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It always ends up like this... (Literati)
rhcp
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#221

31.10.2006, 10:38
Hi,
toller Teil und tolle Storyline an sich! Ich finde es gut dass Jess und Dean sich jetzt ein bisschen besser verstehen. Du hast das auch überzeugend rübergebracht... also es kam nicht zu plötzlich und unerwartet.
Damit ist auch gesichert das dieses Dean gegen Jess nicht ewig weitergeht. Finde das wird in vielen FFs oft zu sehr ausgeschlachtet.
Überhaupt passiert das oft, das FFs irgendwann zu kitschig werden, aber bei dir is das garnicht der Fall.
LG,
rhcp
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