[Corinna]

wenn ich da gewesen wär und an den pc gekonnt hätte, dann hätt ich wohl gesetrn schon was geschrieben...

nämlich, dass dieses geschichte, genauso wie deine andre, einfach nur genial is!!!
und du hast keine ahnung wie neidisch ich auf dein englisch bin... das klingt so perfekt und einfach so, als wär das deine muttersprache...

bitte schreib so schnell es geht weiter! find die story echt klasse... das is halt mal was ganz andres...

[MissLilli]

sooooooooo ein neuer Teil ist fertig und BITTEEEEE ich brauch Feedback, ich komm mir urüberflüssig vor*gg* und es darf auch ruhig mal was negatives sein


“Okay Mia, so I’ll just come by tomorrow to look at the inn, take in the atmosphere, stay for a few days – at my own expenses of course! – and then I’ll have a storyboard ready for you. Good, see you tomorrow, bye.” Lorelai hung up with a content feeling, knowing already that she had another customer on board. She smiled ‘those small town people, so adorably weird and shrewd’ She did a double take as she looked at the clock ‘Man, is it already ten??’ she slowly packed some files to go over at home into her bag and headed outside, after calling Charlie, her driver, to take her home. To her empty castle-like home where she resided like a princess, still waiting for her prince to come.

Later the next day, Lorelai and Mia stepped out of the inn, Lorelai in a business suit, gesticulating animatedly, in the middle of her gushing about the hotel and telling Mia about the big ad campaign that was forming in her mind as she took in the beauty and serenity of this small hotel. Mia on the contrary practically hung on every word Lorelai was saying, a small smile playing at the corners of her mouth; she had taken an instant liking to the lively young woman who seemed just the perfect choice for promoting the inn a little.

Interrupting the words spilling out of Lorelai she suggested that they’d go somewhere for coffee to sign the contracts and close up the deal. She didn’t need to see the storyboards to know that this campaign was going to be something to remember because Lorelai had good taste and seemed so into the inn and the idea of creating something special for this place. Mia pulled Lorelai across the town square, pointing out the lovely gazebo in the middle (Lorelai couldn’t take her eyes off it anymore) and finally pulling open the door to the only place in Stars Hollow to get good coffee: Luke’s Diner.

Without noticing the sign on the outside, Lorelai let Mia direct her to one of the tables and Lorelai sat down, taking out several official looking papers and some pens to sign. She shuffled through the papers, trying to find the one she was looking for when she heard an all too familiar voice, a voice that even “haunted” her in her dreams “What can I get you, ladies? And Mia, it’s really rude not to introduce a new customer to the proprietor of this place!” Lorelai jumped about a mile when she heard who was talking and slowly raised her eyes only to find her wide-eyed gaze matched with a nonchalant one from piercingly blue eyes – not so differently amazing as her own.

When Luke noticed, who exactly Mia had brought to his diner, his breath caught in his throat. “Luke this is Lorelai Gilmore, she’s-“ “I know, Mia” he said without taking his eyes off Lorelai. “Yeah…um…we’ve met” she replied quickly at the questioning look from Mia, which she only caught from the corner of her eye as she was still staring at Luke like he was a mirage. “Oookay, so are do we have to do to get coffee around here?” Mia smacked Luke playfully on the arm “Coffee’ll be ready in a minute, is there anything else I can get you gorgeous girls?” What the hell…? Where did that come from, this didn’t usually come out of his mouth….
He still hadn’t taken his eyes off of Lorelai so she felt like the compliment was directed directly at her and not to her and Mia as he phrased it. She looked down at her folded hands, blushing slightly. Christ, what is wrong with me? I feel like a freakin’ school girl once again “I’ll have the turkey sandwich with extra chilli fries please. Lorelai, what’ll you have? Lorelai? Hello?”

“Hm? What? Sorry, my mind was somewhere else” “I can tell” Mia winked at her. Frowning at her, Lorelai turned to Luke “I’ll have a cheeseburger with extra cheese, chilli fries – make them extra hot -, lots of bacon, two scrambled eggs, one sausage and four blueberry pancakes” Luke’s eyes widened slightly at her choice of food and especially at the quantity of her order. “You gonna eat all that?” Mia voiced the question that was forming on Luke’s lips “Yeah, why?” Lorelai shrugged casually and went back to shuffling her papers. Luke still stood there, mouth hanging open, frozen to the spot. Noone, not even a guy, had ever ordered this much food for one single person. “Hey, remember in what mood I was when I almost ran into you with your coffee?” He flinched a little at the remembrance “Yeah well, if I don’t get food and coffee soon, I’m gonna flip back into that mood, that could get ugly my friend”

She smiled faintly at him to make sure he knew she was teasing, but not enough to undermine her threat. He hurried back to the kitchen to give Caesar the orders and to pour Mia and Lorelai their coffees. He watched her carefully, taking in every detail of her appearance. She looked great in this black, slim-fitted suit with her high-heels, her hair was bouncy as her mood was apparently and her cheeks were still flushed from the excitement over the inn. Or that’s at least what he thought had caused the blush. She was talking excitedly to Mia, her eyes sparkling with excitement. He took the coffee cups and carefully set them down on their table. Lorelai made a beeline for her cup and gulped down at least half of it “Hot! Hothothot! HOT! Oh my God, I can never taste anything again” she whined “Yeah well, coffee isn’t supposed to be gulped down, y’know” he couldn’t help the smart-ass remark and got a dirty glare from her. He brought them their food and for Lorelai some crushed ice to make her tongue feel better. She smiled at him gratefully and that’s when he first noticed the billion-watt bulb smile that radiated through the room and through him and made him want to smile back at her. But that wouldn’t be him, he thought, so he just kept his smile to himself and busied himself with wiping the counter.

