[karana]

jerk heißt sowas wie Dummkopf oder Idiot

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ah okay, vielen dank
mensch, bei dir lern ich ja lauter tolle sachen :biggrin: z.b. wie beleidige ich leute:biggrin:

[Lauren4eva]

Hey, ich hab leider keine Zeit fb zu geben un ich hab des chapter auch noch net gelesen aber ich hab nur noch 9 min. im I-net-Café un würd gerne noch ne mail an meine ellis schreiben, dass ich für die keine Postakrte verschwenden muss.. (bin in Hamburg auf Klassenfahrt) ^^
Aber ich verspreche, dass ich, gleich, wenn ich am Freitag wieder zu Hause bin, lesen werde, was das Zeug hält, und sofort Fb geben werde.....

ciao

und viele, viele Grüße aus Hamburg wünscht

Lauren4eva

:hi:

[Lauren4eva]

okay, jetzt bin ich wieder da, hab das Chapter gelesen und kann ENDLICH FB geben.....

Richtig, richtig, richtig, richtig gelungenes Kapitel. Das Hin und Her zwischen Rory, Laila, Sara und William und zwischen Lorelai & Luke war richtig gut.
Auch ICH wäre ganz sicher nicht so ruhig wie Rory geblieben. Ich habe zwei so kleine nervige Cousinen, die mich auch manchmal kicken und da werde ich immer RICHTIG sauer. Aber na ja....
Dass Luke und Lorelai endlich mal wieder das machen konnten, was Erwachsene nunmal so machen, wenn se ein bisschen Zeit haben, fand ich richtig toll. Fand ich auch super beschrieben.

Das wars auch schon mal wieder. War halt so gut, dass ich keine Kritikpunkte habe...

[karana]

Chapter 14: Needs

“William, what do you think you´re doing? Stop it right now!” Luke yelled when he saw Rory leaning over to pick up William´s bag, and Will pulling at her hair while she tried to stop him. William froze and took his hands out of Rory´s hair immediately. It was very rare that his father yelled in such an angry tone at him.
“God, you´re not a kid, you´re a five year old devil!” Rory yelled at him and pushed him away from her.
“Rory, stop it! The same goes for you!” Luke also yelled at her.
“What? This little brat is attacking me and I should just stand still? You can´t be serious!” Rory shot back. Lorelai had joined them, but not before sending the twins upstairs to get ready for their bath.
“William is not a brat!” She said and William ran to her and hugged her legs, while he buried his head in her stomach.
“No? What else? He insulted me, he spit at me, he kicked me, he yelled at me, he threw stuff at me and made me bleed and finally he bit me. That´s what I call a spoiled brat without any upbringing.” Rory told Lorelai very upset.
“You pulled at my arm and you called me a jerk first!” William yelled at her before he hid his face again.
“You two are completely nuts! You will go upstairs into your rooms and think about what you´ve done and I won´t hear a thing, or see you again until dinner. And afterwards I think the four of us will have a little talk!” Luke said and his voice was trembling with rage. William ran upstairs immediately, crying.
“You can not send me to my room! First because I don´t have one and second because I am twenty-six!” Rory told Luke.
“Then go into one of the twins’ rooms and don´t tell me what I can or can´t do! I am your father and if I tell you that you are to go to your room you will go!” Luke yelled. Rory gasped, but then hurried upstairs into one of the twins’ bedrooms. He was out of breath and watched Rory hurry up the stairs. Lorelai picked up William’s backpack from the floor and then stroked over Luke´s back.
“You realize that you just grounded my twenty-six year old daughter.” Lorelai remarked dryly.
Luke stared for a few more seconds at the stairs, then he turned towards his wife. He saw the small smile on her face and at first it confused him, but then he also grinned.
“Seems like I did.” He said and they both started laughing.
“You wanna be the good cop or the bad cop?” Lorelai asked when they had calmed down.
“Huh?” Luke said confused.
“You wanna be the bad one and go and bath the twins or you wanna be the good one and go and soothe William and Rory?” Lorelai smiled.
“I can´t deal with them at the moment, because I think they are both completely nuts! William is acting like a devil and Rory is acting like a five year old.” Luke said and Lorelai felt a rant coming.
“Okay, so you’re the bad one and I´m the good and pretty one. As always!” Lorelai smiled and did her famous hair-flip.
“Of course!” Luke only smiled, slung his arm around her waist, and together they walked upstairs.


