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So, ich habe eine neue FanFic... enjoy Wink


Titel: Over my head
Autor : Cedric
Genre : Drama, Humor, Romance
Pairing : JJ
Raiting : None
Disclaimer : Mir gehoert nichts, sondern alles ASP und The CW
Sonstige Bemerkungen/Spoilerwarnung: Pre-Series





OVER MY HEAD


[FONT=&quot]Beep. Beep.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Luke turned around. It couldn’t already be 6:00 am. It seemed like he went to bed just five minutes ago. Although he owned his diner for almost a year now, he still wasn’t used to the early mornings. But he had to get up. Work was waiting for him to be done.

[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Beep. Beep.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]He stretched out his hand and silenced the alarm clock. Slowly, very slow, he got up, dressed and went down into his beloved little diner, yawning. He reached the door, turned the sign, saying OPEN, and opened the door to let in the milkman, who must arrive any second.
But as Luke wanted to step out of the diner, he almost stumbled over a little something, lying on the doorstep. He looked closer then bent forward over the bundle of blankets that was lying there. Inside, just visible, was something that made Luke jump.
[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“It can’t be…”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] Luke thought.[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]
But it was true. Unbelievable but true. It was a baby, fast asleep. A breeze ruffled the trees of Stars Hollow, which lay silent and tidy under the inky skies, the very last place you would expect astonishing things to happen. Luke looked around. There was nobody. No sign of anyone. He looked down again. The baby rolled over without waking up. One small hand closed on a piece of paper.
Luke carefully picked up the bundle of blankets and carried the baby into the diner. He felt like an elephant. He never was really good around children, especially little ones. He never knew what to do with them…
But still he had to find out about this one. Extremely cautious, he picked up the little piece of paper, which the baby had let go, while turning around again. It turned out to be a letter. A letter addressed to
Luke Danes.
[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Luke grew more curious now. So, his doorstep wasn’t a coincidence… He opened the envelope, unfolded the letter and began to read.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Dear Mr. Danes,[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]

You surely wonder why my daughter was found on your doorstep and why I explicitly chose your doorstep. You don’t know me. We have only met briefly once. I can’t explain why I chose you to do those things. Those hard things. But as I first saw you, I had the feeling that you, of all people, would care for her. You had a special aura, which made me comfortable, when I was around you. You seemed to be a very responsible guy and a person everybody could rely on.
That’s why I chose you. I chose you to look after my daughter, to care for her until I’m coming back. I can’t tell you when this will be, but I can say, I do the best I can to return as soon as I can.
And I fervently hope, you still will be there, you still will be with my daughter. There are adoption-papers enclosed. You just have to sign them and she’s your daughter. It breaks my heart to leave her behind but I have no choice.
Please, don’t call the police – they won’t find me. Nobody can. Just look after her, okay?
[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]

Sincerely yours,
[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]A bad mother[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]PS[/FONT] [FONT=&quot]Her name is Lorelai Leigh. But if you want to change it, feel free to do so. She’s your daughter now.[/FONT]


[FONT=&quot]Luke stared at the piece of paper. This couldn’t be true. It was impossible. He read the letter again. And again. All over again. The last few sentences were hard to read because the writer obviously had cried, while she was scribbling down the note. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“This is a joke. Dear god please let it be a joke!”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] Luke thought desperately.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]But no one showed up to laugh about him. No inhabitant of Stars Hollow, no freaking TV presenter. Luke had to sit down. Breathing hard, he looked at the sleeping baby closely for the first time. She had brown hair, a cute little nose and sucked at her pacifier. To describe her with one word: peacefully.
Not knowing she was abandoned by her mother, not knowing she was special, not knowing she would be woken up by a screaming Babette an hour later, not knowing she would be famous in Stars Hollow, not knowing her blue eyes would Luke make to fall in love with her, not knowing she would be adopted by him three weeks later.
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Hej! Also normalerweiße hab ich ja nicht die Nerven eine englische FF anzufangen zu lesen, aber diese ist echt super, mach bitte ganz schnell weiter.

lg

Sarah
Huhu,
OMG...!
Den Anfang finde ich schon einmal super. Ich hoffe du schreibst bald weiter. Dein Schreibstil finde ich toll. Eigentlich bin ich nicht so gut im Enlgisch, aber ich lese so gerne englische FF's.
Bitte, bitte schreib weiter(auch deine anderen FF's)!

Glg Ramona
hey du,
ein vielversprechender AnfangSmile
Zitat:Please, don’t call the police – they won’t find me. Nobody can. Just look after her, okay? [FONT=&quot][/FONT]
was ist nur mit Lorelai???
Zitat:Not knowing she was abandoned by her mother, not knowing she was special, not knowing she would be woken up by a screaming Babette an hour later, not knowing she would be famous in Stars Hollow, not knowing her blue eyes would Luke make to fall in love with her, not knowing she would be adopted by him three weeks later.
seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehr schön ausgedrückt und es klingt auch wirklich nach Rory.

Hoffentlich kommt Lorelai zurück und sie, Luke und Rory werden eine glückliche FamilieSmile

mach so weiter!!!
ganz liebe Grüße
Anna
Here comes another chapter. A little short, I have to admit Wink


Aber erst re-FB:
@Sarah: thx fuer dein FB, ich hoffe du liest weiter!
@Ramona: Danke dass du hier auch liest, thx fuer dein review!
@Anna: Ja, was ist wohl mit Lorelai... ich werde es dir (noch) nicht sagen Big Grin, aber wenn du weiterliest, erfaehrst du es Wink Dankeschoen fuer dein FB!