[Corinna]

oh gott ich liebe deine ff!!!
die geschichte is einfach sooo geil!!
du hast nich zufällig noch irgendwo nen teil versteckt, oder?
für ne einsame nachtschwärmerin *dackelblickaufsetzundmitaugenklimper*

[MissLilli]

*lach* ein bisserl hab ich noch, is aber am Laptop, musst ein bissi warten

[MissLilli]

extra für dich Corinna


“Heeeey Luke?” Mia leaned against the counter “Mh?” “I just wondered if you could do me a favor. I’d like you to take care of Lorelai, you know, take her to places, show her around, keep her entertained, that sort of thing. You think you could do this for me? Please?” The sound of her name made his ears peak up and he glanced up at Mia. “I’m supposed to play babysitter for some business partner of yours?” he feigned annoyance so that noone noticed how excited he was about the idea “Yes, please, she’s really great and I don’t wanna lose her, ‘kay? You can take her to the movies, the zoo, whatever, I’ll pay for everything. Say yes or I’ll tell everybody about that shirt I got you when you were little” she winked at him and he gasped: “You wouldn’t!” “Oh yes I would, come on, we’ll tell her about out little arrangement”

Lorelai propped her chin on her hand and looked out of the windows. This town was so small it was unbelievable. What was she gonna do all day long? Here, in the middle of nowhere? She sighed at the thought and prepared herself for a looong weekend.
Mia returned to their table with Luke in tow. “Lorelai, may I introduce you to your town guide for this weekend, Mister Lucas. You can have a little fun together, visit places and stuff, it’s always nicer to have someone who knows what’s going on around here don’t you think?” Lorelai looked at Mia in amazement and then turned to look at Luke, trying to gauge his reaction to this. He could have sworn that he saw her eyes light up when Mia mentioned that she’d have company this weekend, although he wasn’t sure if it was just the company or the person that made up this company. Lorelai smiled “Okay, I’m gonna go back to the inn, change into something less… business like and I’ll just come back here when I’m ready, it that okay?” she asked casually, packing the stacks of paper away and walking to the door “Yeah sure” he cleared his throat to say something wittier than that, but she beat him to it “Later!” she waved and out the door she was.

[Corinna]

herrlich herrlich herrlich...
luke als town guide für lorelai... wenn das nich amüsant wird
danke für den teil Lilli! *knuddelundknutsch*

ich fürchte, jetzt kommt erstmal nix mehr, oder?

[MissLilli]

willst du noch was?*gg*

[Corinna]

:lach: is die frage ernst gemeint??
deine beiden storys sind so ziemlich der einzige grund, weshalb ich noch wach und online bin!!!
also immer her mit dem zeugs

[MissLilli]

ich hab dich lieeeeb



nur noch ein kleines Momenterl

[MissLilli]

“Wow, your babies are gonna look really pretty!” Mia smirked in Luke’s direction “Excuse me?” “I said-“ “No I heard what you said, but I didn’t quite catch the joke there!” “There was none, I’m totally serious” “MIA!” Luke looked at her incredulously “There’s nothing there, honestly!” “Lucas, I’ve known you for almost your entire life so don’t try to bullshit me here. I’ve seen the sparkle in your eye and the expression on your face when you look at her, I notice the way you smile at her, you hardly ever smile at anyone. So don’t tell me there’s nothing there!” he sighed, she knew him too well

“Look, Mia, she’s out of my league. She’s a goddamn high-society lady and what am I? A diner-owner who can barely make enough money to keep himself alive! She could have any guy she wanted, I mean: look at her, she’s dazzling, she’s smart, she’s funny… She sure as hell would never choose me, what would her friends say if they knew she dated a poor guy like me! And it would never work out cause she could never be sure if I’m just in it for her money and there would be constant mistrust in our relationship.” “Whatever you say Lucas…..” Mia trailed off and walked towards the door. With her hand on the doorknob she turned around “…but you can never decide where Cupid decides to strike” she smiled at him and closed the door behind her.

Half an hour later, Lorelai had changed from suit into her light blue “I heart PHD” T-shirt and some Capri Jeans and walked back to the Diner. Luke was just busy with a customer but couldn’t help but notice her stepping inside; seeing her casually attired was something new to him but he didn’t mind at all. Lorelai spotted Luke with a customer and gave him a quick wave. He finished taking the order and handed it to Caesar. “Are you gonna be okay here Caesar? Alone?” he asked for the umpteenth time today “YES and now get the hell outta here before I have to kick you you-know-where!”
So Luke complied and joined Lorelai outside. He offered her his arm and she wound hers around his. “Soooo, where are we going now?” “Aaah yeah I haven’t really decided on this one yet, cause there’s not much to do around Stars Hollow, so I figured I’ll just make up the schedule as we go along” “Sounds fair to me” He could take me to a garbage dump, I wouldn’t even notice let alone mind

“Okay, there’s the gazebo over here” he pointed towards it
“It’s really old and we rarely use it, but it’s nice to look at. Over there’s Miss Patty’s, she’s a dance instructor and probably the most gossipy woman in town next to Babette. But I’ll tell her about Babette when we pass her house. This is the Stars Hollow High, I only went 3 years, then I transferred to Chilton ‘cause I got this scholarship and I really enjoyed it there, you know, uniforms, no peer pressure where clothing is concerned and so on. Anyway, they have a killer hockey team, so if you’re interested in sports-“ “I’m not” Lorelai interrupted immediately “Oookay, not interested in sports. Wow. How can you not be interested in sports?” “Aaah, I’m no guy?” “No kidding! Thank God you pointed that out, I wouldn’t have noticed it!” he smiled at her and she couldn’t help bit grin back at him lop-sided.