[MissLilli]

hey GGLOVE, thanks soooo much for the feedback *smiles from ear to ear* so sweeeeeet puts me right up on Could No.9 (next to Bryan Adams abber: , sorry*gg*)

anyway, here's the newest part for ya:
ACHTUNG KITSCHALAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARM


Rory paced nervously behind the stage, waiting for her band to finish “Man, I’m so nervous!”
“Honey, don’t be, you’ll do great, I know that!”
“Thanks Dad!!”
She moved to hug her father, then Lane beckoned her on stage. She stepped on stage and grabbed the mic.
“Hello everybody!”
“Hello Rory!” everybody responded, she was the town-sweetheart “Welcome to this party and congratulations Lorelai! And before I continue babbling senselessly I hope you enjoy out music and have fun!!”
The crowd cheered and Lorelai beamed at Rory. Their eyes locked for a moment and Lorelai got a funny feeling in her stomach. ‘Hm, maybe the fourth pie wasn’t such a great idea….’ The band launched into their first song, ‘Something that you said’ by The Bangles.
“Oh my God, I love The Bangles!!” Lorelai exclaimed and began mouthing the words to the song.

“Oh hey, I’m gonna grab some more food and drinks, do you want anything?”
“Uh, no thanks” ‘This is it, the right moment’ he thought as he hurried toward the stage, giving Rory the arranged sign.
“Okay people, this is a special song now, sung by Luke for Lorelai.” Lorelai’s head snapped up from her plate and she saw Luke nervously stepping on stage.
She stepped out from under the tent as the crowd cleared, giving her a full view of the stage.
Luke cleared his throat and took the microphone.
“Lorelai, this song mirrors my feelings for you and I hope it’s going to be a pleasurable experience for everybody”