[Cedric]

So... finally... a new chapter!

Ich weiss, es hat laaaaaaaaaaaaaange gedauert, und es ist auch nicht sooo motivierend nur von zwei Personen FBs zu bekommen.... aber nachdem ich Morddrohungen von einer gewissen J*** bekommen habe, habe ich mich beeilt xD


re-FBs:

@Jule: Thx for your review... du wirst mit meinen cliffhangers leben muessen, aber dieses chapter hat (fast) keinen. Und du wirst mehr erfahren...

@Ramona: Thx to you, too....du bekommst viel mehr in diesen Chapter... einige antworten auf deine Fragen. Ich hoffe du liest weiter!


Dieses Chap is fuer euch beide!



[FONT=&quot]Chapter 14 Just like Tom and Meg[/FONT]



[FONT=&quot]So while I’m turning in my sheets, and once again I cannot sleep. Walk out the door and up the street, I got the stars beneath my feet. Remember rights that I did wrong. So here I go. [/FONT]


[FONT=&quot]Aimlessly, Luke wandered around in the dark. He had left the hotel, where he stayed together with Rory for the night, hours ago. Rory had been dead asleep, happy, they finally found her mother but Luke hadn’t been able to find any sleep at all. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It was almost 3 o’clock in the morning now and Luke found himself standing in front of the hospital. He would not be allowed to see her, he knew that, but somehow he didn’t care. He entered Virginia Mason almost soundlessly and without being noticed by any of the nurses, he was standing in front of room 1408. Silently, he stepped inside. There, too, it was pitch-black and totally silent. He decided to go away again. He didn’t want to wake her up. But as he was about to close the door, he heard Lorelai moan. He stepped closer to her then he could hear her mumble in her sleep.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Don’t. Please, don’t. Luke… I need you. Don’t. It’s not worth it. Come down please. Luke! No!”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Carefully, Luke put on hand on Lorelai’s shoulder and whispered,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“It’s okay. I’m here, hon.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai turned around, eyes wide open.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“What’s happening, Luke? You just jumped…”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Shh… calm down. It was just a nightmare.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai sat up and sighed relieved. Then a few moments silence.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“What are you doing here?” she asked softly.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I couldn’t sleep, you know. Too many thoughts were swirling around my head.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“So, you’re pulling a Sam Baldwin here?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]As Luke looked irritated, Lorelai added,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“You know… Tom Hanks,” she slightly grinned and switched on the lights.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Ah, I got that… Sleepless in Seattle,” he replied. “Yeah, I suppose so.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]A few moments passed in silence, they were both staring at each other. Luke felt like he was flying somehow, he was able to see her again, touch her again, listen to her inappropriate jokes again. But still, something bugged him. It was the fact that he didn’t know yet why she had left him eight months ago. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]He took a deep breath and then asked the question. It was the question, which wanted to be asked for ages. It was the question which was hanging over Luke’s head since he had found her. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Lorelai… you didn’t leave because of the… of the baby… did you?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Lorelai didn’t answer immediately instead she took Luke’s hand and squeezed it softly. Luke, who had been staring at a point right above Lorelai’s head, looked down into her eyes. He could see them shimmering. Right at this moment, Luke was so relieved to be able to look into those blue eyes that he almost missed the beginning of Lorelai’s answer.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“No, Luke, I didn’t leave because of the baby. I always wanted kids with you, you know that. I really would have been the happiest person in the world… but… I couldn’t be happy. There was something that made it impossible for me to anticipate the baby, to feel happy that we’d finally reproduce. One week after I discovered that I was pregnant, I went to the doctor’s. Just to be sure, I really was. I didn’t want to disappoint you, if it wasn’t true, by telling you. So I went there…”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
Lorelai broke off. Tears were streaming down her cheeks now. Luke felt the strong urge to wipe them away, but somehow he wasn’t able to lift his hand. So he just sat there immobile and stared at her. Then, after what seemed like hours to him, Lorelai continued.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Flashback[/FONT]


