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she thought it was too late
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#49

11.08.2005, 20:08
ich hab gerade deine ff am stück durchgelesen, und ich muss sagen, von teil zu teil hat sie mir besser gefallen.
allerdings muss ich 23 zwerge recht geben, ich finde auch ein bischen dass da irgendwas fehlt, ich glaube, es sind die gefühle, die du nicht so rüberbringst, und manchen szenen hast du zu wenig beachtung geschenkt, wobei ich daran denke, wo rory mit dean redet, in echt hätte er dass nie so locker aufgenommen!

ich hoffe sehr, dass du mich jetzt nich köpfst, aber du sagtest, du verträgst kritik!???!

aber trotzdem ist es ne supi-ff!!
mach weiter so!
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