[Rowan]

Another great chapter.

“You can come here as often as you want. Maybe one day we can be friends again”, he said after he had taken a deep breath and had started to clean the counter with the towel again.

Is he serious with this "one day we can be friends again" thing? He is so not over her! Does he believe this being friends thing is going to work out?
Does he really believe that they were never meant to be? Or is he just telling it to himself to feel better?
It's just so ..... sad and, argh, Luke!! What are you doing?

April was waiting for her father upstairs and heard most of the conversation he had with Lorelai. She felt so bad for everything that happened. It was all her fault that Luke and Lorelai broke up.

This is the first time ever I kind of like April. It's cute that she cares for her father so much but I don't think it is all her fault.

While she tried to fall asleep she started to think about how she could make Luke see that he and Lorelai were meant to be.

I think it's great that she wants to make Luke see that he and Lorelai are meant to be. That's sweet. Great that she realized that Luke still loves Lorelai (well, I hope he really does).
Go April! Make him see it. Lorelai needs someone who helps her making Luke realize that they are meant to be and that they won't fail again.

I hope you'll post the next chapter soon.
Rowan

“Luke doesn’t want me anymore”, she confessed.
“Then he’s even more stupid than I thought”, Chris said

Yeah, maybe he is .... :heul: