Kiss Kiss (JJ - engl.) one-shot
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Oh, wow, wow, wow, wow, WOW!!!...

Einfach nur himmlisch!!! WubWub

Wenn ich mir vorstelle, wie das auf Deutsch gewesen wär... Nein, Englisch klingt es auf jeden Fall besser und es wäre auf Deutsch nicht halb so gut rübergekommen, wie jetzt...

Auch wenn es einfach geschrieben ist und es eigentlich jeder versteht, der schon etwas mehr Englisch kann, ist es einfach nur genial und wunderschön...Wub


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Zitat: ‘Luke?’
‘Yeah.’
‘Kiss me.’
‘What?’
‘Kiss me again.’
‘You were yelling at me...’
‘I know.’
‘Exactly one minute ago.’
‘I know.’
‘Oh of course you know.’
‘But I want to kiss you again.’
‘Why? To kick my ass?’
‘I have to find something out.’
‘To find..?’
She didn’t have the time for senseless conversations. So she grabbed his lips with her mouth and gave him a warm and tender kiss. He kissed back. And his soft lips caught hers. Powerful. Then they stepped back.
‘Wow.’ Luke said.
‘Oh my god. Do it again.’
‘What?’
‘The kiss. Do it again. Please.’
She looked at him with her bright blue eyes.
He took his hands down to her hips and accroached her. Then he kissed her. And now she placed her tongue deep in his mouth. His heart was running. Her knees felt like, as if they wanted to break away but that was nothing against this other things, he did to her. There was a feeling she couldn’t describe. It was unexpected and warm and... Lorelai pushed him away.
‘I… I have to go.. I..’
‘Lorelai stop.’
‘Luke there.. there is an early delivery tomorrow. I have to..’
She went to the front door. Very confused about these last 5 minutes. She was a little afraid.
Luke nodded and tried to stop her. He cut her way off and closed the door just in front of her.
‘Don’t do that. Don’t run away.’
‘Luke I can’t.’
He put his finger on her lips to cut her off, so she couldn’t say anything.
He saw some kind of fear in her eyes. And her blue eyes filled with tears. He gave her a warm smile.
‘Shh. Trust me.’
He grabbed her and kept her warm in his strong arms. Then he kissed her again. At first she wanted to stop but when his tender palm touched her face and his soft lips merged with hers, she gave up trying to get away from him. She only wanted to be with him. There was closeness. There was passion. Maybe there was love. And when she realized the deep tickle at her belly, Lorelai let her guard down, wrapped her arms around him and kissed him back.



Das hier war auch süß:
Zitat: He smiled at her.
‘Oh no, don’t do that. Don’t look at me like this.’
‘You liked it?’
‘This is not the point.’
‘No?’
‘Of course not. We are friends. We are not allowed to kiss.’



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