What's when the love never ending? (JJ&Lit.)

What's when the love never ending? (JJ&Lit.)

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09.04.2005, 00:04

JamieA schrieb:1. leg dir bitte einen beta reader zu. Der Text wimmelt nur so von rechtschreibfehlern....
2. Könntest du vllt bei der wörtlichen Rede eine neue Zeile anfangen wenn die Person wechselt? dann würde es viiiiiiieeeeeel übersichtlicher werden...
3.Ach ja noch was, was mich schrecklich erschreckt hat, als ich s gelesen habe.... Schreib Logan bitte bitte bitte mit "a"....
4.Inhaltlich war er ok.

Hey deine FF ist wirklich gut aber JamieA hat wirklich recht mit den oben genannten dingen.
Aber sonst werde ich aufjedenfall dabei bleiben und schauen wies weiter geht1
Ciao Nani****

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