ahh, update XD
Wieder ein schöner Teil <33
Zitat:Derek was in the song with all his heart and soul… he has performed it a couple of times before… but now… he knew he performed it for one special person…
Aww, ich dachte, ich schmelze <33 Derek singt nur für Mer, so damn sweet
:bett:
Zitat:When you get a song performed by a sexy rock star with damn fine hair, you cry. It’s as simple as that.
Jaa, das stimmt :lach: das ist ganz normal XD
Zitat:“Baby steps? Please, you wear size 8 shoes, Mer.” replied Cristina in her usual sarcasm, yet smirking at Meredith who now gave her the evil eye.
“You are a bad person… a fake person… I think I should fire you!”
Genial, mal wieder typisch Christina (& meredith)
Aber, der Teil ist mal wider wunderschön geschrieben <3, wirklich toll. Besonders die Gefühle bringst du immer ganz ganz toll rüber
ich schmelze gleich dahin <33
oh gott, wenn ich sowas lese, woll, dann.. ahhh .. ich beneide sie so sehr
wieso kannst du so gut schreiben? das is der hammer.. du weisst gar nich, wie ich mich freue, wenn ich sehe, dass es ein update von dir gibt. ^^
&& nu gib was neues her, ich geh schon ein vor langeweile.^^
Woohooo, FB FB FB FB! :freuu:
[Ich freue mich mindestens so sehr über FB wie ihr euch über Updates <3 ]
Ich bin ganz gerührt... es freut mich sooo sehr, dass ihr die Story mögt :o <333 Seriously.
Dankeschön für das Lob bzgl. meines Schreibstils, Dankeschön für das Lob bzgl. der Songauswahl... Dankeschön für einfach alles :herz:
Dankeschöööön!
Meredith was still wondering what goofy guy possibly meant by that when she almost choked on her drink. She gaped at the happenings in front of her… and back to Cristina and Co… and back to the stage… hardly believing what her eyes were seeing.
Derek entered the stage again, followed by seven other men… all members of the bands that had performed before. They wore identical suits, though everyone had another number stuck on it. Moreover, each of them carried a deep red rose with them.
The audience was whispering… some curious… some already excitedly… apparently realizing what was about to come. The moderator cleared his throat noisily to shush them.
“I am very proud to present our objects… oh, beg your pardon… gentlemen of desire for tonight.” He turned around and clapped his hands at them, and the other people in the room joined his applause right away. “Those men were so kind to agree to auction themselves… or, more precisely, auction one evening with them, for a good cause… and now it’s up to you to make the best of it.” He signalled the first of the men to step forward. It was one of the guys form The All American Rejects. Tall. Dark, frizzy hair. One could find him overly attractive… But Meredith barely listened to the moderator who bumped up the bids for the human lot next to him by mentioning his muscular arms, the strong legs blah blah blah.
Her eyes were on Derek. He would be asked to step forward next. Some wild… screechy… horny women would raise up their skinny arms to bid for him… Goofy would do anything to make them offer more and more and more… probably he would mention his magnificent ass… holy, his ass alone would be worth thousands of dollars…
FOCUS, MEREDITH!
She bitterly took a sip of her champagne. The Rejects singer was auctioned for over $15.000 to a hysteric woman some seats next to Meredith who now jumped up and down completely out of control, eagerly gripping the rose out of his hands. He seemed not very happy. Unlike the moderator.
“And now, ladies… a real piece of man candy… Mr Shepherd, may you please come forward.”
Derek did as he was told. Carrying the rose in his hand and his best Prince Charming smile on his face, he now stood next to Goofy. His eyes were wandering from face to face in front of him, stopping at Meredith, raising an eyebrow. Expecting.
What? Does he expect me to rescue him from that bunch of cuckoo broads? Seriously?
“Okay, we start with five thou…-”
“I BID EIGHT!” some female voice shrieked from behind. Meredith wanted to knock her off with her purse.
“TEN!” yelled another one.
Bitch, thought Meredith.
“TWELVE POINT FIVE!” shouted the first again.
I can give you twelve point five kicks in the ass!
“THIRTEEN!” a male voice screamed. Meredith turned around and noticed Stu, ears angry red.
“FIFTEEN!”
You slutty whore.
“SIXTEEN POINT FIVE!”
God, that dress is so yesterday!
Silence.
“No more offers?” she heard Goofy say. “Well, than sold for…-”
“I bid twenty-five…” Meredith heard her voice loud yet calm in the room.
Silence.
Oh my God! Did I just say that loudly?
All eyes were on her… at least so she thought. Yet she only could see Derek’s. He looked almost surprised… yet his eyes were twinkling a silent Thank You at her. He leaned forward and offered her his hand so that she could step onto the stage.