[FONT=&quot]“Mrs. Danes?” [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai stood up with a jolly sensation in her stomach and got out of the waiting-room into the doctor’s office. She looked around. There were so many pictures of moms and dads with a little baby in their arms that Lorelai’s excitement rose even more. She felt sure that she was pregnant. She had it in her guts. She almost could see Luke’s shining face when she would tell him.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Mrs. Danes?” [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]The doctor’s voice brought her back to the present. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Yeah?” she asked excited. “I am pregnant, aren’t I?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Dr. Sanders sat down behind his bureau and slightly nodded.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Yes, you are.”
Lorelai sprang up, walked over to him and hugged him.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Oh my god, you’re my favorite person in the world right now,” she beamed.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]She felt like she was flying, her feet weren’t even touching ground anymore. She was so glad like she had never been before.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]But then, she got a glimpse of the Dr. Sanders face and an uneasy feeling rose inside of her. Slowly, she sat down again, staring at her doctor.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“What’s… what’s wrong?” she stammered.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Mrs. Danes… I’m so sorry to tell you this. I mean you’re supposed to be happy.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Why… is something wrong with the baby?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai had become stiff, her eyes had changed into a fearful black and her hands were suddenly sweating.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“The baby is fine, Lorelai,” he began. “But you are sick. I’m sorry to tell you, but you have cancer.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Bang! There it was. The doctor’s words echoed in Lorelai’s head like a gunshot.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Cancer. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She had cancer. Shock frozen she sat there, staring at his pitiful face. Everything around her became blurry. One moment she had been the happiest person in the world and another moment she was crushed. She didn’t know what to say or what to do next. She just kept on sitting there, unable to think straight.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Where is it?” she finally managed to ask.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“It’s breast cancer. We did some research and we’re lucky. We caught it at an early stage. Of course you have to go to a specialist but your survival chances are probably very high.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai subtly nodded.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“What about the baby? Can I still…?” she wasn’t able to finish her sentence because now, tears started to roll down her cheeks.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Well,” he began. “That’s the thing. You’ll need chemotherapy. As you probably know this is very aggressive and the baby will either die or be disabled. I’m so sorry.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Lorelai said nothing. She couldn’t believe that she was actually sitting there. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]It had to be a silly joke. She almost felt sure that in any time soon, Ashton Kutcher would show up behind the desk and scream “You’ve been Punk’d!” [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]But none of that did happen.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Mrs. Danes? Are you listening to me?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]The doctor’s voice brought her back to reality.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“There has to be an alternative,” she desperately said. “What if I won’t do the chemotherapy? What if I keep the baby and start the treatment after it’s born?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Softly, Dr. Sanders stood up and laid one hand upon Lorelai’s shoulder.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“It will be too late then. It’s seems unfair to say it like that… but it’s either your life, or the baby’s life. You don’t have to decide immediately. Go home for now. Talk to your husband, to your daughter or anybody else, who’s important to you. You’ve got a tough decision to make.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Flashback[/FONT]


[FONT=&quot]As Lorelai stopped talking, Luke could feel his own tears dripping onto his hand. He hadn’t been aware that he was crying. He looked down at his hand, which was still squeezed by Lorelai’s now shaky one. He wasn’t able to say anything. His wife had cancer. It felt like his world swished around him. Suddenly all the things became clearer. After a few more minutes in silence, only interrupted by Lorelai’s occasional sobs, he asked,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Why didn’t you go home? Why didn’t you tell me… us? Why did you…?”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“I did go home, Luke. I really wanted to tell you. But as I saw you that day… as I saw your face… I just couldn’t… it was too hard. So I pretended that nothing was wrong. I remember we ate pizzas and marshmallows that night…”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“It was the night before you threw up, wasn’t it? It was the night before you asked, if I loved you… It was the night before you left,” Luke said very silently but his voice was surprisingly steady, besides his still rolling tears. [/FONT]

[jeany_loverin]

nice... now you have me crying... thanks very much *grabs a tissue and blows her nose*
I somehow had the feeling that it might me cancer but I was hoping it wouldn't be *sniff*
and either the baby's life or Lorelai's life... that's cruel *sniffs even more*