Luke walked into into Laila´s room where he found all three girls, the twins already only in their bathrobes.
“Hey, you two, come on let´s get you into the bathtub.” Luke said.
“Daddy, why is Rory mad at you?” Laila wanted to know, while Rory was sitting on a bed and pretended to be reading.
“Because I sent her up to her room.” Luke answered.
“But this is my room!” Laila told him.
“I know, but Rory doesn´t have a room.”
“And why did you send her to Laila´s room?” Sara wanted to know.
“Because she was acting immature and was arguing with William.” At this Rory huffed.
“What is im...immatule?” Laila asked.
“Immature, is the word princess. It means that an adult is acting like a little baby.” Luke said, looked at Rory and then walked into the bathroom with his daughters. Sara suddenly started to laugh.
“Does Rory need a pacifier and diapers then?” She giggled and Laila joined her.
“Oh you two are clowns, you know that?” Luke had to smile.
“No, we are pretty princesses” Laila smiled and Luke just had to kiss them both, because they were too cute, which he would never say, of course.


Lorelai meanwhile went into William´s room and found him crying on his bed.
“Hey honey, can I come in?” She asked and walked in when he remained silent. She sat beside him on the bed and rubbed his back.
“Will, come on calm down. It´s not that bad that you have to stay in your room. Dinner will be ready soon.”
“Daddy yelled at me because of her! He never yells at me like that!” William sniffed and crawled into his mother´s lap.
“He didn´t yell at you because of Rory, but because you were biting and pulling on her hair.” Lorelai told him calmly.
“She pulled on my arm first!” He protested.
“We will talk about that later, okay? I think you should also take a bath or shower before dinner.” She stroked over his hair and placed a kiss on his forehead.
“Okay.” He mumbled and dried his eyes on her shoulder.
“You get your pajamas and underwear and undress and I will be back in a sec´.” She gave him a little smile, stood up and walked into Laila´s room.


“What are you reading?” She asked Rory who still sat on the bed.
“You don´t really wanna talk about the book that I am reading! Let´s talk about what Luke is thinking talking to me like that!” Rory said upset.
“Like what?” Lorelai played dumb.
“Like I am four and he can send me up to my room.” Rory clarified.
“It might have to do with the fact, that you acted like a four year old. And I don´t know if you realized it, but you are in your room, which means he is still able to do it!” Lorelai grinned.
“You think that´s funny? No one other than you ever sent me to my room.” Rory complained.
“No one other than me was around. That´s the disadvantage of having a father who is around.” Lorelai still smiled and sat down on the bed.
“It´s strange. Before it was only us fighting, but not you ganging up with your husband against me. You were always on my side.”
“I am not ganging up on you with him. But William has a huge problem with you and I told you and I warned you. It might have been selfish sending him away with you. Luke had this uneasy feeling all morning. I think he knew that something like that was going to happen.” Lorelai sighed.
“Then why did you... oh no, I think I don´t want to know.” Rory said when she saw the naughty smile on Lorelai´s face and the realization dawned on her.
“Well, let´s just say we made very good use of the time alone. And now what are you reading?” Lorelai grinned and took the book out of Rory´s hands.
“Winnie the Pooh? You´re reading Pooh-bear stories?” She started to laugh.
“Well, there´s nothing around and because I am not allowed to go downstairs and grab one of my own books....” Rory waved with the book.
“Well, I can´t help you with that, Luke spoke and so it will be. Enjoy!” Lorelai laughed and left the room.


Back in William´s room, he was already waiting for her.
“Hey, you naked frog, have you seen my cute son?” Lorelai asked him.
“I am not cute!” William protested.
“No, you are a naked frog, they aren´t cute. But my son William is very cute” She grinned and took his pajamas.
“Mommy, I am not cute.” He said pointedly with his hands on his hips.
“That´s what I said, Mr. Frog.!” She laughed. William ran to her and slung his arms around her middle.
“Mommy, I am not a frog, I am just naked because you told me that I have to take a shower.” He explained.
“Oh right, there you are! Then let´s get you into the shower.” She smiled, placed a kiss on his hair and together they walked into the bathroom where Luke was dressing the twins.
“My, my girls, aren´t we pretty?” Lorelai smiled when she saw them.
“Mommy, can I get nail polish?” Laila asked.
“Maybe after dinner.” Lorelai answered and helped William into the tub.
“These two are too young for nail polish.” Luke grumped.
“I love you even more when you´re that grumpy, honey.” Lorelai laughed.


