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18.06.2008, 11:13

Hey der Anfang gefällt mir richtig gut.
Ich finde es toll wie du schreibst und direkt der erste Teil hat enorm viel Spannung aufgebaut.

Wie alle andern, hab ich natürlich auch meine vermutungen

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Ich würde fast sagen, für den Anfang war die Ich-Perpektive perfekt.

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