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24.12.2008, 00:35
Heii!

Ein toller Anfang! Bin ja eigentlich nicht Literari! Aber ich hab grad nichts anderes zu tun (:

Du schreibst toll! Kompliment. Obwohl da ein paar Schreibfehler sind, aber das ist überhaupt nicht schlimm.

Ich finde beim Prolog richtig genia, wie du den Typen da immer nur mi ihm beschreibst! Das gefällt mir ur. Macht das ganze noch etwas geheimnisvoller, obwohl ich da schon so einen Verdacht habe, wer es sein könnte! Aber das verrate ich jetzt noch nicht (:

Kurzum, finde den Anfang richtig super!

Hoffe schreibst bald weiter!

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mona
Sometime I take a carton of eggs out of the fridge an look at it and think
that maybe one day I'll crack an egg and a little baby chicken will fall out and I'll wash him of and rais him indoors and then...
I'll have a friend.
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