You are the reason ...why I´m staying here [complete]
#54

hi,

mir hat der text irgendwie nicht so gefallen, aber ich denke mir mal, dass es einfach an den paarings liegt

was ich toll fand, war die länge
irgendwie ging die handlung für mich zu schnell...erst noch der morgen, die unterhaltung von lore und chris, die viel mehr ausgebaut werden könnte, dann die party und dann schon der nächste morgen. wenn da nen paar mehr details z.b. von der party kommen wird es glaub viel besser
dein schreibstil ist interessant, der hat was =)
so, ich bin mal aufs nächste kapitel gespannt

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