1. GilmoreGirls.de - Community in Deutschland
  2. Gilmore GirlsFanworks & Co.
  3. Fanfiction
  4. Abgebrochene FanFictions

Linearer Modus
she thought it was too late
23 Zwerge
Posting Freak
*****
Beiträge: 4.437
Themen: 6
Registriert seit: 22.07.2005
#45

10.08.2005, 22:09
das hört sich jetzt bestimmt voll böse an, aber irgendwas fehlt in deiner ff, das gewisse extra.ich weiß leider nich genau was es ist(vielleicht mag ich deinen schreibstil auch nicht- was nicht böse gemeint is, sondern nur, dass man ja nicht jede art des schreibens leiden kann)ich weiß es leider selbst nicht genau. aber ich möchte nicht behaupten, dass deine ff schlecht oder so ist. schreib einfach weiter, vielleicht ändert sich deine art des schreibens auch mal. =)
Hier könnte Ihre Werbung stehen. [url=http://ema.mtv.de/vote/][/url]
Suchen
« Ein Thema zurück | Ein Thema vor »


Nachrichten in diesem Thema
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 10.07.2005, 18:24
she thought it was too late - von JamieA - 10.07.2005, 19:18
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 10.07.2005, 19:41
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 10.07.2005, 20:32
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 10.07.2005, 20:35
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 10.07.2005, 20:45
she thought it was too late - von GilmoreFanatic - 10.07.2005, 21:05
she thought it was too late - von XxPruexX - 10.07.2005, 21:24
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 10.07.2005, 22:20
she thought it was too late - von plaudertasche - 10.07.2005, 22:40
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 10.07.2005, 22:46
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.07.2005, 12:05
she thought it was too late - von BuffyAnne - 12.07.2005, 12:12
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.07.2005, 12:43
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 12.07.2005, 15:38
she thought it was too late - von -Rory gILMORE- - 12.07.2005, 17:01
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 12.07.2005, 18:20
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.07.2005, 19:17
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.07.2005, 20:58
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 12.07.2005, 23:33
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 13.07.2005, 14:53
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 13.07.2005, 21:38
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 13.07.2005, 21:49
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 15.07.2005, 20:35
she thought it was too late - von Princetongirl - 15.07.2005, 20:51
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 16.07.2005, 00:09
she thought it was too late - von jutschi - 16.07.2005, 08:39
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 16.07.2005, 11:40
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 16.07.2005, 22:46
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 19.07.2005, 16:34
she thought it was too late - von jutschi - 19.07.2005, 18:12
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 19.07.2005, 19:22
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 20.07.2005, 14:56
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 21.07.2005, 00:39
she thought it was too late - von jutschi - 29.07.2005, 15:21
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 29.07.2005, 16:51
she thought it was too late - von Princetongirl - 29.07.2005, 17:33
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 07.08.2005, 23:10
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 10.08.2005, 19:20
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 10.08.2005, 19:24
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 10.08.2005, 19:42
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 10.08.2005, 21:00
she thought it was too late - von jutschi - 10.08.2005, 21:42
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 10.08.2005, 22:09
she thought it was too late - von 23 Zwerge - 10.08.2005, 22:09
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 10.08.2005, 23:11
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 11.08.2005, 16:45
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 11.08.2005, 19:17
she thought it was too late - von marry-b - 11.08.2005, 20:08
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 11.08.2005, 20:11
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 11.08.2005, 20:55
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 11.08.2005, 22:05
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 12.08.2005, 01:02
she thought it was too late - von jutschi - 12.08.2005, 08:27
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 12.08.2005, 09:35
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 12.08.2005, 14:09
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 12.08.2005, 18:19
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.08.2005, 18:24
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.08.2005, 20:51
she thought it was too late - von marry-b - 12.08.2005, 20:56
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 12.08.2005, 21:01
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 12.08.2005, 21:20
she thought it was too late - von Jule13 - 12.08.2005, 21:55
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 13.08.2005, 15:22
she thought it was too late - von Daniela05 - 14.08.2005, 02:15
she thought it was too late - von Valpuri - 14.08.2005, 12:42
she thought it was too late - von Lava - 14.08.2005, 13:30
she thought it was too late - von ***jojo*** - 04.09.2005, 20:48
she thought it was too late - von Nani**** - 04.09.2005, 21:41
she thought it was too late - von fantasticGG - 09.04.2006, 19:51

Gehe zu:


Benutzer, die gerade dieses Thema anschauen: 1 Gast/Gäste
  1. GilmoreGirls.de - Community in Deutschland
  2. Gilmore GirlsFanworks & Co.
  3. Fanfiction
  4. Abgebrochene FanFictions