The twins discussed their nail polish issues with Lorelai during dinner, William babbled about Meeko and why he didn´t like carrots, and Luke and Rory remained silent.
Afterwards Luke tidied up and Lorelai went into the living room with the kids, waiting for him.
William stayed close to her the whole time and made it so that Rory couldn´t get near her, so Rory played with the twins.
When Luke came, he sat beside Lorelai, took William and placed him in his lap, and kissed his cheek.
Rory knew that the big talk was coming and also sat down on the couch.
“Hey you two, why don´t you go upstairs and check out mommy´s nail polish in the bathroom. You can decide which one you would like, but don´t open them without me!” Lorelai told the twins and they ran upstairs.
Silence followed and Lorelai was the one to break it.
“Maybe the two of you should just explain one after the other what happened today and why you acted like that.” She said with raised eyebrows and looked at Rory.
“When we drove to the park, William insisted on sitting in the front seat, so I let him. Then he played with the radio, made the music blast and I told him to stop it. But instead he turned up the volume. When we arrived he walked extra slow and I was scared that he would get lost. When we arrived at the slides it was always the same: We wanted to move on to the next, but he kept running away, so I tried to pull him with me. I grabbed his arm and he pretended to be hurt and screamed. An elderly lady came and bought him a popsicle, and suddenly he grinned at me. He kept provoking me the whole time. He spit, he insulted me, he kicked me, and finally he gave me this nice scratch on my cheek. And don´t tell me that he didn´t know what he was doing, because he knew!” Rory said and shot William an angry glare.
“And what did you do?” Luke sighed.
“Me? I tried to keep him under control, which is impossible, because he has no upbringing and no respect.” She said.
“Rory!” Lorelai warned her.
“What? I mean let´s face it: He is a spoiled brat. He is like Samara, torturing others for his own fun!” Rory said upset.
“You´re comparing you´re little brother to Samara? I don´t think he called you and said ‘seven days’?!” Lorelai said.
“What are you talking about?” Luke asked angrily.
“Samara.. the ring...seven days and then you´re gonna die?! A movie Luke!”
“I don´t think this is about a stupid movie, but more about the fact that he,” He looked at William.
“Seems to have completely forgotten anything we told him about his hitting, spitting, and kicking. You listen to me son and I will say it for the last time now: You will not hit, kick, spit, pull on hair, insult, or damage other people in any way. Do you hear me?” Luke asked William.
“But she pulled at my arm and she called me a jerk!” William started to cry.
“Do you hear me?” Luke asked and held William tight, when he started to squirm.
“Yes.” William mumbled then.
“And you will not insult your brother. He is not a crazy murderer and he isn´t a spoiled brat, like you said. And if he is, then he is just as much one as you are.”
“What?” Rory shrieked. Luke put William on the floor.
“William go upstairs and look after your sisters.” Luke told him and William ran off. Lorelai looked from Rory to Luke and she had no idea what would come.
“I have been observing this for too long now and I have had enough! You were always like a daughter to me and I love you just as much, you know that. When you freaked out after our marriage and after William was born, I thought that was normal and a one-time thing. Boy, was I wrong. I am so fed up with your behavior, that I don´t even want to look at you! At first you move back into our house, just to move back out when it got a little louder. I said nothing to that, but it was clear, that three little kids won´t be exactly quiet. You barge into our house anytime you want, sometimes with Logan or even more friends, expecting us to drop everything and just be there for you. I never said anything to that either. You call in the middle of the night, waking the whole house up, whenever you want and whenever something happened, and the drunken calls in between don´t make it better. You decide when you have time, you decide when you visit, you decide when you call, you decide everything, because we are always there. You act like it is still only you and your mother and you are still sixteen. But we have three little kids now, Rory, three. And while I was rotating together with your grandmother over the last year, to somehow deal with the fact that your mother had lost her mind, I never saw you once stopping by to help or even to ask how we were doing. The only occasion on which I saw you was to wallow and to block our TV while you were keeping Lorelai from her kids and from me. The rare time she was not working she spent with you, and only with you. You weren´t interested in your siblings, or me, or your mother, you were only interested in yourself. But this isn´t how a family works. It´s about being there for each other and caring for each other, not everybody doing that for only one family member. I never expected a thank-you from you, that I picked you up more than once in the middle of the night at a party, because you and Logan were too drunk to drive. I never expected it for the meals I cooked you or the coffee I made in the middle of the night, although I had to work the next morning. But I´ve had enough of that. You ran away to London, not even asking how we felt about that, just to be with Logan, who had already cheated on you repeatedly. We told you to leave him, but you didn´t listen. Again you called only when you had problems and made Lorelai worry, but when we needed you we couldn´t reach you, or you were busy and hung up on us.
And now that the kids finally have their mother back and for themselves for the first time, you barge in here in the middle of the night, wake us up, start fighting with William, and tell us what bad parents we are? William is jealous and hurt. And because he is five years old, for gods sake, he doesn´t know how to deal with that other than acting the way he does. I would have hoped for a little more sensibility on your side, but obviously I asked for too much. I should have known. I know that you are hurting about Logan and I know that you need a friend and you need to talk to your mother. But if I shove aside your needs, like you always do with ours, and put the needs of the three upstairs first, then I have to tell you: It would be better if you would leave again. We need time for each other, time for the kids, and time to put this family back together. If you don´t want to work on that, because you have different needs, then go!” Luke finished his angry rant. Lorelai and Rory were both staring at him; Rory with tears in her eyes and Lorelai was just speechless.
“I never thought that you would talk to me like that. I always thought of you as a father, but I was wrong. You are the father of my three siblings and nothing more. My father wouldn´t talk to me like that!” Rory then sobbed.
“I talk to you like that because I am your father, otherwise I would just throw you out!” Luke said.
Rory burst in tears and ran upstairs.
“Luke?!” Lorelai said after another minute of silence. She sounded surprised, shocked, angry, and curious at the same time.
“I think I will go for a walk. I will be back when the three have to go to bed.” Luke said and left the house.
TBC

