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Alsou zur Feier des Tages (ich bin ja ne kleine Hexe und Halloween ist für mich sowas wie ein Feiertag) hab ich mal wieder ein bisserl was geschrieben [Bild: 140.gif]
Die Story ist mal wieder auf englisch, also entschuldige ich mich schon mal in voraus für alle Rechtschreib- und Grammatikfehler.
Außerdem ist ein kleiner Spoiler enthalten, sie spielt nämlich nach "Last Week Fights, This Week Tights ", als Jess Rory bittet, mit ihm zu gehen.
Na ja, ich hoffe, sie gefällt euch trotzdem ein bisserl.


Come Away With Me


Come away with me in the night
Come away with me
And I’ll write you a song

Come away with me on a bus
Come away where they can’t tempt us
With their lies

I want to walk with you
On a cloudy day
In fields where the yellow grass grows knee-high
So won’t you try to come

Come away with me and we’ll kiss
On a mountaintop
Come away with me
And I’ll never stop loving you

And I want to wake up with the rain
Falling on a tin roof
While I’m safe there in your arms
So all I ask is for you
To come away with me in the night
Come away with me


The sound was coming from the speakers of the car radio of the red 67 FORD Mustang cabriolet – Jess had bought the car from the money he got from Luke, ‘cause he didn’t think his old one would make it much longer - , as they drove down the dusty highway.
“Geez, that girl knows what she’s talking about”, Jess thought and looked at Rory, which unwillingliy made him smile.
He was so happy to have her with him right now, right here. He couldn’t help looking at her. She was so beautyful, watching the deserted landscape along the road and her brown hair fluttering in the airflow.
She felt his gaze upon her face and grinned. She loved to be with him and she also loved it when he looked at her like that. She didn’t turn to face him and said: “Hey, keep watching the street, not me!”
Jess turned his gaze so quickly back to the street, that Rory had to chuckle: “Trapped.” “Guess so”, Jess tried to make his voice sound trivial, but inwardly he also had to chuckle. Sometimes she could be so childish… and right this was what he loved her most for.
In this moment he was simply happy to have her with him. He didn’t even want to think about, how it would be if she had said “no”, when he asked her to come with him.

TBC
(aber nur, wenn Feedback kommt)

oh wow
dein Englisch ist echt klasse und ich bin da sehr kritisch (warum liegt auf der Hand )
ich steh sonst überhaupt garnicht auf Literati Fics, aber diese hats mir angetan, einfach wundervoll geschrieben

Please continue

ist echt gut!!!!

ich bin da ja auch sehr kritisch...

ist wohl das laster einer halb-amerikanerin..

mhm is das der Grund warum du meine FF nicht liest? Kidding!!

biiiiiiiiiiiiitte schreib weiter *auf knien herumrutsch* *hihi*

Wow, ich bin begeistert!! das is ja ur gut geworden, und dein englischis wirklicg spitze!!!!
aber was is mit yale?? und mit dem dummen dean??
Schreib bitte schnell weiter!! ich will wissen was du dir noch ausgedacht hast!!

Deine Englischen Geschichten gefallen mir sehr gut!!!!! Schreib weiter, die Geschichte ist eben klasse



















































ich bin ein fan von dir

ja kann mich den anderen leutchen nur anschließen du schreibst echt gut

is gut wirklich

Wow! Danke. *stolzbin* Alsou mit so viel Lob hätte ich jetzt echt nit gerechnet. Ihr macht mich ja ganz verlegen [Bild: 21.gif] [Bild: 193.gif]
Und weil ihr mir alle so liebes Feedback schreibt, gibts noch mal nen kleinen Teil. Ist aber nur ein kleiner Ausschnitt aus "Last Week Fights, This Week Tights ". Hoffe, es gefällt euch trotzdem.
Vielleicht schreib ich aber später nochmal was, muss aber erst meiner Omi und meinem Opi Essen gehn, weil die Goldene Hochzeit feiern.
Aber so lange erstmal viel Spaß hiermit:


Flashback:

"Why won't you leave me alone? You won't go away." Rory was really upset and he didn’t know anymore if it was such a good idea to come here.

"Rory." He tried to stay calm and fought against the urge to run away. Again.

"What do you want?"

"I don't know. I just wanted to see you, talk to you. I just..."

"What?", she asked, her voice sounding sharp.

"Come with me.", he blurted out.

"What?”

“Come with me”, he repeated.

“Where?”, she asked him out of pure curiosity.

“I don't know...away!”

“Are you crazy?”

“Probably. Do it. Come with me. Don't think about it.”

“I can't do that.” ,she said while opening the door to her dorm room and he followed her as she stepped into the dark room.

“You don't think you can do it but you can. You can do whatever you want.”

“It's not what I want.”

“It is. I know you.”

“You don't know me!”, she screamed back at him.

“Look, we'll go to New York. We'll work, we'll live together, we'll be together. It's what I want. It's what you want, too.”

“No!”, Rory screamed in protest.

“I want to be with you, but not here. Not this place, not Stars Hollow. We have to start new.”, he tried to convince her.

“There's nothing to start!”

“You're packed. Your stuff is all in boxes. It's perfect. You're ready. And I'm ready. I'm ready for this. You can count on me now. I know you couldn't count on me before, but you can now. You can.”

“No!”

“Look, you know we're supposed to be together. I knew it the first time I saw you two years ago, and you know it, too. I know you do.”

“No, no, no, no, no!”

“Don't say ‘no’ just to make me stop talking or make me go away. Only say "no" if you really don't want to be with me.”

“No!”, she screamed again.

Jess backed away quickly until he was standing in the hallway. He looked at her one last time then lowered his head as he rushed out of the building and back into his car.

TBC
(und wie immer freue ich mich über jedes Feedback)

WOW!!!mehr sag ich dazu net!!die ff is perfekt!!