I would jump if I knew you'd catch me

I would jump if I knew you'd catch me

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29.07.2006, 13:53

hey wow, ich bin die erste bin ich öfter mal... na egal ich habe mir deine vier teile jetzt durchgelesen und finde, du solltest, auch wenn du einfach abgeschrieben hast, was im TV lief, etwas merh gefühl mit reinbringen , denn du hast nicht mal so was wie " bla bla bla", sagte bla bla bla --- weiÃt du? das klingt alles ziemlich abgehakt und was du noch besser machen könntest, damit alles etwas bersichtlicher wird: immer absatz wenn du gerade wörtliche rede geschrieben hast und danach gleich wieder eine kommt das wars eigentlich ich selber wollte die story auch schon schreiben, habs aber nicht geschafft... na ja, also mach weiter ich steh zwar nich unbedingt auf Sophie aber die story find ich sooderso klasse, vlt bringst du mich ja dazu logan fan zu werden :-)

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