I have no idea how you're gonna get yourself out of this, buddy, but you're gonna get even more Morddrohungen (XD) if you do what you told me you were thinking about doing. (does that sentence sound confusing to you, too?)

ich geh jetzt nen paar LL icons basteln *pout*

hugs and love,
jule

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Yeah, neues Chap. *freu*
Ich war am lesen und dachte so, "Yippy, bald erfahre ich wieso Lorelai weggegangen ist...!" Und dann "I’m sorry to tell you, but you have cancer". Vielen Dank, jetzt ist meine ganze Freude weg!!!
Das Kapitel hat mir wieder sehr gut gefallen. Macht nichts, dass es so lange gedauert hat. Ich verstehe dass es etwas demotivierend ist, wenn man nur von 2 FB bekommt! Bin aber trotzdem froh, dass du weiterschreibst. Lass dir Zeit, auch wenn Jule dir droht. Ich komme und verteidige dich!!

Glg Ramona

[Cedric]

so, ein neues chap...

noch re-FBs:
@Julie: Thx again. and I won't do what I told you I was thinking about (even more confused now?)...
@Ramona: Thx for reading. Ich hoffe du liest weiter... und es wird einige neue sachen geben in diesem Chap...

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This chapter is for Jule, just to say thank you.

[/SIZE] [FONT=&quot]Chapter 15 The magic moment all over again[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Sometimes you walk by the good ones, ‘cause you’re trying too hard to see them. Sometimes you don’t find the right lines, ‘cause you’re trying too hard to hear them. You want an all time love to find you. But you already found me.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Slowly, Lorelai stood up, and ran over Luke’s cheek with her fingers. It hit her like a lightning. She couldn’t believe that she really saw him again, touched him again. And to her great relief, he didn’t back away from her. He obviously still cared about her. And that fact meant the world to Lorelai. Maybe he would actually forgive her.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Finally, Luke looked up, raised his hand and took Lorelai’s. For the first time in months, he was able to be alone with her, talk to her, let alone see her. But he wasn’t feeling happy at all. He was horrified that Lorelai had cancer, he was terrified what would happen next. He even was afraid of the baby. Would they be able to care about it, with all the troubles on their minds? Luke stopped thinking. He just realized something. He always had been thinking about that them, without knowing whether were was a them.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]For the first time, he looked into her eyes. Besides everything that had changed, they still were the same. Blue, bright, shiny. They still had the ability to make him amazed and he could feel in his guts that they were telling him I love you.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Lorelai… why… I mean… you could have told me… you should have told me… That’s what I’m here for, you know. That’s what husbands do. Be there for their wives. But you didn’t even give me the chance to be there for you. You just… didn’t,” Luke broke off, incapable of speaking further. He just couldn’t understand it.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“Luke, I can’t tell you how sorry I am. All the time I just could think of you. And every day I thought about going back, but at the same time, I knew you would never forgive me. I mean, I don’t even forgive myself for leaving you. But, Luke, you have to understand…” Now Lorelai’s eyes, too, filled with tears. Luke still felt unable to move an inch. He almost held his breath, until Lorelai continued speaking.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I actually went home one night. I already had entered our bedroom. But as I saw you sleeping there, my heart broke into pieces. I couldn’t wake you. I wanted to… but I didn’t… so I turned around and left again.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Wait,” Luke interrupted her, “You’ve been there? When… I mean…”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]He broke off. A dream came back to his mind. The dream that made him wake up. The smell of her perfume…[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
“It was in April, right?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai subtly nodded. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Oh, my god. You’ve been there? I didn’t realize. I thought it was just a silly dream. I’m so stupid.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“No, Luke, you’re not. I’m the stupid one here. I should have, I should have…”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]
Lorelai now, completely burst into tears. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Finally Luke found himself able to move. He reached out his arm and gave her a hug. He felt her hands gripping his back hard. He could smell her hair. It was the most wonderful scent he ever smelled. He couldn’t tell how long they had been sitting there, just feeling each other, feeling their warmth, feeling their love. It was like nothing ever happened. It was like they were standing in the threshold again, sharing their first kiss. It was like that magic moment all over again.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Finally, Lorelai let go off him, wiped away her tears, took a deep breath and said,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I don’t know what to say, Luke. Except that I am so sorry. I can’t say how sorry I am. I’d understand if you never forgive me. I’d understand if you just leave. I would. Really.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Luke subtly shook his head. As he looked at her at that moment, he just felt her love. And he felt his all time love towards her.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Slowly and very silent, he said,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Just tell me one thing, Lorelai. Why didn’t you tell me? You knew I’d be there for you. You could have told me.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I know…” Lorelai started, barely hearable. “I know that you would always be there. But I couldn’t let you make the choice. I freaked, I didn’t know how to tell you. It was either me or the baby. I couldn’t stand it to take away your dreams. You always wanted a kid, and if I did the chemotherapy, there wouldn’t be one. But if I didn’t do it, there would be no me anymore… Either way, I would have disappointed you. So I just took off to make things easier. For me… and for you.” [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Luke gulped. All this time, he had been angry at her. Angry at her because she left, because she never gave him a chance. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]But now he was sitting there, realizing that she did everything just for him. It was just Lorelai. His Lorelai, who always had been the one, thinking that it was all her fault. Inside of him rose a strange feeling. First he couldn’t identify what it was but then he suddenly knew it. He was able to understand. For the first time in eight months, he was able to understand her. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And he was able to forgive her.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]He cleared his throat,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Lorelai, you didn’t disappoint me. It’s not your fault you have cancer. It’s nobody’s fault. You’re sick and this has nothing to do with our relationship… I’ll be there for you.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]He could feel tears streaming down his cheeks, but he didn’t care. He was just so happy to see her, to feel her and to understand her. He was just happy.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Lorelai looked up. A glimmer of hope was mirrored on her face. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Does this mean you forgive me, Luke?” she almost whispered.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Yes Lorelai, I do,” Luke nodded.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]A smile appeared on Lorelai’s face, although she was still crying terribly.
“I can’t tell you how happy I am now. I… I… I love you.”
“Oh, you have no idea…” Luke said before he leant forward to give her another hug.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“It’s not gonna be easy…” she said, when they finally broke apart.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I know that, Lorelai,” Luke answered softly. “But we are gonna make it through. Believe me. We’ll make it through.”[/FONT]

