I would jump if I knew you'd catch me

I would jump if I knew you'd catch me

Lauren4eva
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#7

27.07.2006, 10:30

Hey

Also, ich finde deinen Schreibstil schon mal gar nicht soooo schlecht, aber es hört sich irgendwie verdammt gecovert an. Das klingt wirklich wie die 5. Staffel, die im Fernsehn gelaufen ist.
Ist zwar schön und gut, dass du schreibst, aber es ist halt nicht von dir.

Du kannst ja den Anfang so lassen, aber den Rest ändern, also, dass der dann völlig aus deiner Phantasie kommt...

Ist aber gut geschrieben....

Nils Casas
16.01.1991 - 06.08.07
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