11.05.2009, 16:03
I just read the letters JJ in the title of you FF and thought I could read it.
It´s a really good first Chapter. I like your Idea of both being in a healthy relationship and I´m curious about what´s going to happen next to get to a real JJ-Story.
Many questions in my mind are open so far. Why did you choose Rachel & Max? Who is going to be the one ending one of the relationships? How is it possible, that Luke lost this important piece of Paper? And so on.
I´m going to continue reading your FF. Your style of writing pleases me and your idea is terrific.
I should really work on my vocabulary, I sound like a rookie.
Whatever. There is much sighing in you FF so far. Are the boys not as happy as they think, or is it something else?
It´s a really good first Chapter. I like your Idea of both being in a healthy relationship and I´m curious about what´s going to happen next to get to a real JJ-Story.
Many questions in my mind are open so far. Why did you choose Rachel & Max? Who is going to be the one ending one of the relationships? How is it possible, that Luke lost this important piece of Paper? And so on.
I´m going to continue reading your FF. Your style of writing pleases me and your idea is terrific.
I should really work on my vocabulary, I sound like a rookie.
Whatever. There is much sighing in you FF so far. Are the boys not as happy as they think, or is it something else?
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