[MissLilli]

hey du *anstups*

ich find den Inhalt von deiner FF klasse (hab ich dir eh schon gesagt) nur beim Englischen musst ein bissl aufpassen
es is nicht so, dass es total schlecht is, es is sogar relativ super, aber ein paar kleine Fehler schleichen sich hier und da ein
deswegen hab ichs korrigiert und weil du ja nicht mehr im ICQ bist und gesagt hast ich solls da reinstellen, mach ich das mal *g*

1. „We have to put a stop to that! There can’t be that many cats in Stars Hollow!”
   
   
2. An emergency town meeting had been arranged (passt glaub ich besser) by him, so the whole town, except for Luke, of course, was sitting there.
   
   
3. Lorelai yelled from the front row.
   
   
4. “I don’t like Hello Kitty, but that’s not the point! I know that certain people are (is einfacher und klingt besser ) allergic to them, so I vote against CATS!” Taylor stated.
   
   
5. the people of the town oder townspeople
   
   
6. Lorelai got up from her seat and went across the square straight into Luke’s Diner also known as her second home.
   
   
7. As he handed her the mug his hand brushed hers (touch ist so gewollt, als ob er hingreifen würde, aber es is doch eher zufällig gemeint, oder?) for a short moment but his stomach was suddenly full of butterflies
   
   
8. Lorelai also noticed the butterflies in her stomach and now a smile was on her face
   
   
9. ´Have I (das denkt sie sich gerade, wenn ich mich nicht irre) really never noticed what a handsome man he is? God he's so adorable... put those thoughts away, you’ll never have a chance to be with him anyway, he loves Nicole!
   
   
10. “What was the emergency meeting all about?” Luke’s voice made her snap out of her thoughts.
    
    
11. his allergy to cats.
    
    
12. Neither one (sind ja nur die zwei im Diner) spoke for a long time, they thought about how nice it would be to be together, but neither could read minds so Lorelai left the diner some time later.
    
    
13. She just went up the stairs (staircase…. passt da nicht… hm, ich überleg grad warum*g* staircase heißt mehr so Stiegenhaus oder so) into her bedroom and fell asleep right away.