[MissLilli]

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“Okay Mia, so I’ll just come by tomorrow to look at the inn, take in the atmosphere, stay for a few days – at my own expenses of course! – and then I’ll have a storyboard ready for you. Good, see you tomorrow, bye.” Lorelai hung up with a content feeling, knowing already that she had another customer on board. She smiled ‘those small town people, so adorably weird and shrewd’ She did a double take as she looked at the clock ‘Man, is it already ten??’ she slowly packed some files to go over at home into her bag and headed outside, after calling Charlie, her driver, to take her home. To her empty castle-like home where she resided like a princess, still waiting for her prince to come.

Later the next day, Lorelai and Mia stepped out of the inn, Lorelai in a business suit, gesticulating animatedly, in the middle of her gushing about the hotel and telling Mia about the big ad campaign that was forming in her mind as she took in the beauty and serenity of this small hotel. Mia on the contrary practically hung on every word Lorelai was saying, a small smile playing at the corners of her mouth; she had taken an instant liking to the lively young woman who seemed just the perfect choice for promoting the inn a little.

Interrupting the words spilling out of Lorelai she suggested that they’d go somewhere for coffee to sign the contracts and close up the deal. She didn’t need to see the storyboards to know that this campaign was going to be something to remember because Lorelai had good taste and seemed so into the inn and the idea of creating something special for this place. Mia pulled Lorelai across the town square, pointing out the lovely gazebo in the middle (Lorelai couldn’t take her eyes off it anymore) and finally pulling open the door to the only place in Stars Hollow to get good coffee: Luke’s Diner.

Without noticing the sign on the outside, Lorelai let Mia direct her to one of the tables and Lorelai sat down, taking out several official looking papers and some pens to sign. She shuffled through the papers, trying to find the one she was looking for when she heard an all too familiar voice, a voice that even “haunted” her in her dreams “What can I get you, ladies? And Mia, it’s really rude not to introduce a new customer to the proprietor of this place!” Lorelai jumped about a mile when she heard who was talking and slowly raised her eyes only to find her wide-eyed gaze matched with a nonchalant one from piercingly blue eyes – not so differently amazing as her own.

When Luke noticed, who exactly Mia had brought to his diner, his breath caught in his throat. “Luke this is Lorelai Gilmore, she’s-“ “I know, Mia” he said without taking his eyes off Lorelai. “Yeah…um…we’ve met” she replied quickly at the questioning look from Mia, which she only caught from the corner of her eye as she was still staring at Luke like he was a mirage. “Oookay, so are do we have to do to get coffee around here?” Mia smacked Luke playfully on the arm “Coffee’ll be ready in a minute, is there anything else I can get you gorgeous girls?” What the hell…? Where did that come from, this didn’t usually come out of his mouth….
He still hadn’t taken his eyes off of Lorelai so she felt like the compliment was directed directly at her and not to her and Mia as he phrased it. She looked down at her folded hands, blushing slightly. Christ, what is wrong with me? I feel like a freakin’ school girl once again “I’ll have the turkey sandwich with extra chilli fries please. Lorelai, what’ll you have? Lorelai? Hello?”

“Hm? What? Sorry, my mind was somewhere else” “I can tell” Mia winked at her. Frowning at her, Lorelai turned to Luke “I’ll have a cheeseburger with extra cheese, chilli fries – make them extra hot -, lots of bacon, two scrambled eggs, one sausage and four blueberry pancakes” Luke’s eyes widened slightly at her choice of food and especially at the quantity of her order. “You gonna eat all that?” Mia voiced the question that was forming on Luke’s lips “Yeah, why?” Lorelai shrugged casually and went back to shuffling her papers. Luke still stood there, mouth hanging open, frozen to the spot. Noone, not even a guy, had ever ordered this much food for one single person. “Hey, remember in what mood I was when I almost ran into you with your coffee?” He flinched a little at the remembrance “Yeah well, if I don’t get food and coffee soon, I’m gonna flip back into that mood, that could get ugly my friend”

She smiled faintly at him to make sure he knew she was teasing, but not enough to undermine her threat. He hurried back to the kitchen to give Caesar the orders and to pour Mia and Lorelai their coffees. He watched her carefully, taking in every detail of her appearance. She looked great in this black, slim-fitted suit with her high-heels, her hair was bouncy as her mood was apparently and her cheeks were still flushed from the excitement over the inn. Or that’s at least what he thought had caused the blush. She was talking excitedly to Mia, her eyes sparkling with excitement. He took the coffee cups and carefully set them down on their table. Lorelai made a beeline for her cup and gulped down at least half of it “Hot! Hothothot! HOT! Oh my God, I can never taste anything again” she whined “Yeah well, coffee isn’t supposed to be gulped down, y’know” he couldn’t help the smart-ass remark and got a dirty glare from her. He brought them their food and for Lorelai some crushed ice to make her tongue feel better. She smiled at him gratefully and that’s when he first noticed the billion-watt bulb smile that radiated through the room and through him and made him want to smile back at her. But that wouldn’t be him, he thought, so he just kept his smile to himself and busied himself with wiping the counter.