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It's only LOVE (complete)
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05.03.2006, 13:35
der zweite teil ist auf jeden fall besser als der erste, einfach ausfürlicher, aber du könntest es immernoch etwas ausfürlicher machen... du haettest etwa ein drittel mehr schreiben koennen ohne langweilig zu wirken.
bin gespannt, was mit jess passiert.
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