Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ)

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ)

Emerson Rose
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13.07.2006, 22:24

Du wirst auf jeden Fall noch mehr Stammleser(innen) bekommen bei dem Anfang.
Die Story klingt schon nach dem ersten Teil sehr vielversprechend. Es ist sehr schön flüssig zu lesen und bis auf einige Zeichensetzungsfehler nichts zu meckern.
Werde deine Geschichte auf jeden Fall weiter verfolgen und bin schon gespannt, in welche Richtung sie sich entwickelt.

LG Emerson Rose

PS: Der Banner zu deiner Story gefällt mir auch sehr gut. (hat noch gar niemand bemerkt)

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Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von bibi13 - 14.07.2006, 20:18

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Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Kayara - 18.07.2006, 16:04

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von bibi13 - 19.07.2006, 14:18

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Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von jeany_loverin - 19.07.2006, 20:01

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Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Emerson Rose - 19.07.2006, 22:57

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Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Franny - 25.09.2007, 20:19

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Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Kayara - 02.12.2007, 22:46

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Franny - 03.12.2007, 11:36

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Chery - 03.12.2007, 18:57

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Kayara - 17.12.2007, 20:47

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Kayara - 25.01.2008, 19:24

Don't look back- Tears 'n Heaven (JJ) - von Kayara - 03.08.2007, 15:52

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