[jeany_loverin]

[SIZE=2] This chapter is for Jule, just to say thank you.[/SIZE]

:knuddel:

*schnüff*
He's forgiving her *sniff*
I don't know what to say...
This chapter was great. I love it how you always know how to describe their feelings so well... it gets to me every time...

And I'm so so so so happy that you're not gonna do what you told me you were thinking about doing :laugh:

love :herz:
Jule

P.S.: sorry dass das FB so kurz ist aber ich bekommm orgen besuch und ich muss diese müllabfuhr von Wohnung hier erstmal ne runde aufräumen XD

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heey!

'tschuldigung, dass ich erst jetzt FB gebe. Aber ich hatte nie genung Zeit um dir zu schreiben.

Sometimes you walk by the good ones, ‘cause you’re trying too hard to see them. Sometimes you don’t find the right lines, ‘cause you’re trying too hard to hear them. You want an all time love to find you. But you already found me.

Ich wollte dir schon seit längerem einmal sagen, dass ich deine Anfangszitate einfach toll finde. Mir geht es immer so, dass ich meist den Zusammenhang nicht verstehe, sobald ich jedoch das Chapter gelesen habe, klärt sich das auf.

“It was in April, right?”
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai subtly nodded. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Oh, my god. You’ve been there? I didn’t realize. I thought it was just a silly dream. I’m so stupid.”[/FONT]
“No, Luke, you’re not. I’m the stupid one here. I should have, I should have…”

Diese Stelle finde ich genial. Ich weiss eigentlich auch nicht genau wieso, it's a gut feeling

Lorelai now, completely burst into tears.
[FONT=&quot]Finally Luke found himself able to move. He reached out his arm and gave her a hug. He felt her hands gripping his back hard. He could smell her hair. It was the most wonderful scent he ever smelled. He couldn’t tell how long they had been sitting there, just feeling each other, feeling their warmth, feeling their love. It was like nothing ever happened. It was like they were standing in the threshold again, sharing their first kiss. It was like that magic moment all over again.[/FONT]

Endlich können sie sich wieder in die Arme schliessen.... Ich freu mich so für die beiden. Das hast du super geschrieben! Wie schon (manchmal) erwähnt, liebe ich deine Schreibstil.

