[heliveli]

die teile sind der hammer!!!!so süüüüß´die beiden..
mach schnell weiter!!!

[CrazyCake]

hmmm nich, dass du noch denkst hier liest keiner die FF...

mir gefällt sie auch sehr gut und es ist einfach mal was anderes, warte schon auf den nächsten teil

[MissLilli]

so, ich hatte heute einen extrem unproduktiven Tag (Unitechnisch gesehen natürlich) bin für eine Vorlesung nach Wien zurückgekommen (extra!!) und die war so zum wegschmeißen, also hab ich weitergeschrieben, 4 DinA4 Seiten und es wird richtig graphisch :lach: ich hab mich fast eingebunkert dort auf der Bank, weil ja jeder von links rechts und hinten schauen kann, was du da grad schreibst, und ich hätt nicht wollen, dass das jemand liest :lach:

naja, stay tuned sag ich nur

[MissLilli]

gut, hier ein neuer Teil (es geht noch weiter, aber nur im Tauschhandel gegen Feedback, eh schon wissen ) please R&R

“Wow, it’s beautiful out here” Lorelai stood on the bridge over the little pond and slowly turned in every direction. “Yeah, that’s where I come when I need time to think, to reflect or when I just wanna be alone, you know” “Sure, everybody should have a place like that” she sat down on the edge of the bridge and patted the spot next to her “Come, sit! So tomorrow’s the bid dance marathon, huh?” Luke nodded and stared into the water “You gonna watch?” she pressed the subject a little more “Nah, I-“ seeing the disappointed look in her eyes he quickly changed his mind “I’m gonna participate” What?? Where did that come from?
“Oh..” ‘So he has a date for tomorrow” she thought, disappointed ‘Whoa, I just said this to keep me from disappointing her and now she’s looking into the lake like her favorite pet had died. “So I guess I’ll meet your date tomorrow, huh?” ‘Aaah, there’s the rub’ “Actually, I didn’t mean participate as in dance, rather as in ‘Make the coffee for those unfortunate souls who do participate as in dance’” Her face lit up at his words “So we can go to the dance and watch?” He cringed at the thought, but only on the inside “Sure, we definitely will. Okay, it’s getting dark, come on” He got up and held out her hand, which she took and he pulled her up. Suddenly they were really close, Lorelai’s hand still in Luke’s and she looked up at him with a smile playing around the corners of her mouth. Luke took several steps back “Um, I’ll walk you back to the inn” ‘Huh? I thought that he wanted this as much as I did? What happened?’
“No I’ll be alright, don’t worry, I’ll find my way back, you don’t have to take me” Please accompany me, please Luke, I don’t wanna go back alone, pl- “You sure?” “Mhm” ‘Don’t make me Luke, pleeease’ “Well then, I’ll see you tomorrow, 11ish okay?” “Sure, whatever, see ya tomorrow” She averted her eyes, turned around and slowly walked back to the Inn.

[Corinna]

oh mann, ich erinner mich...
du warst diejenige, die es liebt beziehungsanfänge hinzuziehn....

die beiden sind doch sooooo süß zusammen!

jetzt will ich unbedingt gaanz schnell weiterlesen!

[MissLilli]

Geduld ist eine Tugend meine Liebe

:lach: abwarten (und Kaffee trinken )
neuer Teil kommt sofort*g*

[MissLilli]

Geduld ist eine Tugend meine Liebe

:lach: abwarten (und Kaffee trinken )
Den Good Morning Vietnam Joke konnte ich mir nicht verkneifen, sorry*hihi*


“Oh my God” Lorelai grabbed her alarm clock, held it really close to her face, squinted, groaned and threw the clock against the wall. She groggily got out of bed at 4 a.m in the morning, “jumped” into the shower and cursed the dark sky outside. She literally crawled into the diner, shuffled towards Luke, fell to his feet, hugged him around his knees and mumbled “Coffee….” uke shot an amused look at the crumpled heap at his feet, grabbed her around the waist and sat her on a stool, where she immediately slumped over and put her head on the counter. “What time’s it?” she mumbled “Early”he poured her her coffee and decided to refrain from telling her, how harmful that substance was and what it could do to your body. She looked at him from under half-closed eyes, grabbed her coffee mug and held on to it for dear life. “Hate early, must kill early….” she took a sip from her (extra strong, would-kill-a-normal-person-who’s-not-Lorelai) coffee and sat up straight with wide eyes

