16.06.2008, 15:55
hmm das hat mich auch gestört- dass es sich nicht so aufbaut... andererseits ist das gedicht als eine art abschluss gemeint- und ich fühl mich auch grad ein bisschen abgestumpft...
naja n abschluss sieht wohl anders aus... hier die realität...
Just My Imagination
"I missed you",
he said
hugging her tight.
As he'd touched her slightly a long time ago
she'd gotten goose bumps all over.
Now as they stood there,
longing for long lost feelings
she could barely remember,
she whispered
"I missed you, too."
but she didn't feel it
she couldn't.
"How are you?",
he asked
hugging her tight.
And memories flashed through her mind,
him and her all over again.
Now as they stood there
and the feeligs she'd considered lost
pulsed through her veins,
she smiled
"I'm fine"
and there was nothing she could do-
she fell for him, again.
naja n abschluss sieht wohl anders aus... hier die realität...
Just My Imagination
"I missed you",
he said
hugging her tight.
As he'd touched her slightly a long time ago
she'd gotten goose bumps all over.
Now as they stood there,
longing for long lost feelings
she could barely remember,
she whispered
"I missed you, too."
but she didn't feel it
she couldn't.
"How are you?",
he asked
hugging her tight.
And memories flashed through her mind,
him and her all over again.
Now as they stood there
and the feeligs she'd considered lost
pulsed through her veins,
she smiled
"I'm fine"
and there was nothing she could do-
she fell for him, again.