15.06.2008, 20:06
Also ... ich hatte ja mal angekündigt, dass ich meine englische FF übersetzen und dann hier ins Forum stellen werde. Allerdings komme ich einfach nicht zum übersezen und da dachte ich mir, ich könnte sie ja trotzdem mal hier einstellen.
Titel: Back where I belong
Autor : das wär dann wohl ich
Genre : hmm ... bis jetzt zum groÃteil vermutlich romance - gespickt mit Stars Hollow
Pairing : PDLD (Punch drunk love duo)9, also Finn/Rory
Raiting : kann meiner Meinung nach jeder lesen
Disclaimer : Mir gehören werder die Gilmore Girls, noch Stars Hollow oder sonst irgendwas auÃer der Idee. Ich werd damit auch kein Geld verdienen.
Sonstige Bemerkungen/Spoilerwarnung: Spoiler sind keine drin, da die Serie ja zu Ende ist. Ansonsten wäre nur noch zu erwähnen, dass die FF eben auf englisch geschrieben ist.
So, und nun auf zur Story ...
As he opened the door to his apartment he was greeted by quietness. It was unusual. Normally his wife would come out of the kitchen and greet him smiling. She would have cooked something and they would have had dinner together.
This time it was completely quiet in their whole home.
âAce? Iâm home honey, where are you?â He looked into the kitchen and the bedroom, but there was no sight of her. Getting worried he looked in his office, the last room. There, on his desk, were two things:
One was a picture, cut in two halves; the other was a letter, written by his wife. He took it and began to read:
You said you loved me, you said that I make you happy.
But you cheated on me and hurt me over and over again.
By the time you read this, I will be back to where I belong.
Iâm not going to take it anymore!
Rory
For a moment he stood completely still, even forgot how to breathe. She left him? Then he finally looked at the two halves of the picture, lying on his desk. It was their wedding picture â¦
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Slowly she drove through the streets of her hometown. It seemed as nothing had changed in the five years she hadnât been here. It was all the same, the gazebo, Lukeâs, the houses, the people she had known her whole life. Miss Patty looked at her and then pointed at her car, saying something to Babette. She pulled up in front of her house. No, it wasnât hers anymore. Her mom lived here with her husband Luke, she went away with Logan!
She got out of the car and slowly walked to the door. She knocked and waited, nervous what would happen now. Lorelai opened the door, looking into the house and obviously speaking with her best friend Sookie. As she looked at Rory, she went quiet.
âRory?â was the only thing she said.
âHey mom â¦â
âWhat are you doing here?â
âIâm back home â¦â
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Titel: Back where I belong
Autor : das wär dann wohl ich
Genre : hmm ... bis jetzt zum groÃteil vermutlich romance - gespickt mit Stars Hollow
Pairing : PDLD (Punch drunk love duo)9, also Finn/Rory
Raiting : kann meiner Meinung nach jeder lesen
Disclaimer : Mir gehören werder die Gilmore Girls, noch Stars Hollow oder sonst irgendwas auÃer der Idee. Ich werd damit auch kein Geld verdienen.
Sonstige Bemerkungen/Spoilerwarnung: Spoiler sind keine drin, da die Serie ja zu Ende ist. Ansonsten wäre nur noch zu erwähnen, dass die FF eben auf englisch geschrieben ist.
So, und nun auf zur Story ...
Back where I belong
Prologue
As he opened the door to his apartment he was greeted by quietness. It was unusual. Normally his wife would come out of the kitchen and greet him smiling. She would have cooked something and they would have had dinner together.
This time it was completely quiet in their whole home.
âAce? Iâm home honey, where are you?â He looked into the kitchen and the bedroom, but there was no sight of her. Getting worried he looked in his office, the last room. There, on his desk, were two things:
One was a picture, cut in two halves; the other was a letter, written by his wife. He took it and began to read:
You said you loved me, you said that I make you happy.
But you cheated on me and hurt me over and over again.
By the time you read this, I will be back to where I belong.
Iâm not going to take it anymore!
Rory
For a moment he stood completely still, even forgot how to breathe. She left him? Then he finally looked at the two halves of the picture, lying on his desk. It was their wedding picture â¦
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Slowly she drove through the streets of her hometown. It seemed as nothing had changed in the five years she hadnât been here. It was all the same, the gazebo, Lukeâs, the houses, the people she had known her whole life. Miss Patty looked at her and then pointed at her car, saying something to Babette. She pulled up in front of her house. No, it wasnât hers anymore. Her mom lived here with her husband Luke, she went away with Logan!
She got out of the car and slowly walked to the door. She knocked and waited, nervous what would happen now. Lorelai opened the door, looking into the house and obviously speaking with her best friend Sookie. As she looked at Rory, she went quiet.
âRory?â was the only thing she said.
âHey mom â¦â
âWhat are you doing here?â
âIâm back home â¦â
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So, das ist erstmal recht kurz, ich weiÃ, aber es sind ja schon 17 Chapter der FF fertig, also werde ich schnell weiter posten können, wenn sich jemand dafür interessiert.
Ich hoffe, ich bekomme ein paar Kommis, auch wenn es auf englisch ist.
LG, Susu 
ich freue mich eher.
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