[Cedric]

So, hier ist dein versprochenes Feedback, Julie...

Und achtung, es wird lange, ich brauche ablenkung.

Ich fand das Chapter wirklich super. Super geschrieben, Plot was funny and serious at the same time... nicely done...

Hier meine Faves...

Somehow she felt lighter. It was as if a mighty rock has been removed from her heart. And now the only thing she could do was smile.

Super geschrieben und nachvollziehbar...

He had been the person who took a lot of her pain away. And she had the feeling that he’s the first person she’d really love.

how cute is that?? Und Luke ist ja auch der beste (C-monster ist einfach zu doof)

When Patty came back to her senses Lorelai was already out of sight. With her mouth agape she reached into one of her big pockets, took her cell phone out of it and frantically started to type in a number. After a few rings someone picked up.
“Babette, you will never believe what just happened!”
While Patty was still in shock Lorelai reached the inn and entered it through the kitchen door

So fun xD Excellent getroffen! Genauso wuerde es aussehen, ich kann Patty vor mir sehen.
Genauso wie Sookie... super.

Dann Lorelai's speech to Mia... It really was... I dunno... And Mia was just Mia (you now I love her xD)

The crowd at Luke's... hilarious.

The scene at Sniffy's really was cute. I liked how you changed it.

These feelings were new. Whenever Christopher had touched her it hadn’t felt like this. It had almost felt like nothing. But this was amazing. Luke’s hands on her body made her feel like flying on a cloud. She could really feel the million butterflies in her stomach. And he hadn’t even touched the more important parts yet. Lorelai was totally relaxed and enjoyed each and every touch.

Das ist richtig so... auch super geschrieben!

When she thought about the time after the pregnancy it was clear to her that it totally wasn’t herself but it was still the right thing to do because not talking hand kept her away from getting hurt. But when she thought about now she knew she had found her real self. Alive, happy, crazy, confident, outgoing, caring and coffee addicted.
And all this because she finally felt loved.

Best end ever.
So cool, great, [insert any superlative you want]

I wanna thank you for a great FF and I definitely want a sequel!

Love, Cedric