19.02.2005, 03:16
hey! also erstmal vieeeelen dank fuer all das liebe FB!! das hat mich wirklich wahnsinnig gefreut!
nachdem mir jetzt einige gesagt haben, dass ich auf englisch weiterschreiben sollte, hab ich das naechste kapitel auf englisch geschrieben. die FF bleibt von jetzt an englisch, da ich mich irgendwie besser ausdruecken kann und mir das schreiben leichter faellt.
lol... und wenns englisch ist fuehl ich mich auch irgendwie etwas origineller, als bei meinem plumpen deutsch. :lach:
also ich hoffe mal niemand hat was dagegen!
so, hier ist das neue kapitel! ich hoffe es ist gut geworden. natuerlich bin ich wieder ueber weiteres Feedback und Kritik froh!
Chapter 2:
The next morning Rory woke up and slowly walked toward the Kitchen. It was Monday and Rory didnât feel like going to school at all. Usually she didnât mind. She has always been one of the students that liked going to school and didnât think classes were boring. But today she felt different⦠she would have liked to just stay in bed! She decided to pour herself a cup of fresh coffee and dropped herself right on a kitchenchair.
âGood morning sweetheart!â Rory heard from behind.
âOhh.. Hey mom! What are you doing up so early?â Rory asked surprisingly. Usually her mother wasnât really the get-up-early-in-the-morning type of person. And especially wasnât that cheerful at 6.30 on a Monday morning.
âWell, I had to go to the Inn today, at 5 oâclockâ¦. To do some special business! I drank like 5 liters of coffee. So I guess Iâm a little hyper in the moment. Isnât it a beautiful day outside!!?â Lorelai said, too loud and happy for Rory.
âMom please⦠stop being so overly happy!â
âHey! Donât try to take away my good mood, Grumpy!! Iâve got the rest of the day off now and Iâm trying to enjoy it!â
âThatâs wonderful Momâ¦â
âHey, whatâs up with you, Grumpy!?â Lorelai asked. Rory usually only acted like that, when something was really bothering her. âAre you having problems with Dean?â
âNo! Itâs nothingâ¦â Rory tried to force a smile and said: âGrumpy? Is that my new Nickname or what?!â
âWell, thatâs all up to you! Not if you start cheering up now!â Lorelai answered with a smile on her face.
âAll right fine⦠I have to go catch the bus for school now anyways. Not everyone is as lucky as you and has a whole day off!â Rory started getting up.
âOk, hun. See you laterâ.
An hour later, Rory arrived at Chilton High School. But it didnât feel as usually⦠something was different. Something was missing. The hallway seemed so dull, lifeless and boring. Rory headed towards the classroom. She still had this uncomfortable feeling⦠the one she got, when she forgot or lost something she needed. She hadnât felt this uncomfortable in a classroom for quite a while. Everything just seemed sooâ¦.boring!
The whole morning Rory had problems concentrating on school work and just passed out, when the teachers were talking. Everything just seemed so pointless. That wasnât like her⦠Rory Gilmore usually was the most enthusiastic and attentive student in class. The whole thing confused her. Rory thought about, why she felt this way. It couldnât possibly be about Tristan?â¦. Could it? But why? No. She could not stand him, so it had to be something else. But during lunch she didnât feel any better. She swept off with her thoughts, when talking to Paris and couldnât eat anything. She was just waiting for someone to yell âHey Maryâ across the cafeteria and look at her with this adorable grin. Rory realized that it really was Tristan, whom she missed! She missed his annoying comments and him teasing and flirting with her. She simply missed him. Rory started to feel sad, that Tristan left so suddenly. After she had kissed him at Madelineâs party about a half a year ago, she started looking at him in a different way. He could be so nice, if he wanted to. She felt depressed, not being able to have the chance anymore, to talk to him and maybe even become friends with him. He was gone for goodâ¦
After lunch Rory slowly headed toward her locker and got out some things she needed! She was reaching for her black binder, when suddenly she heard this familiar voice behind herâ¦
âHey Mary!â
NO!! it couldnât beâ¦. Was she going crazy and starting to hallucinate?! But instead of thinking about it too long, she just turned around and stared right into the small green eyes of⦠Tristan DuGrey!
