "You and me" von Lifehouse.
EDIT:
Ich hab noch was hinzugefügt
EDIT:
Ich hab noch was hinzugefügt