“I know that, Lorelai,” Luke answered softly. “But WE are gonna make it through. Believe me. WE’ll make it through.”

Dieses Wort erklärt schon fast alles. Sie sind wieder zusammen. Sie gehen durch dick & dünn!! *freudentanz*

Freu mich aufs nächste Kapitel....!

Glg
Ramona

[Cedric]

hey,
ein neues chapter...
es ist eigentlich schon seit Weihnachten fertig, aber es gefiel mir nie. Ich habe es 1000 Mal geaendert und bin am Schluss wieder zur ersten Variante zurueck gekommen... It's totally cheesy und ein bisschen kurz, aber ich wusste nicht, wie ich es sonst schreiben sollte...

re-FBs:
@Jules: Wie immer danke und sorry fuer die lange Zeit ohne Updates xD
@Ramona: Danke dir! Die Anfangszitate sind meistens Quotes aus Songs, und ich versuche sie dann immer so abzuaendern, dass sie passen... ich hoffe du liest weiter....


[FONT=&quot]Chapter 16 Donna Reed, Judy and a unit[/FONT]



[FONT=&quot]Everybody's looking for that something, one thing that makes it all complete. You find it in the strangest places, places you never knew it could be. Well, for me it's waking up beside you, to watch the sunrise on your face to know that I can say I love you in any given time or space.[/FONT]


[FONT=&quot]Two days later Luke got a phone call in the middle of the night. Slowly, he reached out his hand and took the phone.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Hello?” he asked sleepily.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Mr. Danes? This is Carole. Just wanted to tell you, your wife… or girlfriend… I’m sorry, I never know that… Anyway, she’s in labor and wants you there.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]Suddenly, Luke was wide awake. He jumped out of bed, dressed and half an hour later, he faced Virginia Mason. But before he entered, he took a deep breath. He felt like he was flying, he soon would hold his own baby in his hands. He always wanted one. He just hoped that the kid would just be like his mother. Gorgeous, sweet, charming and smart. But above all, he wished, it would be healthy.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Luke’s heart became heavier. He had talked to Lorelai’s doctors the previous days and they all agreed that Lorelai’s survival chances were pretty slim. But there was a chance, if they’d start the chemo right after the child was born. And if she’d really fight like hell, she might survive. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]That ‘might’ really freaked Luke out. He didn’t know how he would survive, if Lorelai wouldn’t make it through. He had been living just a half-life the last eight months and he didn’t know if he could live one of those again. He had to, he knew that, but he just couldn’t see a way how he should raise this kid alone.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Luke, again, took a deep breath and then entered the hospital. Lorelai already was in the second hour of labor and it seemed like it would be a fast birth. The child obviously couldn’t wait to see the world. So after another hour, with a swearing Lorelai, a Lorelai who cried for Donna Reed, which confused Luke slightly, but then he realized that it would be weirder, if she would cry for her own mother, he could hear Dr. Sutherland say,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I can see the head.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]And a few moments later, “Congratulations, you guys. It’s a girl.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]The nurses wrapped the small human being into towels and laid the little girl into Lorelai’s arms. As Luke saw the two of them, he was close to tears. Only a week ago, he thought that he’d never see his wife again and now, he was looking at her caring face and she held her daughter – their daughter in her hands.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]The girl had dark brown hair, Lorelai’s nose and blue eyes, heavenly blue eyes, Luke thought.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“What are you smiling at?” [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai’s voice diverted his thoughts. “Don’t you wanna hold her?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Course, I do,” he said and carefully took her.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]He sat down on Lorelai’s bed and felt himself immediately fall in love with her. [/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Isn’t she just beautiful?” he asked.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Yeah, you’re right.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]He didn’t know how long he had been sitting there, looking at his daughter. Nothing was important anymore. It was just him, Lorelai and the baby. There was no Seattle, no hospital, no cancer. Just joy and happiness. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“So, any thoughts about the name?” he heard Lorelai’s voice.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Mhm, I don’t know. What’s your favorite?” he asked.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Yeah, well, the first name is Lorelai. That’s clear… oh no, you can’t say no to me, Luke,” she pouted as she saw the startled look on her husband’s face.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Okay, okay,” he sighed. “I can’t compete with you anyway. Lorelai it is.”
“Great.”[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]She sat up and kissed him. As their lips touched, Luke’s stomach felt all weird. It was their first kiss in eight months. And right at that moment, Luke could feel that he would love her forever, if she might die the next day or in 80 years. He still would love her. [/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“It’s your pick,” Lorelai said, when they finally broke apart, smiling.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“What?”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“The second name. Her name.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Oh, okay. How about Judy? My mom’s name was Judith…” Luke suggested.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“I think that’s a wonderful idea, honey,” Lorelai answered and kissed again.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]“You know, we should call Rory. She’s probably back at Yale by now.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]A few moments passed in silence, while Luke was dialing Rory’s number, then he said,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Hey Rory, it’s me… No, we’re fine, great actually. D’you mind, if I introduce you to someone? This is Lorelai Judy Gilmore-Danes.”
He turned the cell-phone to little Judy’s face and the girl immediately began to cry. Luke could hear Rory laugh on the other end.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Well, after all, she’s Mom’s kid. She clearly has her genes.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]“Yeah, I guess so.”[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]Lorelai and Luke, too, laughed now, while they tried to console their baby.
Luke looked at Lorelai and saw his feelings mirrored in her face. He was just thankful to see the love of his life again, exited about their child and happy that the three of them were finally a unit. [/FONT]

