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Come Away With Me - *lane* - 22.01.2005

wundervoll *schmacht*

Come Away With Me - LuckyDucky - 06.03.2005

*von Seite 10 hochhol*

Es gibt nen neuen Teil.




At the same time in Stars Hollow: Lorelai entered “Luke’s Diner” after an exhausting Friday Night Dinner at her parent’s house and sat down at the counter. Alarmed by the ringing of the doorbell Luke came out of the kitchen holding a can of coffee in one hand and a big mug in the other. He already knew that it could only be Lorelai ‘cause she came here every Friday after dinner and needed her coffee.
“Hey, how was dinner?” He placed the mug in front of Lorelai and pourred some of the hot black liquid in. “Don’t ask.” She took one big sip out of the mug and put it down again. “Just what I needed.” “That bad?”, Luke seemed sincerely interested. “I had to explain to my parents why their beloved grandchild didn’t come to dinner today’s evening and why I haven’t told them about Rory’s absence earlier.” “Why?”, Lorelai nearly screamed. “I can tell you why! Beacause a few hours ago I myself didn’t know where my daughter is! And you know my parents: They would have ripped my head off and never stopped telling me what a horrible mother I am!” “You’re a great mother”, Luke tried to calm her down: “Rory loves you and…” “… and still she d hasn’t told me where she is!” “But now you know?” Lorelai glared at him: “She’s in Pennsylvania. With that damn nephew of yours!” “Jess?” “Is there any other nephew I don’t know of? Of course Jess!” “Rory is with Jess in Pennsylvania?!” He looked at her totally flabbergasted. “I said that, didn’t I?” “What are thy doing in Pennsylvania?”, Luke didn’t seem to completely get the whole situation yet, which really began to annoy Lorelai: “I don’t know what they’re doing there. The only thing Rory told me is that they are going to spent the holidays together.” “Why?” “I don’t know why! But it must have been Jess idea. Rory wouldn’t do something like that!” “Well, she did.”, Luke stated. “But only because Jess told her to.” “Don’t you think Rory is old enough to make her own decisions? She would have never gone with him if she didn’t want it.” Lorelai grew more and more angry. She knew it wasn’t Luke’s fault but the evening had been so terrible that she simply needed smoeone she could yell at. “My daughter would never have gone with him without telling me before!” Now she was close to crying and got up. “I guess it’s better if I’d go now.” Luke didn’t say a word.
“Bye, Luke.” And then she was out of the diner, leaving Luke behind, who was looking after her for a few minutes, before he went back to work.

TBC

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Come Away With Me - Josefine - 06.03.2005

Mal wieder ein super Teil! Dein Schreibstil ist echt klasse. Freu mich wenns weitergeht!

Come Away With Me - LuckyDucky - 02.07.2005

*such* *von hinten vorkram* *Staub von Thread wisch* *hust* Ui, ganz schön viel Staub! *lach* Joa, sorry, hat ein bisserl gedauert, aber jetzt kommt doch mal wieder ein neuer (leider ziemlich kurzer) Teil:


Meanwhile Jess and Rory had arrived at a small motel a few miles after Harrisburg. Jess parked the Mustang on the parking lot behind the building and got out of the car. Rory didn’t move and looked straight forward through the window. “Hey, don’t you want to get out of the car? We’re there!” She threw him an annoyed gaze, but then followed his example.
Jess sighed and walked in the direction of the motel. Rory followed him in a few steps distance.
The lobby of the motel wasn’t all too big and a little shabby, but tough quite nice. It looked very much like the 70s and it was obvious that this was authentic. “Wow”, Rory wrinkled her nose as she saw the tasteless wallpapers and furniture. Jess rolled his eyes: “Nice.”
While Rory looked around the lobby, Jess went to the reception and rang the bell on the reception table. A few seconds later, the receptionist, a stocky man in a colorful Hawaiian shirt emerged from his small buero as if he had waited for it. “Welcome to Benny’s Motel!”, he exclaimed smiling broadly: “I’m Benny. What can I do for you?”
Rory giggled, but she could see that Jess was shortly before turning around on his heels and leaving this place as fast as possible.
Benny looked expectantly at Jess, who had to bite his tongue to not to make some sarcastic remarks and risking to spend another night outside in the car. He sighed, then answered the man’s question, even tough he thought it was obvious what he wanted: “I need a room.” “Oh, you need a room!”, Benny’s smile grew bigger: “Well, that’s good ‘cause we have rooms here.” “Good. ‘Cause we need a room.”, Jess replied, getting a little aggressive. . But the man kept on smiling: “Our ususal rooms have two single beds, but...”, he looked at Rory and winked at Jess: “…we also have rooms with double beds.”

TBC

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Come Away With Me - MaraMariano - 03.07.2005

ich hab deine ff gerade gelesen und sie gefällt mir

ich finde es schön das Rory doch noch mit Jess gegangen ist
aber so eine roadtrip ff erinnert mich immer wieder an die von louisvuitton in der es kein happy end gab
vielleicht gibt es aber hier eins *hoff* *fleh*
ich kann Lores Reaktion verstehen
die letzte bemerkung war ja echt klasse

freu mich auf dennächsten Teil

Mara

PS: jetzt wird sich uach mein englischlehrer freuen denn ich lese englisch:biggrin:

Come Away With Me - jutschi - 03.07.2005

he ich muss sagen super ff

normalerweise habe ich so meine Schwierigkeiten mit den englischen ff´s.
Da mamche langweilig geschrieben sind, doch deine, diese ff ist der Hammer!!
Du hast einfach nen klassen Schreibstil und ich hoffe das du schnell weiter tippelst *lol*, hopp hopp!!
lg deine neue Leserin Julia

Come Away With Me - Josefine - 03.07.2005

Endlich gehts weiter. Ich dachte schon es kommt gar kein Teil mehr, weil ich die einzige war, die Fb gegeben hat. Aber super toller Teil. Ich hab deine FF schon vermisst gehabt. Bin gespannt was für ein Zimmer Rory und Jess nehmen. Hoffe der nächste Teil kommt bald.