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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - MissLilli - 20.10.2004

naja das sind alle PCs in meiner Family, meine Eltern sind geschieden und mein Papa hat eine Freundin die auch Kinder hat*gg*

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - MissLilli - 20.10.2004

sooo hier der versprochene Teil
bin wieder mal net sooo zufrieden, also BITTE Kritik *auf knien anbettel* *gg*

The big fight
Teil 15

Es war als ob Luke auf seinem Rücken ein Schild angeklebt hatte, auf dem stand: „Triff mich!“ und unter der Schrift war ein riesiges Grinsekatzenlächeln, das sie angrinste.
Lorelai grinned to herself as she scooped up some snow, made it into a ball, pranced around a little like a baseball pitcher and hauled the ball with all her powers at Luke’s back. She waited and watched her weapon of choice flying like in slow-mo, always keeping her eyes on it. “BAM” it hit him square in the back.
Lorelai nervously chewed on her lower lip, trying to gauge Luke’s reaction to her assault.
After the impact he had stopped dead in his tracks and now slowly turned around, a look of utter disbelief about what had just happened on his face. His mouth opened and closed like a fish out of water: he was at a loss of words.
Her nervous chewing had stopped as a slow grin crept into her features upon seeing his dumbfounded reaction. But the grin disappeared fast enough when Luke started walking over to where she was standing. Slowly he made his way over like an animal waiting to pounce on his prey and as he stopped just inches from her she looked at him wide eyed. She didn’t know what to do right now, or what to say and hell…. did she ever know what to say to Luke if it wasn’t mocking, some smartass remark or some wisecrack? The fact that he was standing so close she could actually smell his cologne didn’t help either so she continued looking at him, feeling the strong need of smacking herself on the forehead for doing something this stupid.
Because of that (and even though she’d deny it afterwards: only because of that) he was able to surprise her one more time with his actions.
His eyes never left hers as he quickly bent down to scoop up some snow in both of his hands, stood up again and smashed one hand of snow in her face and use her startled state of mind to shove the other handful down her neck into her clothes.

When Lorelai returned from her shock she shook her head to get rid of the snow, spitting out a few snowflakes and as she felt the melting snow trickling down her back she started squealing and jumping up and down to get the snow out of her t-shirt. But no such luck. “Luke, are you completely and totally INSANE??” she snarled loudly at him but it took her a while to realize that Luke had already walked away after finishing his deed, was about to disappear into Babette’s house, his hands crammed into the pockets of his jacket and as she screeched “Lucas Danes, get BACK here!!” across the two front lawns he even started whistling nonchalantly.
Lorelai narrowed her eyes and muttered: “This isn’t over, my friend” before she took one last attempt to shake the snow from under her clothes, whimpered and stomped her foot like a child, pulled a disgusted face and headed back into the house to take a well-deserved hot bubble bath

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004 - 20.10.2004

thx miss lilli für den neuen Teil du bist di beste!!! Werde ihn mir gleich durchlesen

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - MissLilli - 20.10.2004

ich hoff ihr versteht's alles

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004 - 20.10.2004

ja ich habs verstanden!! Dein englisch is s**** gut!!! Wieso hast du eigentlich auf englisch geschrieben?

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - MissLilli - 20.10.2004

weil ich auf Englisch einiges besser ausdrücken kann

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - CMM - 20.10.2004

Wirklich genial....
gefällt mir immer besser
ich würde dich nur allzu gern kritisieren... mhm.. hätte da vielleicht was...
Ich musste doch glatt 1x mein wörterbuch herausholen...
du machst mir ein echt schlchtes gewissen, dabei lern ich doch sonst immer englisch..
jetzt hast mich daran erinnert, dass ich des noch machen muss...
geht gar net

*und wieder ernsthaft*
Mehr davon

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004 - 20.10.2004

ja ich will auch mehr

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - -Rory-and-Jess-4-ever- - 20.10.2004

find ich echt cool, das du dasin englisch geschriebenhast, aber könntest du vielleicht auf deutsch weiter schreiben? ich bin noch nicht soooo gut in englisch (erst 4 sxchuljahre) und möchte gerne alles verstehen... aber mal als gag genau richtig!!!

cu

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The big fight (NC-17 / FSK 18) - Corinna - 20.10.2004

wieder mal ein genialer teil... und ich muss sagen, das war wirklich ein "teuflischer plan" by lorelai gilmore :lach:
aber luke war auch klasse...

alles in allem soll das heißen:

MEHR!!! (egal ob in deutsch oder englisch...)

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