You are the reason ...why I´m staying here [complete]
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hey ho,

also als ich das gelesen hatte
Check schrieb:Paaring: natürlich Narco und eigentlich Balcony Buddy, aber die JJ kommen am Ende auch nicht zu kurz
, hab ich erstmal nen schock bekommen- Narco und BB in einer FF? genau die paare, die ich absolut nicht ab kann, aber ich hab sie gelesen(weil da was von JJ steht) lol

an sich hat mir der erst teil auch gefallen, er war gut schrieben(außer an einer kleinen stelle, kommt aber noch) und ganz interessant

es gab einige Stellen, die ich irgendwie "komisch" fand.
Zitat:nachdem sie einen Blick auf ihren Plüschwecker geworfen hatte.
hat nicht nur lore so einen Wecker?
und dann die stelle hier. hier war auch das mit dem ungünstig ausgedrücktem
Zitat:
Dann, 20 Jahre später, als sich ihr Verhältnis etwas gebessert hatte, brannte sie mit einem Cafébesitzer durch, heiratete ihn und ließ sich dann wieder scheiden, nur weil er nicht fähig war zwischen ihr und seiner Tochter zu entscheiden. Auch das hatte sie verbockt.
weil er nicht fähig war zwischer ihr und seiner tochter zu entscheiden? er ist doch fähig, das war 1. ziemliche umgangssprache und 2. ungünstig ausgedrückt...er hat sich doch entschieden
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und warum hatte sie es verbockt(auch wieder umgangssprache)

aber eigentlich hat mir der erste teil gefallen. ich werde dran bleiben

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