Just away...anywhere...everywhere

Just away...anywhere...everywhere

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17.10.2005, 20:35

Hey, also schon mal ein guter Anfang, guter Schreibstil, viele Absätze und nen guter Aufhänger, da der Teil noch nicht so lang war kann man noch nicht so viel schreiben, aber da es oder ich hoffe es zumindest um Literati geht lese ich auf jeden Fall weiter.
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