[CMM]

Also normalerweise raucht die net, war für nen film ich glaub chasing destiny?!

[Emily]

Ach so. Ich dachte schon. Das passt irgendwie ar net zu ihr...

[MissLilli]

Okay liebe Freunde: Ich schau grad fern, wenn der Film zuende ist, schreib ich vielleicht noch was

und das bild is aus: Seeing other people

[LaurenFan]

*lol* die find ich toll :lach:

Aaaaalso Feedback: Ich hab grad die beste Medizin gegen einen fürchterlichen Kater gefunden: Lilli's FF . Da quäl ich mich extra aus meinem warmen, gemütlichen Bett (so mancher Studi hat ja freitags frei ) und will eigentlich nur mal kurz meine Mails checken und da verschlägt es mich doch noch mal kurz hier ins Forum... Und da finde ich den neuen Teil und meine Kopfschmerzen sind wie weggeblasen und mein magen hat mich auch wieder lieb...
Ich mag deinen Schreibstil einfach soooo sehr, du hast die wunderbare Begabung, dich auf Englisch so schön ausdrücken... Ich habe schon einen ganzen Haufen FFs gelesen und nicht selten kommt es vor, dass die Dialoge gar nicht so wirklich zu den Charakteren passen, bei dir ist das anders, ich kann mir wirklich vorstellen, dass Luke und Lore sich so verhalten würden... Und ich find's immer wieder toll, wie du die anderen Charaktere aus Stars Hollow mit einbaust, aber bist du dir sicher, dass Rory als Sängerin so der Hit ist? *lol* Oder hast du etwa das Karaoke singen in 3.06 vergessen? Hoffen wir mal, dass deine Rory das besser kann :lach:

[MissLilli]

Ich hab grad die beste Medizin gegen einen fürchterlichen Kater gefunden: Lilli's FF

wow, das nenn ich mal ein Kompliment *tränen in den Augen hab* danke Lauren, das is einfach so ...... hach, mir fehlen die worte *schneuz*
danke danke *bussi*

so, hier kommt der nächste Teil, aber:
Es wird extremst DIRTY also beware, ich hoffe es is nicht allzu schlecht gelungen



“Let me walk, for Christ’s sake, I’m not a fucking invalid!!” Lorelai whined as the nurse wheeled her out of the hospital
“Lorelai, just can it and wait till we’re home, then you can walk, okay?” She shot Luke a warning glance that she’s rip his head off soon if he didn’t stop talking so he shut up.
They arrived at his truck and he picked her up and put her in while she wore a deep frown on her face.
“Stop frowning or you’ll be all wrinkly when you’re old” She straightened out her face immediately, causing him to smile. He got in on the driver’s side and started up the truck. Lorelai scooted over and snuggled into his shoulder
“I love this truck” He put an arm around her shoulders and held the steering wheel with the other one “Better than this limo of yours?”
“Yes” she said sincerely and looked up at him as he turned her head towards her, surprised
“Really??”
“I know I have a lot of…. expensive stuff Luke, but this part of my life made me realize that money isn’t everything. I’ve learnt to appreciate the simple things in life and that I don’t need money to be happy. I’m happy being here with you and that’s all I need. Put your eyes back on the road, we’re going away from the hospital, remember?” she said sternly but smiled as his head jerked back to the road right away.
“Could you shift to third gear please? When I say now?” he asked, his shifting arm was still around Lorelai
“Sure” she grasped the stick and when he pushed the coupler, she shifted into third gear, then leaned back against him again and giggled “We’re like an old couple” He laughed
“Just because I asked you to shift gears?”
“Mhm, yeah” He just accepted this and pulled into a quiet road. She nuzzled his neck with her nose and ran her hand up and down his thigh. Luke swallowed hard and tried to concentrate on something else than Lorelai’s nails scraping on his jeans.
She started kissing his neck, gently nibbling on his soft skin, eliciting a high-pitched “Holy Mother of God!” from Luke. “How is celibacy treating you, hm?” Lorelai whispered in his ear as she reached for his belt “Lorelai, I’m driving” he said through clenched teeth “I know” she purred and sipped her hand inside his jeans “Oh wow, someone’s really happy to see me” Luke gripped the steering wheel harder when Lorelai started stroking him through his boxers, grazed her fingernails across his erection. He sucked in a breath, his brain beginning to fog after her hand found it’s way into his boxers, her cold hand brushing his hot skin. He whimpered slightly, he wouldn’t last very long, it’s been too long. Lorelai stroked his erection slowly, closing her fist around him, picking up the pace when his breathing became heavy and he started fidgeting. He moved himself against her palm, coming closer to the edge with every thrust and he squeezed his eyes shut and et out a loud moan when he couldn’t take it any longer and emptied himself into his boxers. Lorelai smiled and took over the steering wheel while he tried to catch his breath; luckily, they were on a quiet road.
“Sweet Jesus, that was-“ he tried to find the word but failed, Lorelai gave a throaty chuckle and put her head on his shoulder while he took over the wheel and she took his one hand into hers and held onto it for the entire drive.

[CMM]

Meine Meinung kennst ja schon

Aber der is extrem geil...
Mir gefällt der richtig gut...


ich freu mich auf den nächsten

[JeSsiEs_GiRl_2004]

gemma weite you dirrty woman aber vorher GG schaun

[CrazyCake]

hui klasse part ^^
*ganzbreitgrins* ---->

[Karo]

*dreckiggrins*

Klasse teil...DIRRTY...

:ja:

[Corinna]

WOW! des war dirty und hot!!!

mein lieber herr gesangsverein!! abber:

freu mich mal wieder auf die forsetzung... sorry, ich weiß grad gar nich, was ich schreiben soll...