Her legs felt numb and so did her whole body. She expected to collapse on the floor at any second… but then she thought she could not get more embarrassed anyway so she got off her chair, anxious for avoiding eye contact with Cristina, and positioned herself close to Derek. He handed her the red, smelling flower and she took it from his hand with shaky fingers.
“Thank you for purchasing me.” he whispered and she melted away at the loving sound of his voice. Her vocal cords would not allow her to form words so she just gave him a smile. He seemed more than satisfied with that, though.
They stood side by side, on the back of the stage, listening to the rest of the auction in silence. Derek had one arm laid around her waist and she was thankful for this support since her knees were still trembling. She leaned softly against his shoulder… enjoying that act of intimacy for a moment… or two… She could smell his scent again and pink fluffy clouds started to form in her head like cotton candy.
Fortunately, Goofy just sold the last guy to an 80-year-old-grandma and took the microphone from its stand.
“Wow, I’d call that fun!” he shouted with excitement. “A great big thanks to all the donators and the bands, thank you very much. And now, please enjoy the rest of the night at the after show party. Thank you.”
OMG!!!
Dieser Teil war einfach nur <33333333 super XD
Ich dachte mir ja schon vorher, dass jetzt irgendwas in der Art kommt, aber es wurde noch viiiiel viel besser, als ich dachte
Zitat:They stood side by side, on the back of the stage, listening to the rest of the auction in silence. Derek had one arm laid around her waist and she was thankful for this support since her knees were still trembling. She leaned softly against his shoulder… enjoying that act of intimacy for a moment… or two… She could smell his scent again and pink fluffy clouds started to form in her head like cotton candy.
Einer meiner Lieblingsabsätze im neuen Update, ganz toll geschrieben
wunderschön
Generell waren Mer's Gedanken einfach nur Hammer, als Derek versteigert wurde. Ich dachte mir jedesmal, dass jetzt nichts mehr "Neues" kommen kann, aber da lieà deine Kreativität wohl nicht nach :lach: (wenn du verstehst, was ich meine *lol*)
Aber einfach toller Teil <33
Freu mich schon auf den nächsten, will wissen, was Mer & Derek dann noch so machen bzw. anstellen *räusper*
lg, katie
hey!
tut mir leid, dass mein fb jetzt erst kommt, aber am montag bin ich nicht dazu gekommen und gestern war ich den ganzen tag unterwegs, denn ich bin nach berlin geflogen. ich hoffe, dass du mir verzeihen kannst.
der part war wieder mal richtig klasse!
die idee mit der auktion ist ja mal der hammer.
da muss man erstmal drauf kommen. so geil.
Zitat:âI BID EIGHT!â some female voice shrieked from behind. Meredith wanted to knock her off with her purse.
âTEN!â yelled another one.
Bitch, thought Meredith.
âTWELVE POINT FIVE!â shouted the first again.
I can give you twelve point five kicks in the ass!
âTHIRTEEN!â a male voice screamed. Meredith turned around and noticed Stu, ears angry red.
âFIFTEEN!â
You slutty whore.
âSIXTEEN POINT FIVE!â
das ist so klasse! ich konnte es mir so richtig vorstellen.
Zitat:âI bid twenty-fiveâ¦â Meredith heard her voice loud yet calm in the room.
Silence.
Oh my God! Did I just say that loudly?
tja, manchmal sagt man was ohne, dass man es vielleicht wollte. da hat wohl das schicksal seine finger im spiel gehabt.
echt klasse! schreib ganz schnell weiter.
deine ally
hey katie.
melle hat wieder zeit. :]
ich wusste iwie, dass die kerle jetz für einen abend versteigert werden :lach: is ne wirklich originelle idee und so, wie du es geschrieben hast, kams noch geiler rüber :lach: die gedanken waren echt beste.
will weiterlesen
Vielen lieben Dank für das FB :o <3 Wenn ihr wüsstet, wie motivierend das ist...
Ich hoffe, dass euch der nächste [extra lange] Teil auch so gut gefällt.
+ Update +
Meredith felt his warm palm resting between her shoulder blades. The parts of her body where his touch found her naked skin where on fire, and simultaneously, she was shaking from tip to toe. It was one of those moments when your body follows its natural impulses and you do not have control over it. Your brain has 14 billion neutrons firing at a speed of almost 450 miles per hour, every single one telling your hackles to prickle⦠your legs to tremble⦠your throat to dry up.
Hello? Talking over control!
She could sense him standing behind her⦠his face near her earâ¦
Goose bumps.
She felt his hot breath brushing calmly against the soft skin of her neckâ¦
Adrenaline.
