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When the party is over
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#31

20.11.2004, 01:38
Hi Eliza,

nun muss ich mich Corinna anschließen. Du hast Rory wirklich gut getroffen! Die Teile sind super! Ich bin echt gespannt wie es weitergeht.

Eine kleine, wirklich ganz kleine Kritik habe ich, aber nicht sauer sein!

Würdest du bitte ein paar mehr Absätze machen? Dann kann man deine FF viel besser lesen. Z.b. immer bei neuer wörtlicher Rede eine neue Zeile beginnen ect. .. das wäre super lieb von Dir!!!

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When the party is over - von Elizsa - 17.11.2004, 23:29
When the party is over - von Corinna - 18.11.2004, 00:12
When the party is over - von herzchen - 18.11.2004, 07:54
When the party is over - von Gusteltier - 18.11.2004, 16:10
When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 18.11.2004, 17:04
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 18.11.2004, 18:45
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 18.11.2004, 19:40
When the party is over - von Gölli - 18.11.2004, 19:46
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 18.11.2004, 21:09
When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 18.11.2004, 21:13
When the party is over - von JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004 - 18.11.2004, 21:26
When the party is over - von Jaina - 18.11.2004, 21:48
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 18.11.2004, 21:52
When the party is over - von Gölli - 18.11.2004, 21:55
When the party is over - von Jaina - 18.11.2004, 22:22
When the party is over - von Corinna - 18.11.2004, 22:31
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 18.11.2004, 22:33
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 18.11.2004, 22:42
When the party is over - von herzchen - 18.11.2004, 23:01
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 18.11.2004, 23:03
When the party is over - von Sandi - 18.11.2004, 23:14
When the party is over - von herzchen - 19.11.2004, 00:17
When the party is over - von JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004 - 19.11.2004, 10:50
When the party is over - von Gölli - 19.11.2004, 13:45
When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 19.11.2004, 15:57
When the party is over - von tiny - 19.11.2004, 19:42
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 19.11.2004, 22:44
When the party is over - von JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004 - 19.11.2004, 22:54
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 20.11.2004, 00:13
When the party is over - von Corinna - 20.11.2004, 01:23
When the party is over - von herzchen - 20.11.2004, 01:38
When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 20.11.2004, 09:41
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 20.11.2004, 15:09
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 20.11.2004, 15:22
When the party is over - von Sandi - 20.11.2004, 20:02
When the party is over - von JamieA - 21.11.2004, 13:15
When the party is over - von Jaina - 21.11.2004, 13:17
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 21.11.2004, 14:25
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 21.11.2004, 17:38
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 21.11.2004, 18:16
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 21.11.2004, 18:20
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 21.11.2004, 18:35
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 21.11.2004, 21:59
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 21.11.2004, 22:01
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 21.11.2004, 22:04
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 21.11.2004, 22:09
When the party is over - von Gelini - 21.11.2004, 22:24
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 21.11.2004, 22:24
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 21.11.2004, 22:27
When the party is over - von Jaina - 22.11.2004, 20:02
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 22.11.2004, 20:25
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When the party is over - von Elizsa - 23.11.2004, 19:47
When the party is over - von Gin - 23.11.2004, 22:27
When the party is over - von Gin - 24.11.2004, 19:04
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When the party is over - von Gin - 25.11.2004, 20:50
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 25.11.2004, 20:52
When the party is over - von Gin - 25.11.2004, 21:03
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 26.11.2004, 21:11
When the party is over - von Gin - 26.11.2004, 21:17
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 26.11.2004, 21:19
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 26.11.2004, 21:55
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 26.11.2004, 21:57
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 27.11.2004, 15:05
When the party is over - von Gin - 27.11.2004, 15:55
When the party is over - von Jaina - 27.11.2004, 22:20
When the party is over - von Gölli - 27.11.2004, 22:24
When the party is over - von cara - 28.11.2004, 12:40
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 28.11.2004, 13:19
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 28.11.2004, 16:21
When the party is over - von Monte - 28.11.2004, 17:20
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 28.11.2004, 19:54
When the party is over - von Jaina - 28.11.2004, 21:01
When the party is over - von Sandi - 28.11.2004, 21:42
When the party is over - von cara - 03.12.2004, 19:25
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 03.12.2004, 19:29
When the party is over - von Jaina - 04.12.2004, 20:40
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 04.12.2004, 20:43
When the party is over - von Jaina - 04.12.2004, 20:45
When the party is over - von Stars_Hollow - 05.12.2004, 12:51
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 27.12.2004, 22:35
When the party is over - von madonna - 27.12.2004, 22:48
When the party is over - von Sandi - 27.12.2004, 23:00
When the party is over - von Fanny - 28.12.2004, 00:42
When the party is over - von cara - 28.12.2004, 01:10
When the party is over - von Hugo - 28.12.2004, 01:25
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 28.12.2004, 01:26
When the party is over - von Hugo - 28.12.2004, 01:27
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 28.12.2004, 01:28
When the party is over - von cara - 07.01.2005, 23:39
When the party is over - von Gölli - 07.01.2005, 23:55
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 30.08.2005, 23:01
When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 31.08.2005, 00:00
When the party is over - von Gusteltier - 31.08.2005, 20:39
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 01.09.2005, 15:50
When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 01.09.2005, 16:34
When the party is over - von cara - 03.09.2005, 11:42
When the party is over - von Gusteltier - 03.09.2005, 22:00
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When the party is over - von Luna_Bezi - 04.12.2005, 18:04
When the party is over - von leighleigh - 10.12.2005, 13:00
When the party is over - von Elizsa - 10.12.2005, 18:39
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When the party is over - von Luna_Bezi - 10.12.2005, 22:55
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When the party is over - von Elizsa - 11.12.2005, 16:51
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When the party is over - von ninchen090 - 11.12.2005, 18:53
When the party is over - von leighleigh - 11.12.2005, 21:50
When the party is over - von Lana007 - 11.12.2005, 22:39
When the party is over - von Gusteltier - 12.12.2005, 18:25
When the party is over - von „Lorelai“ - 14.12.2005, 12:53
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