20.10.2004, 15:50
sooo hier der versprochene Teil
bin wieder mal net sooo zufrieden, also BITTE Kritik
*auf knien anbettel* *gg*
The big fight
Teil 15
Es war als ob Luke auf seinem Rücken ein Schild angeklebt hatte, auf dem stand: âTriff mich!â und unter der Schrift war ein riesiges Grinsekatzenlächeln, das sie angrinste.
Lorelai grinned to herself as she scooped up some snow, made it into a ball, pranced around a little like a baseball pitcher and hauled the ball with all her powers at Lukeâs back. She waited and watched her weapon of choice flying like in slow-mo, always keeping her eyes on it. âBAMâ it hit him square in the back.
Lorelai nervously chewed on her lower lip, trying to gauge Lukeâs reaction to her assault.
After the impact he had stopped dead in his tracks and now slowly turned around, a look of utter disbelief about what had just happened on his face. His mouth opened and closed like a fish out of water: he was at a loss of words.
Her nervous chewing had stopped as a slow grin crept into her features upon seeing his dumbfounded reaction. But the grin disappeared fast enough when Luke started walking over to where she was standing. Slowly he made his way over like an animal waiting to pounce on his prey and as he stopped just inches from her she looked at him wide eyed. She didnât know what to do right now, or what to say and hellâ¦. did she ever know what to say to Luke if it wasnât mocking, some smartass remark or some wisecrack? The fact that he was standing so close she could actually smell his cologne didnât help either so she continued looking at him, feeling the strong need of smacking herself on the forehead for doing something this stupid.
Because of that (and even though sheâd deny it afterwards: only because of that) he was able to surprise her one more time with his actions.
His eyes never left hers as he quickly bent down to scoop up some snow in both of his hands, stood up again and smashed one hand of snow in her face and use her startled state of mind to shove the other handful down her neck into her clothes.
When Lorelai returned from her shock she shook her head to get rid of the snow, spitting out a few snowflakes and as she felt the melting snow trickling down her back she started squealing and jumping up and down to get the snow out of her t-shirt. But no such luck. âLuke, are you completely and totally INSANE??â she snarled loudly at him but it took her a while to realize that Luke had already walked away after finishing his deed, was about to disappear into Babetteâs house, his hands crammed into the pockets of his jacket and as she screeched âLucas Danes, get BACK here!!â across the two front lawns he even started whistling nonchalantly.
Lorelai narrowed her eyes and muttered: âThis isnât over, my friendâ before she took one last attempt to shake the snow from under her clothes, whimpered and stomped her foot like a child, pulled a disgusted face and headed back into the house to take a well-deserved hot bubble bath
bin wieder mal net sooo zufrieden, also BITTE Kritik
*auf knien anbettel* *gg*The big fight
Teil 15
Es war als ob Luke auf seinem Rücken ein Schild angeklebt hatte, auf dem stand: âTriff mich!â und unter der Schrift war ein riesiges Grinsekatzenlächeln, das sie angrinste.
Lorelai grinned to herself as she scooped up some snow, made it into a ball, pranced around a little like a baseball pitcher and hauled the ball with all her powers at Lukeâs back. She waited and watched her weapon of choice flying like in slow-mo, always keeping her eyes on it. âBAMâ it hit him square in the back.
Lorelai nervously chewed on her lower lip, trying to gauge Lukeâs reaction to her assault.
After the impact he had stopped dead in his tracks and now slowly turned around, a look of utter disbelief about what had just happened on his face. His mouth opened and closed like a fish out of water: he was at a loss of words.
Her nervous chewing had stopped as a slow grin crept into her features upon seeing his dumbfounded reaction. But the grin disappeared fast enough when Luke started walking over to where she was standing. Slowly he made his way over like an animal waiting to pounce on his prey and as he stopped just inches from her she looked at him wide eyed. She didnât know what to do right now, or what to say and hellâ¦. did she ever know what to say to Luke if it wasnât mocking, some smartass remark or some wisecrack? The fact that he was standing so close she could actually smell his cologne didnât help either so she continued looking at him, feeling the strong need of smacking herself on the forehead for doing something this stupid.
Because of that (and even though sheâd deny it afterwards: only because of that) he was able to surprise her one more time with his actions.
His eyes never left hers as he quickly bent down to scoop up some snow in both of his hands, stood up again and smashed one hand of snow in her face and use her startled state of mind to shove the other handful down her neck into her clothes.
When Lorelai returned from her shock she shook her head to get rid of the snow, spitting out a few snowflakes and as she felt the melting snow trickling down her back she started squealing and jumping up and down to get the snow out of her t-shirt. But no such luck. âLuke, are you completely and totally INSANE??â she snarled loudly at him but it took her a while to realize that Luke had already walked away after finishing his deed, was about to disappear into Babetteâs house, his hands crammed into the pockets of his jacket and as she screeched âLucas Danes, get BACK here!!â across the two front lawns he even started whistling nonchalantly.
Lorelai narrowed her eyes and muttered: âThis isnât over, my friendâ before she took one last attempt to shake the snow from under her clothes, whimpered and stomped her foot like a child, pulled a disgusted face and headed back into the house to take a well-deserved hot bubble bath
ich hab die schnauze voll, ich geh schaukeln...