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wow!
lol luke.....nicht nur lore ist sprachlos...ich bin es auch! wie ein vater, aber ehrlich lol und lores reaktion ist so typisch für ne mutter lol

karana, du hast etwas geschafft, was bis jetzt noch keiner geschafft hat(zumindest nicht das ich mich erinnere) (du hast schon mehrere dinge bei mir geschaft...z.b. das ich ne englische FF les) aber dieses kapitel hat mich gefesselt. Normaler weise muss ich zwischendurch mal 3 sek. wegschauen, kurz wieder nen gedanken schaffen, aber ich habe dieses kapitel verschlungen, in mich aufgesogen Hammer! Ich war so gefesselt, dass ich nicht weggesehen habe, nichtmal geblinzelt hab(und wenn doch, dann zu wenig)...mir liefen die tränen am ende und die augen brannten(ich hab nicht geheult!)
whoa war das toll.
die idee ist ja schon mal sehr geil. Der Anfang lol hammer, ich hab viel gelacht. man war das klasse. luke schickt rory in ihr zimmer, die ja kein zimmer hat, wie geil! behandelt sie wie ein kind XD geil lol das hat sie aber auch verdient
dann das buch von rory war mit sicherheit schwer zu lesen XD
es gab so viel was so unglaublich lustig war, wo ich mich weggeschmissen hab(scheiß auf die rechtschreibung...)
dann seine "rede ans volk"...äh "rede an rory" ENDLICH; danke! das braucht die doch

ich fand es süß wie lore mit den kids umgeht....halt guter bulle. das gab dem kapitel nämlich auch was "liebevolles"
lukes rolle als böser bulle war klasse XD sollte er öfters machen

was ich damit sagen will, hammer kapitel...ich hab es echt verschlungen....moment ich sag es mal anders: Ich, Anne, habe einen Englischen Text förmlich verschlungen, war gefesselt, obwohl ich sonst sehr, sehr ,sehr,sehr lesefaul bin was englische texte angeht.
Vielen dank für dieses Kapitel! ich freu mich echt aufs nächste

Ach ja, wieder ne Vokalbelfrage: Was heißt "nuts"?

[karana]

Wow, danke für das nette Fb, ich fühle mich geschmeichelt.

nuts heißt in dem Zusammenhang sowas wie wie verrückt oder wahnsinning.
Wenn man sagt "she's driving me nuts" heißt das soviel wie "Die macht mich irre".

[karana]

Hey, ich weiß doppelpost, aber ich kann ja nix für wenn ihr nix mehr schreibt.
Wurde gerade daran erinnert hier mal wieder ein update reinzusetzen, also mache ich das doch glatt, sogar mit 2 Kapiteln, damit ihr wieder mit FF gleich auf seid! Bednkt euch bei Lauren4eva, sonst hätte ich hier nix mehr gepostet.

Chapter 15: Beach in the house


Lorelai needed a few minutes to absorb what had just happened before she finally understood it.
At first she wanted to yell at Luke for speaking to Rory the way he had done, but the longer she thought about it, the clearer it became for her that this wasn´t only about Rory´s behavior, but just as much about her own. She knew that Luke had been hurt and had missed her during the last year, but she hadn´t been aware that it had affected him that much.
She sat in the living-room and at some point she remembered his words.
“You know I can´t remember a single occasion during the last year when it was important if I understood or tolerated your actions. And that´s okay, it´s just me! It´s not important if I understand.”
“But don´t stand here and want me to understand and help! You made your bed, now lie in it!”
“I mean, I have everything covered it´s not like it would change anything if you come home late at night and leave in the early morning hours or not. I would miss you sleeping next to me, yes, but I´m talking about the kids and their routine now.”
“He held up a mirror in front of you, and showed you what you´re doing to him. Showed you how you hurt him. And, honestly, I can understand him.”
“It hurt me to always tell them that you would not come home, that you wouldn´t be there. They were so disappointed and sometimes I just failed. I yelled at them, because I missed you too. I took my bad mood out on them.” His sentences flew around in her head and she could have kicked herself.
“God, I´m such an idiot!” She sighed, shook her head, and buried it in her hands for some time.