He was gently pushing her off the stage now, leading her out of the emptying hall and into the ballroom. There, as well, a huge stage was set up in the front, already monopolized by a Big Band playing some old and some not so old swing songs. The soft chords found their ways to her ears and she absently started swaying her head to the music while they were cutting their way through the crowd, letting the lyrics carry her away to another place far away⦠letting her forget everything around herâ¦
A hostess led them to an empty table, not without giving Meredith an almost envious side glance when she noticed the way he looked at her, touched her. Meredith pretended to not have noticed, and Derek was too lost in her anyway as that he could realize anything that happened around him. All gentleman-y, he pulled the chair out for her which she acknowledged with a warm smile.
âSo,â he said when she had smoothed down her dress to sit down, âyouâre thirsty?â
She touched her throat with her fingers and swallowed. It was still dried, probably because of her previous excitement.
âUhm, yeah.â she answered huskily.
âOkay, Iâll be right back.â
As soon as he disappeared among the crowd, Cristina, Izzie, Addison and an overworked-looking George popped up out of nowhere, dropping into the left chairs and grinning stupidly at Meredith who looked confusedly from one face to another.
âWhat?â
âYou just paid twenty-five grands for a date with McDreamy rock star.â Cristina shook her head both in disbelief and in amusement. âHow low can you go?â
âI⦠It was⦠it was for a good cause!â Meredith tried to explain but apparently, without success. They still looked at her with the same goofyish smiles.
âI think she has a crush on him.â Izzie stated seriously.
âI do not..-â tried Meredith to reply but Addison cut her off.
âMer and Derek sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-Gâ¦â she sang cheerfully and Cristina joined in right away. âFirst comes love, then comes marriage..-â
âSTOP IT!â
âWhy? I think they are very good singersâ¦â Meredith turned her head quickly to the direction of the voice and spotted Derek standing some feet apart, a glass of champagne in each hand and smiling mischievously at them.
Could the situation be more embarrassing?
Cristina sprang up abruptly. âWe should leave you lovebirds alone.â she said with a wink to Meredith who responded with look of reproach, and signalled the others to get up. They were giggling foolishly but got up to their feet and before Cristina turned around, she put both of her thumbs up and mouthed Meredith Good Luck.
Derek nodded them Goodbye and turned his attention back to Meredith.
âHere you go.â He handed her a glass and sat down onto the chair opposite of hers. His blue eyes found her emerald ones again and for a moment, neither of them was able to speak⦠completely overwhelmed with each other.
Meredith felt the familiar thump-thump in her chest again and sipped on her champagne to escape his glance.
Finally, he broke the silence.
âThank you for purchasing me.â he said softly and her blood started boiling in her veins when she lifted her head and saw him smiling at her. Not playfully but⦠full of admiration⦠and the question why on earth he deserved something like this to happenâ¦
She giggled shyly and the sound of it nearly made his chest explode. âI guess this is the most expensive date Iâve ever had.â
âWell,â he tilted his head to the side, âthen you should get something for your money.â He raised up from his chair, offering her his hand. âMay I have the next dance, Ms Grey?â
She bit her lip, torn between sanity and soul. She didnât know if it was right. She didnât know if she would regret it later on. What she knew was what her heart desired right now. And besidesâ¦
Which girl could resist the McDreamy head tilt?
She accepted his hand and he smiled at her in relief, leading her to the dance floor.
Song playing âThe Way You Look Tonightâ by Michael Bublé
Some day, when Iâm awfully low,
When the world is cold,
I will feel a glow just thinking of you
And the way you look tonight.
He took her hand in his and placed the other one on her lower back, feeling her soft skin under his fingertips. She rested her hand some inches below his neck.
Youâre lovely, with your smile so warm
And your cheeks so soft,
There is nothing for me but to love you,
And the way you look tonight.
They started swinging to the music⦠eyes locked⦠getting lost in each other. His fingers started to stroke her back up and down⦠soft⦠like a feather brushing over her skin⦠but it was enough to raise goose bumps on every part of her body.
With each word your tenderness grows,
Tearing my fear apart...
âDid I tell you how stunning you look tonight?â His voice was hoarse and so not helpful to think straightâ¦
âNo⦠but thanks for noticing.â she replied, her hand travelling higher, now feeling the soft curls of his neck between her fingers. His whole body grow tense on her touchâ¦
He tried to study the expression on her face.
âMeri?â he whispered.
She giggled at the sound of her new nickname. âHuh?â
And that laugh that wrinkles your nose,
It touches my foolish heart.
âYouâre not going to run away again, are you?â He looked her straight in the eyes, and she expected him looking somehow sad⦠or hurt⦠but instead his eyes were sparkling with nothing but delight.
Lovely ... never, ever change.
Keep that breathless charm.
Wonât you please arrange it?
âcause I love you ... just the way you look tonight.
