Oh so different-2. Sequel to different pregnancy different man
#36

ok, ich bin geschockt Eek

der teil war total traurig :heul: und sie haben mir wirklich alle leid getan, vor allem will und sogar lore... aber ich verstehe ja echt nicht, warum sie fliegt (dazu sag ich weiter unten noch was)

Zitat:“No, obviously our kids only have a father, because their mother disappeared a year ago!”

den satz fand ich aus irgendeinem grund total toll.. er war soo wahr und auch so *wort such* kA... ernüchternd...
mir tut irgendwie lore leid, weil sie jetzt endlich erkannt hat, was sie falsch gemacht hat...
aber luke Wub er ist so toll, vor allem den zwillingen gegenüber. aber ich glaube nicht, dass ich - wenn ich er wäre - wirklich ein jahr lang nichts gesagt hätte und lore einfach weiter arbeiten gelassen hätte Unsure
(ok, das ist vllt nicht deutsch, aber egal)

Zitat:“Are you going?” he asked while she stroked a strand of hair from his forehead,
“What?” she asked confused and stilled her hand.
“Are you going to London?” he asked more clearly now.
“I don´t know yet. I haven´t decided” she said honestly.
William jumped back from her, his eyes changed to dark blue and his lower lip was trembling with rage.
“Go away! Go to London and the stupid Rory!” he yelled.
“William!” Lorelai exclaimed shocked.
“I hate you! Get out of my room! I hate you! I hate you!” he yelled again, leaned over and started to throw his toy cars in his mother´s direction.
“William stop it!” Lorelai yelled back and took the toy cars out of his hands. But the boy raged and startet to hit and kick his mother.
“I hate you! I hate you!” he screamed again and again until Lorelai let go of him and fled out of his room.

da hat mir will ja echt leid getan... aber ich kann echt verstehen, dass er lore angeschrien hat und ihr gesagt hat, dass er sie hasst

lore fand ich dann wirklich doof: einerseits verstehe ich natürlich, dass rory sie braucht aber andererseits:
zuerst hat sie ein jahr lang nicht zeit für ihre kinder und ihren mann wegen dem stress im hotel, dann ruft einmal rory an und schon ist das alles kein problem mehr und sie kann natürlich sofort weg Motz
also ich verstehe, dass sie fliegt, aber damit verletzt sie die zwillinge, will und luke noch mehr und daher würde ich es ja besser finden, wenn sie bleibt Unsure

also fazit: ein toller teil (auch ohne betareader) und du bist wirklich unglaublich gut in englisch, oder? *g* der schreibstil war wie immer toll und auch die ganze storyline Top
freue mich ja schon auf den nächsten teil

lg, steffi

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