01.05.2006, 14:18
Ich will mich auch mal melden! Ich hab vor einiger Zeit angefangen FFs zu schreiben und nun wollte ich mal eure Meinung dazu wissen.Das ist meine allererste FF, die ich geschrieben hab und es ist eine Story über OC und naja sie ist auf Englisch. Keine Ahnung warum ich lieber auf Englisch schreibe, irgendwie hört sichs da besser an. Eigentlich ist das hier ein Two-Shot und wenn's euch gefällt und ihr vieeeel fb gebt, dann poste ich auch irgendwann den 2. Teil oder ihr lest das einfach hier nach. Also denn, hier geht's los:
Mom. Dad.
Ryan was lying on the beach. The sand was warm and Marissa still kept holding his hand. He could hear Seth mumbling inaudible words and he saw Summer trying to calm Seth down. He could feel the warm blood running down his chest. Why did he have to go here? Especially tonight. He had known that he would be here. Now it was too late. The bullet had hit him already.
“Ryan, please stay awake.” Marissa whispered through the night. It’s all my fault. Why did I let him go? “Please Ryan, do it for me.”
“I will, honey. I’m your boyfriend. I won’t leave you alone.” Ryan whispered back weakly. Yeah, she’s my girlfriend, even if we’re not together. He smiled at Marissa as if he wanted to give her confidence.
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“Seth, have you tried your parents again?” Summer’s hands were shaking, but she had to be strong for her boyfriend and her best friend. He’s Ryan’s brother. I never noticed that. She tried to take Seth’s hand.
“Summer, he’s going to die. The ambulance should have been here long ago.” Tears ran down Seth’s face. How strong she is. His little Summer was now the one to be grown up. He and Marissa could still be the kids they had been an hour before. They didn’t have to be strong and pretend that everything would be fixed. They had a right to cry.
“I know, Seth. But have you tried your parents again?” Summer had never called him ‘Seth’ before. Seth nodded and then shook his head.
“They don’t pick up the phone?” Summer was worried. Seth wouldn’t stand the loss of his brother. He would leave her again.
“But you told them something on their voice mail?” Summer knew that he had done this, but she tried to distract him from Ryan.
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“Ryan, please don’t go. Don’t leave me alone. I love you, remember that?” Marissa cried. She was holding his hand for more than half an hour. There was still no ambulance. She didn’t want him to die. She needed him. She couldn’t live without him. We’re one of those couples that are a couple, even if they’re not a couple. She remembered the words, Alex had said to her. They were true. Yes, we are a couple. We will ever be. Marissa smiled at Ryan.
“What’s so funny?” Ryan tried to joke but the pain was horrible. When he smiled, he could fell the bullet going through his chest again.
“I’ve remembered Alex’ words.” For one little moment she seemed to forget that her boyfriend was lying in her arms with a bullet in his chest.
“What words?” Ryan’s voice was getting weaker and weaker. It’ll be over soon.
“She said that we’re one of those couples. We’re still a couple when we’re not a couple.” She smiled into Ryan’s face. She really loved him. And she would always love him. Even if he would not be at her side anymore.
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“Ryan!” Kirsten screamed when she got out of the car. They had gotten the message ten minutes ago and had driven as fast as they could to get here.
“Kirsten. Sandy.” Ryan whispered still holding Marissa’s hands. Seth and Summer were sitting next to them. Seth still crying and Summer still shaking.
“Ryan, are you okay?” Of course, he’s not. A hysterical Kirsten asked. Never before had Ryan seen her so frantic. She took his other hand, crying and mumbling and Sandy kneeled to his side. He looked into Ryan’s eyes saying I love you, son in his mind.
“Mom. Dad.” With those words Ryan closed his eyes. Never before had he called someone ‘Mom’ or ‘Dad’. Especially not Dawn or his father. Now he had. And those were the last words he said before he turned around to face the place he would now call his home.
Mom. Dad.
Ryan was lying on the beach. The sand was warm and Marissa still kept holding his hand. He could hear Seth mumbling inaudible words and he saw Summer trying to calm Seth down. He could feel the warm blood running down his chest. Why did he have to go here? Especially tonight. He had known that he would be here. Now it was too late. The bullet had hit him already.
“Ryan, please stay awake.” Marissa whispered through the night. It’s all my fault. Why did I let him go? “Please Ryan, do it for me.”
“I will, honey. I’m your boyfriend. I won’t leave you alone.” Ryan whispered back weakly. Yeah, she’s my girlfriend, even if we’re not together. He smiled at Marissa as if he wanted to give her confidence.
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“Seth, have you tried your parents again?” Summer’s hands were shaking, but she had to be strong for her boyfriend and her best friend. He’s Ryan’s brother. I never noticed that. She tried to take Seth’s hand.
“Summer, he’s going to die. The ambulance should have been here long ago.” Tears ran down Seth’s face. How strong she is. His little Summer was now the one to be grown up. He and Marissa could still be the kids they had been an hour before. They didn’t have to be strong and pretend that everything would be fixed. They had a right to cry.
“I know, Seth. But have you tried your parents again?” Summer had never called him ‘Seth’ before. Seth nodded and then shook his head.
“They don’t pick up the phone?” Summer was worried. Seth wouldn’t stand the loss of his brother. He would leave her again.
“But you told them something on their voice mail?” Summer knew that he had done this, but she tried to distract him from Ryan.
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“Ryan, please don’t go. Don’t leave me alone. I love you, remember that?” Marissa cried. She was holding his hand for more than half an hour. There was still no ambulance. She didn’t want him to die. She needed him. She couldn’t live without him. We’re one of those couples that are a couple, even if they’re not a couple. She remembered the words, Alex had said to her. They were true. Yes, we are a couple. We will ever be. Marissa smiled at Ryan.
“What’s so funny?” Ryan tried to joke but the pain was horrible. When he smiled, he could fell the bullet going through his chest again.
“I’ve remembered Alex’ words.” For one little moment she seemed to forget that her boyfriend was lying in her arms with a bullet in his chest.
“What words?” Ryan’s voice was getting weaker and weaker. It’ll be over soon.
“She said that we’re one of those couples. We’re still a couple when we’re not a couple.” She smiled into Ryan’s face. She really loved him. And she would always love him. Even if he would not be at her side anymore.
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“Ryan!” Kirsten screamed when she got out of the car. They had gotten the message ten minutes ago and had driven as fast as they could to get here.
“Kirsten. Sandy.” Ryan whispered still holding Marissa’s hands. Seth and Summer were sitting next to them. Seth still crying and Summer still shaking.
“Ryan, are you okay?” Of course, he’s not. A hysterical Kirsten asked. Never before had Ryan seen her so frantic. She took his other hand, crying and mumbling and Sandy kneeled to his side. He looked into Ryan’s eyes saying I love you, son in his mind.
“Mom. Dad.” With those words Ryan closed his eyes. Never before had he called someone ‘Mom’ or ‘Dad’. Especially not Dawn or his father. Now he had. And those were the last words he said before he turned around to face the place he would now call his home.
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