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Alsou viel isses nit, aber ein kleiner Teil, der auf Feedback hofft. Vielleicht hilft mir das, meine Schreibblockade zu überwinden.


That was three days ago now and Jess still couldn’t belive that Rory really came away with him. But she did. And now it was onlay the two of them and the open highway.
Jess knew that it’d only be for three months ‘cause Rory had to go back to college again, but he decided to make those three months the best of his entire life. Of THEIR entire lifes.
They hadn’t talked about Jess’ last visit in Stars Hollow yet and it seemed that they weren’t going to, either. The “I love you” still hung between them like an always apparent invisible shadow that neither of them wanted to touch. (Yeah, I know, it’s a bad simile, but…)


TBC

What shall i say?.. It's great!!! really.. i enjoy your story!

soviel dazu..*lol*

also.. mach weiter!

aaaah wahnsinn deine FF hab ich schon erwähnt dass ich normalerweise ein Anti-Literati bin, aber deine FF könnte es schaffen, mich umzupolen

und ich bekomm dieses eine Lied nicht mehr aus dem Kopf seit ich deine FF les, dieses "Come away with me, to another place, we can rely on eachother" etc

Zitat:hab ich schon erwähnt dass ich normalerweise ein Anti-Literati bin, aber deine FF könnte es schaffen, mich umzupolen

Na dann werd ich mir mal Mühe geben

dein englisch is wirklich gut.. *mich auch als eine der kritischen oute*

schade, dass es in der folge anders gelaufen is
aber ich freu mich auf den nächsten teil

So, als Geburtstagsgeschenk von mir für euch:
Ein neuer Teil. Frisch getippt und hoffentlich gut genug, um meine lieben Kritiker zufrieden zu stellen.
Hope you enjoy it!


That was three days ago now and Jess still couldn’t belive that Rory really came away with him. But she did. And now it was onlay the two of them and the open highway.
Jess knew that it’d only be for three months ‘cause Rory had to go back to college again, but he decided to make those three months the best of his entire life. Of THEIR eintire lifes.
They hadn’t talked about Jess’ last visit in Stars Hollow yet and it seemed that they weren’t going to, either. The “I love you” still hung between them like an always apparent invisible shadow that neither of them wanted to touch. (Yeah, I know, it’s a bad simile, but…)


“A Penny for your thoughts.” Rory’s voice pulled him back into reality. “What? A Penny? That’s all my thoughts are worth to you? They’re at least a Dollar.” “I won’t give you more than a dime.” “Oh, come on, Rory. A quarter?” Jess looked at her like a trader who wanted to sell his stuff for the highest prize he could get. (And another bad simile. Sorry for this.) Rory surrendered and smiled. “Okay”, she finally said: “But at the next service area you have to get me some coffee.” Jess shook his head in disbelief: “But you had your coffee one hour ago.How the hell can anyone drink so much coffee? I mean, ervery normal person would get sick.” “Well, you can’t say my mom and I were normal persons. You know, we live from coffee. It’s what runs through our veines, so…” “Ok, ok, I understand: You want coffee.” “Yes, I do. As soon as possible.”, Rory grinned. Jess sighed and nodded: “Then you’ll get it.” Rory gave him her most angel-like smile as a response and the quarter was forgotten.


TBC
(um Feedback wird wie immer ausdrücklich gebeten)

:hb: :hb: :hb: :band: :geschenk:
*singt*
Happy Birthday to you, happy Birthday tou you....

Alles Gute zum Geburtstag. Und viel Spaß beim feiern heute.

Dangge *freu*
Werd ich haben

nachträglich noch alles gute von mir :hi:

wann geht's denn mit der story weiter?

Danke

Hab schon den nächsten Teil geschrieben, aber weiter gehts erst, wenn ich noch ein bisserl Feedback bekomme