“Hello, baby, Good morning Vietnaaam!! Whoo-hoo” she brushed the hair out of her face “You’re the craziest person I ever met, you know that?” “Yes and I intend on keeping this prime spot!” she smirked at him “You ready to go?” “I’ll never be ready for the Stars Hollow Dance Marathon” he told her with a frown; she nudged him happily “Will you lighten up??” bouncing out of the diner she dragged him over to the dance floor, which was set up in the middle of the town square. Taylor bustled around, giving out last minute instructions and Miss Patty ran after him, carrying his megaphone. Lorelai leaned closer to Luke, pointed at Taylor and whispered “Who’s that guy??” “That’s Taylor, he’s something like the town mayor around here, he organizes all town events and wants to control the whole town” She formed a silent “Oh!” and smiles “You’ve got a lot of crazy people in this town…:” “Tell me about it…” he mumbled and had to suppress the sudden need to run away when he saw Babette approaching them, a huge smile on her face; he prepared himself for the worst.
“Luke, sugar (he cringed and Lorelai smirked at the ‘sugar’) I haven’t seen you on a town festival since …well, I don’t think I’ve seen you on one since your mother stopped dragging you here!” Lorelai looked at Luke, stunned “Ah I see, you went cause a her” she jerked her thumb towards Lorelai and continued whispering audibly to Luke “Well, make sure she has a terrific time!” she winked at him and waved as Luke pulled Lorelai away from the hazard called Babette. They stopped underneath a nearby tree and just watched the dance marathon for some time, each lost in his on thoughts.

After a while Lorelai rested her back against the trunk oh the tree and pulled Luke closer by his jacket so that he was standing right in front of her. She tugged playfully at the sides of his open jacket “Were you … I mean …. Did you go to this thing just because of …. me??”
“Yes” he replied quietly, leaving her looking flattered. She looked so adorable as a blush crept onto her cheeks and so he decided to just take a chance for once in his life. He moved closer and hesitantly brushed his lips over hers. To his surprise she put her hands on his hips, pulling him closer. A little startled by her positive reaction he pressed his lips firmer to hers. They pulled apart due to lack of oxygen, both panting heavily “Hi!” she smiled and he released a breath he didn’t even realize holding “Hi yourself” be brushed a strand of hair out of her face. She took his head into her hands and pulled him down for another kiss. As it became more demanding, he opened her legs with his knee, put his one leg between hers and pinned her to the tree.

[heliveli]

........oh my.....GOD!!!
is ja der Hammer!!!!
Das ist mal wieder super geschrieben..und typisch lorelai..
und der Good Morning Vietnam Witz war auch geil...

[CrazyCake]

gott hilfe... schon süchtig...
schreib bloß schnell weiter!

[MissLilli]

Meanwhile, Miss Patty nudged Babette and silently pointed over to the couple under the tree. Luke just slipped his hands underneath her t-shirt and stroked her back with his thumbs and judging by the look on her face, she was really enjoying it. “Wow, have you ever seen Luke going at it like that in public?” Miss Patty whispered excitedly to her friend

“No, but you’ve seen the way he looks at her, he’s probably completely lost in his own world where there’s only him and her and no one else. You think we should get a video camera and sell it over the internet?” Babette giggled at the thought

“I think Luke has finally found someone. Someone who’s not all serious like he is, someone who actually knows the word “fun”” Luke’s sister Liz chimed in. “Oh yeah, she looks like a lot of fun! Do you know her Liz?” “Not yet, but by the looks of it I soon will” she smiled at the two older ladies and disappeared again. After a while of watching Babette said dryly “My God, get a room!!”


Oblivious to the people around them, who had all turned their attention to these two, the continued making out like teenagers. When they broke apart, all flushed and out of breath, Lorelai licked her lips and smiled up at him. Luke couldn’t help but grin back at her like an idiot, adrenaline still surging through his body and he had to restrain himself really hard not to rip her clothes off and do it right there in the town square.

Lorelai dipped her head back against the tree and exhaled loudly. She closed her eyes and sighed when Luke moved to kiss her jawline and she wrapped her arms around his neck tightly, stroking his hair. He moved down so her neck and started sucking and nibbling at it; she had to bite doen hard on her ips to stop herself from whimpering. “Mhm, Luke” she breathed and cleared her throat “Luke!” “Hm?” he didn’t, couldn’t stop exploring her neck “Up!” she managed to get out. He complied and lifted her up, wrapping her legs around his waist. They both groaned at the contact of their jeans-clad groins and Luke wanted to move in for another kiss but Lorelai shook her head and put her hands firmly on his chest

“No Luke, when I said Up I mean Up as in Apartment-Up cause we could charge a lot of money from these people for the peep-show we’re putting on.” His eyes widened as he realized where they were standing and especially in what position they were standing. He loosened his grip on Lorelai’s waist and she slid down to stand again, burying her face in his shoulder.

Looking at the ground he didn’t see the gleeful looks on people’s faces and the happy looks they exchanged. Suddenly, Babette started clapping her hands and soon, everybody followed, it was like in a sappy movie or something. Lorelai and Luke slowly raised their gazes to the crowd and looked at each other in astonishment. She whispered in his ear “Told ya they were crazy" she beamed at him. He smiled at the crowd, took Lorelai’s hand and they walked back towards the Diner.
The people of Stars Hollow have never ever seen the grumpy Diner-Man happy like this. Or emotional like this. Either way, it was an improvement and they sincerely hoped that this relationship was going to work, for Luke really deserved it.