[FONT=&quot]02 Mystery Mother[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Quietly, he sat down on a chair beside her bed. She had been ill for almost three days now and even though Luke knew, it was just a little flu, he worried like hell. She was his everything. It seemed like only yesterday that she lay on his doorstep totally unaware of all the things she’d been thru. But in reality, it hadn’t been yesterday. That yesterday had been five years ago. Five years with a lot of trouble, fun and confusion. Luke couldn’t deny that that little girl had enriched his life impermeable and forever. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She turned around and slowly opened her eyes.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Hey Daddy,” she whispered. “Why are you here? Shouldn’t you be in the diner?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“No, Rory,” he answered softly. “The diner is fine without me. How are you feeling, honey?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“I’m gonna be fine, I guess. It’s just the flu, Daddy,” she tried to pacify him.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Luke let out a laugh, sometimes he couldn’t believe that this little girl was only five years old, she was much too smart for her age…[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]A thought occurred to Luke’s mind and he slightly grinned at the thought of how Rory came to her name. He had desperately tried to teach her to say Lorelai but two-year-old Rory just couldn’t manage it. Luke had tried everything and even though Rory could pronounce nearly everything he told her to, her name was inaccessible. Finally Luke had turned to Lory but even then, all that she could say was Rory. Since then she was Rory, not Lorelai and most of the townspeople didn’t even remember her real name. Just Luke silently called her Lorelai from time to time. He didn’t really know why but this name – Lorelai – seemed to be the only connection to her mother.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Her mother – Luke still was wondering every day, every moment, when he looked at the sweet little girl, who her mother was, why she had left her behind, why at his doorstep and especially whether she would ever come back. Every time when Rory talked about her mom, Luke tried to avoid the topic. It worked out really fine until…[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Daddy?” she looked up at him. “You know I’m ill and stuff, so tell me about my mother.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Luke almost sprang up due to surprise. She had never asked him explicitly about her. And Luke didn’t know what to tell her. He didn’t know her himself. All he had was that letter, which didn’t say anything really. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Well, you know,” he began. “All I know is that she cared for you, she made sure that you were in good hands. And I’m sure she is very pretty, I mean, look at you, you’re the prettiest girl I’ve ever seen.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Rory silently nodded. She seemed to be disappointed and that fact almost broke Luke’s heart. He couldn’t stand the sad look on her face. He had him head over heels and Luke couldn’t do anything about that. He clumsily tried to change the subject.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“You know what? Aunt Babette is coming today and guess what, she brings her new cat. I think it’s called Cinnamon.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Cinnamon? Why would she call a cat like that?” she teased and a smile appeared on her face.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Ah, you know Babette, Rory,” Luke answered, “What was the last cat’s name? Cucumber?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Yeah, right,” she giggled and Luke’s heart became lighter. “She is kind of crazy, isn’t she?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Yes, well. It not just her, it’s the town, we’re living here, kiddo,” Luke said and ran his fingers thru her hair.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“And I wouldn’t wanna live someplace else,” she concluded.[/FONT]
also die story find ich echt super!!!
ich versteh nur leider noch nicht so viel englischSad
hättest du nicht lust die geschichte auch irgendwann auch noch mal auf deutsch zu schreiben?Big Grin
Heey!

Es geht schon weiter!!!:clap::clap:

Zitat: But in reality, it hadn’t been yesterday. That yesterday had been five years ago. Five years with a lot of trouble, fun and confusion. Luke couldn’t deny that that little girl had enriched his life impermeable and forever.

Bereits diese Stelle hat mir seeeeeeeeeeehr gut gefallen. Du schreibst wunderschön. Ich liebe, wie du alles so schön beschreibst... und bezug nimmst. Ich weiss nicht genau, wie ich das erklären soll, es hat etwas mit meinem Gefühl zu tun. Es fühlt sich einfach toll an, so wie du schreibst!

Lg Ramona
Hej!
Klar les ich weiter! Ich finde es süß wie sehr sich Luke um Rory sorgt. Und ich finde es super wie du den Namen Rory erklärt hast^^ Und hm ich find es auch süß, dass Luke sie immer noch insgeheim Lorelai nennt. Und überhaupt.
Ach ja ich bin voll stolz auf mich, weil ich alles verstehe! Normalerweise bin ich nämlich richtig schlecht in englisch^^naja im lesen nicht so schlecht aber allgemein halt.lol das heißt, dass dein englisch perfekt für mich ist^^
ALso mach weiter!

lg

Sarah
hey du,
Zitat:“Well, you know,” he began. “All I know is that she cared for you, she made sure that you were in good hands. And I’m sure she is very pretty, I mean, look at you, you’re the prettiest girl I’ve ever seen.”
schön erklärt, man sieht Luke richtig bei der kleinen Rory sitzen und es ihr erzählen.

Zitat:“Yeah, right,” she giggled and Luke’s heart became lighter. “She is kind of crazy, isn’t she?”

“Yes, well. It not just her, it’s the town, we’re living here, kiddo,” Luke said and ran his fingers thru her hair.


[FONT=&quot]“And I wouldn’t wanna live someplace else,” she concluded.[/FONT]
das ist absolut Stars Hollow, wie wir es alle kennen und lieben.

Ein absolut großartiger Teil mit sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo viel GefühlSmile

Deine FF ist super!!! Ich liebe englische FFs.

Mach so weiter
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaanz liebe Grüße
Anna
Ach du meine Güte!!
Ich liebe Geschichten die 1. JJ sind
und 2. Pre-Series!!!

ich finde es super wie sich Luke um die kleine Rory kümmert... und die Geschichte wie sie zu ihrem Namen gekommen ist, ist einfach klasse!!

Schreib bitte wieder so schnell weiter wie beim letzten mal ;-)!