Words can't say what love can do, I'll be there for you! [JJ]

Words can't say what love can do, I'll be there for you! [JJ]

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23.03.2007, 09:53

So eine JJ-FF und ich hab nichts zu lesen, da dachte ich versuch mal wieder eine auf deutsch zu lesen.

Ich fand es sehr gut geschrieben und die Idee mit dem Fahrrad ist witzig und originell

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Allerdings fände ich es wesentlich leichter zu lesen wenn du ein paar deutliche Absätze einbauen würdest, so dass nicht der komplette Text aneinander klebt und man auch die wörtliche Rede leichter findet.

Und das Lorelai sich dem Klimaschutz annimmt... hat sie nen Umweltschützer als neuen Freund? Mit sowas kommt doch sonst nur Luke an.

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