âNoâ¦â she grinned at him playfully. âI spent 25 grands for that night, remember?â
He chuckled at her statement and pulled her closer, her face now inches from his⦠âI rememberâ¦â he replied with a wink.
Her flowery scent brushed against his nostrils⦠mesmerized him⦠he took a deep breath⦠and another⦠He felt his body react more and more on herâ¦
âI donât want to push you, Meriâ¦â he whispered, his words brushing against her lips.
âYou donât.â she whispered back, playing with his hair.
With each word your tenderness grows,
Tearing my fear apart...
And that laugh that wrinkles your nose,
It touches my foolish heart.
Lovely ... never, ever change.
Keep that breathless charm.
Wonât you please arrange it?
âcause I love you ... just the way you look tonight.
âYou know, Iâm so sorry for the other nightâ¦â he started. âI was pushing you⦠I didnât plan to push you⦠But I did and Iâm sorry⦠It was my fault and..-â
She crashed her lips on his⦠cutting him off⦠the tension in her bursting like a dam⦠setting off sparkles that could be seen for miles⦠he needed some seconds to realize what was happening⦠she slightly parted her lips and he accepted her sweet invitation⦠inserting his tongue⦠exploring every part of her mouth.
She ran her fingers through his black curls, tugging them, completely forgetting where she was. He gently nibbled on her lower lip, causing her to moan into his mouth.
She suddenly pulled away from him.
âI⦠Iâm sorryâ¦â she stammered, moving some steps backwards. Away from his grip. His lips.
âFor what?â He licked his lips, still numb from that intense kiss.
âI kissed youâ¦â
Instead of answering, he leaned into her, gently grabbing her chin and kissing her softly on the lips. The kiss quickly grew more intense⦠again⦠He tasted her sweet mouth, running his hands through her long tresses⦠His hand travelled further southward⦠resting on her butt. Their tongues were playing with each other⦠lips getting numb and aching.
They broke apart. Panting. Breathless.
âGuess weâre even now.â Derek said, gently brushing her cheek.
Mm, tonight.
What was going on here?
Meredith suddenly felt uncomfortable. She looked around and noticed pairs of eyes looking at her. At them. Some in amusement. Some in complete scepticism.
She felt naked.
And bad.
And guilty for taking advantage of him.
And she seriously had to pee.
juhu, ein neuer part!!!! :freuu:
oh mein gott, der part war so unglaublich gut geschrieben, dass mir schon fast die tränen in den augen stehen. ich meine ich bin eh jemand der sehr nah am wasser gebaut ist und wenn dann jemand noch solche tollen sachen schreibt, dann kann ich gar nicht anders.
Zitat:âMer and Derek sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-Gâ¦â she sang cheerfully and Cristina joined in right away. âFirst comes love, then comes marriage..-â
so typisch.....hätte ich sein können.
Zitat:âMay I have the next dance, Ms Grey?â
oh man, ich könnte glatt dahin schmelzen. dieser mann ist unglaublich.
JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa! sie hat es getan, sie hat ihn geküsst. ein guter fortschritt, aber ich hoffe nur, dass sie nicht gleich wieder 2 schritte zurückgeht, weil sie sich so beobachtet fühlt. sie darf nicht wieder wegrennen.
deine ally
Jajajaaaaa, einer neuer Teil :freu:
Aww, der ist so toll geschrieben, ehrlich! Wirklich wunderschön <33
Ich schmelze ebenfalls, der Teil war einfach
Zitat:“Mer and Derek sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G…” she sang cheerfully and Cristina joined in right away. “First comes love, then comes marriage..-”
“STOP IT!”
“Why? I think they are very good singers…” Meredith turned her head quickly to the direction of the voice and spotted Derek standing some feet apart, a glass of champagne in each hand and smiling mischievously at them.
omg, wie geil war das denn bitte?! :lach: Ne, hat mir gefallen <3 XD
Addi & Christina sollen Textschreiberinnen werden, die haben es drauf :lach:
Und dann Derek mit seinem Kommentar dazu
<33 awww
Meri? huh?
Ne, gefällt mir <3 hihi, er hat schon nen Spitznamen für sie :pfeif:
Und dann der Kuss, omg, das war wirklich toll geschrieben <33
Sch*** Leute, dass die immer gleich zugucken müssen... :koch:
Arme Mer... hoffe aber, dass der Abend noch gut ausgeht *zu katie schiel*
Aber, der Teil war ehrlich ganz ganz toll, ist dir wirklich sehr gut gelungen
:clap:
lg, Katie
Wenn ihr wüsstet wie schön es war, diesen Kuss zu schreiben.......
Hach...
Möglich, dass morgen schon der nächste Teil kommt. Je nachdem, wie viel Zeit die Hausaufgaben erfordern...
1000 Dank für das wundertolle FB! <333 Ihr seid lieb :o