[jeany_loverin]

HA, Ceddy is back :freu:

And the chapter was really short but soooooo cute
I don't reall know what to say... I loved it...
An YAY it's a girl :freu: I like the name... another Lorelai :laugh:

I really wanna know how this is going to continue now... with Lorelai's chemo and everything...

continue soon

love :herz:
Jule

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Hi Ced,

Es tut mir sehr sehr sehr Leid! Ich glaube, dass ich das letzte Kapitel erst eben zum ersten Mal gelesen habe!! Und du hast das Kapitel bereits im Januar on gestellt!! Ich schähme mich in Grund und Boden....!! Sorry!! Das war sicher enttäuschend für dich, nur ein FB zu bekommen (nicht dass ein Zweites viel besser wäre)!!!

Everybody's looking for that something, one thing that makes it all complete. You find it in the strangest places, places you never knew it could be. Well, for me it's waking up beside you, to watch the sunrise on your face to know that I can say I love you in any given time or space.

ich muss nichts mehr dazu sagen!!

So after another hour, with a swearing Lorelai, a Lorelai who cried for Donna Reed, which confused Luke slightly, but then he realized that it would be weirder, if she would cry for her own mother,...

Das Kapitel ist zwar sehr kurz, aber doch gibt es so viele schöne Momente, dass ich gar nicht weiss, wo ziteren zu beginnen: aber diese Stelle!! Ich kann mir Lorelai genau vorstellen!

und dann... Es ist ein Mädchen! Super! Das find ich toll!

“Okay, okay,” he sighed. “I can’t compete with you anyway. Lorelai it is.”

--> Konnte er das jemals? Und in dieser Situation erst recht nicht :pfeif:

Luke looked at Lorelai and saw his feelings mirrored in her face. He was just thankful to see the love of his life again, exited about their child and happy that the three of them were finally a unit.

Yaya!! Endlich wieder zusammen!!

Wie schon viele Male erwähnt, und ich wiederhole es gerne, dein Schreibstil ist einfach

Ich hoffe du verzeihst mir noch einmal!!!
Freue mich auf das nächste Kapitel

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