nachdem mir jetzt einige gesagt haben, dass ich auf englisch weiterschreiben sollte, hab ich das naechste kapitel auf englisch geschrieben. die FF bleibt von jetzt an englisch, da ich mich irgendwie besser ausdruecken kann und mir das schreiben leichter faellt.
lol... und wenns englisch ist fuehl ich mich auch irgendwie etwas origineller, als bei meinem plumpen deutsch. :lach:
also ich hoffe mal niemand hat was dagegen!
so, hier ist das neue kapitel! ich hoffe es ist gut geworden. natuerlich bin ich wieder ueber weiteres Feedback und Kritik froh!
Chapter 2:
The next morning Rory woke up and slowly walked toward the Kitchen. It was Monday and Rory didnât feel like going to school at all. Usually she didnât mind. She has always been one of the students that liked going to school and didnât think classes were boring. But today she felt different⦠she would have liked to just stay in bed! She decided to pour herself a cup of fresh coffee and dropped herself right on a kitchenchair.
âGood morning sweetheart!â Rory heard from behind.
âOhh.. Hey mom! What are you doing up so early?â Rory asked surprisingly. Usually her mother wasnât really the get-up-early-in-the-morning type of person. And especially wasnât that cheerful at 6.30 on a Monday morning.
âWell, I had to go to the Inn today, at 5 oâclockâ¦. To do some special business! I drank like 5 liters of coffee. So I guess Iâm a little hyper in the moment. Isnât it a beautiful day outside!!?â Lorelai said, too loud and happy for Rory.
âMom please⦠stop being so overly happy!â
âHey! Donât try to take away my good mood, Grumpy!! Iâve got the rest of the day off now and Iâm trying to enjoy it!â
âThatâs wonderful Momâ¦â
âHey, whatâs up with you, Grumpy!?â Lorelai asked. Rory usually only acted like that, when something was really bothering her. âAre you having problems with Dean?â
âNo! Itâs nothingâ¦â Rory tried to force a smile and said: âGrumpy? Is that my new Nickname or what?!â
âWell, thatâs all up to you! Not if you start cheering up now!â Lorelai answered with a smile on her face.
âAll right fine⦠I have to go catch the bus for school now anyways. Not everyone is as lucky as you and has a whole day off!â Rory started getting up.
âOk, hun. See you laterâ.
An hour later, Rory arrived at Chilton High School. But it didnât feel as usually⦠something was different. Something was missing. The hallway seemed so dull, lifeless and boring. Rory headed towards the classroom. She still had this uncomfortable feeling⦠the one she got, when she forgot or lost something she needed. She hadnât felt this uncomfortable in a classroom for quite a while. Everything just seemed sooâ¦.boring!
The whole morning Rory had problems concentrating on school work and just passed out, when the teachers were talking. Everything just seemed so pointless. That wasnât like her⦠Rory Gilmore usually was the most enthusiastic and attentive student in class. The whole thing confused her. Rory thought about, why she felt this way. It couldnât possibly be about Tristan?â¦. Could it? But why? No. She could not stand him, so it had to be something else. But during lunch she didnât feel any better. She swept off with her thoughts, when talking to Paris and couldnât eat anything. She was just waiting for someone to yell âHey Maryâ across the cafeteria and look at her with this adorable grin. Rory realized that it really was Tristan, whom she missed! She missed his annoying comments and him teasing and flirting with her. She simply missed him. Rory started to feel sad, that Tristan left so suddenly. After she had kissed him at Madelineâs party about a half a year ago, she started looking at him in a different way. He could be so nice, if he wanted to. She felt depressed, not being able to have the chance anymore, to talk to him and maybe even become friends with him. He was gone for goodâ¦
After lunch Rory slowly headed toward her locker and got out some things she needed! She was reaching for her black binder, when suddenly she heard this familiar voice behind herâ¦
âHey Mary!â
NO!! it couldnât beâ¦. Was she going crazy and starting to hallucinate?! But instead of thinking about it too long, she just turned around and stared right into the small green eyes of⦠Tristan DuGrey!
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