[karana]

Klar kann ich dir die Stelle auf Englisch geben:

When they lay in the tub, Luke behind Lorelai, cheek against cheek, Lorelai played with his finger.
“What a day!” he sighed and then kissed her cheek.
“I ´ve been annoying the last few weeks!” she said.
“I can´t deny that. But I was more worried about you.”
“I´m sorry. But you were so great. You´re sure you can deal with me for the rest of you live?”
“I´m sure I can´t live without you!” he said and stroked with his thumb over the white-gold ring she wore.
“Very good answer! You´re perfect!”
“I´m perfect for you!” he whispered into her ear.
“Whoa, Mr. Grumpy, I think Babette and Miss Patty will kidnap and rape you when theyll find out what a lovey-dovey you can be!”she laughed.
“Aah, Geez! Lorelai!” he grumbled.
“Seems like everything´s back to normal” she laughed when he said that.
“Thank god!” he said before he stood up and got out of the bathtub, dried himself and then held Lorelais bathrobe open for her. She stepped into it and he tied it for her. Then he picked her up and carried her to the bed. When he got in next to her, she snuggled up against him, like she had done the whole last month. But this time she just lay her head on his chest, not hugging him so tight he could hardly breathe.

Ich weiß noch nicht ob ich call my name übersetze. Ich finde es geht halt doch immer was verloren und manches klingt einfach komisch. Ich hab zum Beispiel ewig überlegt wie ich den kursiven Satz übersetzen soll ohne dass es total bescheuert klingt.
Und bei der Story ist es extrem wichtig das jedes Wort passt. Es geht übrigens nicht wirklich um eine richtige Trennung von Luke und Lorelai. Versuchs halt einfach zu lesen! Mehr verrat ich nicht!