Then she walked upstairs and found the kids in the bathroom.
All of her nail polish bottles were lined up on the bathroom floor and Sara, Laila, and William were lying in front of it, discussing the colors.
“Mommy, can men also paint their nails?” Sara asked.
“Sure, David Beckham does it all the time.” Lorelai said and sat down next to them.
“See, I told you!” Sara grinned at William.
“I don´t wanna paint my nails. Daddy never paints his nails.” William scoffed.
“Oh yes, his toe nails, all the time.” Lorelai grinned.
“You´re lying. Where is daddy?” William said.
“Uh, um, he... he went for a walk.” Lorelai told him.
“Mommy, is Rory leaving now?” Laila asked.
“Why whould Rory be leaving?” Lorelai asked innocently.
“Because daddy yelled at her that she should leave.” Laila told her.
“You heard your daddy´s little rant, huh? Obviously these walls are not as sound-proof as we thought they were. Thank god for the little interruptions at night.” Lorelai muttered the last part.
“Do you want Rory to leave?” She asked them then.
“Yes!” William yelled immediately.
“Well, your answer I knew, but what about you two, sweeties? Do you want Rory to leave?” She looked at the girls and they looked down. Then Sara spoke up.
“Mommy, always when Rory comes you have no time for us. And playing on the beach with you and daddy was fun and then she comes and Daddy is yelling and William is crying. I want her to leave.” She said.
“Me too.” Laila admitted. Lorelai looked at them and her eyes teared up. This was all her fault.
“You know Rory and Logan had some trouble and that´s why she thought it would be nice to have some fun with us. I will talk with your daddy when he comes back and if he wants to then I will ask Rory to leave, okay?” Lorelai tried to smile at them.
“Okay.” They agreed.
“Mommy, can you paint my nails purple?” Sara asked a second later and the topic was dropped.
“Sure. But only your toe nails, otherwise your daddy will kill me.” Lorelai said and opened the nail polish.


After every toe nail was painted, except William’s, it was bedtime for the kids and Lorelai became worried when she had finished the story and Luke still wasn´t back. She brought William, Laila, and Sara into their rooms and tucked them in. She found Rory in Sara´s room and gestured for her to follow her outside.
She closed the door behind her and together they walked downstairs and into the kitchen because it was the farthest from the stairs.
“Listen Rory, I know you´re upset and I know that not everything that Luke said was true...”
“Not everything?”
“and I want you to know that his rant was not totally directed towards you. The last year obviously affected Luke more than we both thought and at least half the stuff he told you he should have directed at me. I´m sorry for that and please don´t be too angry with him. I´m sure he will apologize as soon as he has calmed down a bit.” Lorelai said and rubbed Rory´s right arm.
“It really hurt what he said. Am I really that selfish?” Rory asked quietly.
“Well I can´t say that you did a lot for our family and your relationship with your sisters isn´t really outstanding and the one with Will is ... well, let´s be honest: it´s a nightmare. But this is just as much my fault as it is yours if not even more so. I´m sorry I put you in this position.” Lorelai sighed.
“It´s okay. But you said you didn´t agree with all of what Luke said, so you agreed with some of it?” Rory asked with raised eyebrows.
“Well, yeah. You can´t deny that you still call me in the middle of the night, that you only stop by if you want something or need something even if it is just for Luke to cook you some decent food.”
Rory gasped.
“That´s not true!” She said.
“Rory, I think you argued enough with us for today and I don´t want to get into this now. I have to find Luke. And because you did it so often over the years: Keep an eye on your siblings, they are supposed to stay in their beds. And no blood-bath until we are back!” Lorelai ordered with some sarcasm in her voice and left the house.


She didn´t really know where to look first, so she walked into the city-center and searched there for him, maybe he had grabbed a beer or something. But he didn´t. It was already dark when she came back from her trip to the city so she walked through the house to be sure he wasn´t already back before she walked into the garden, to the pool, and then down to the beach.
From some distance she could see him sitting on the cold sand, staring at the sea, and relieve flooded her, although she wasn´t sure why.
“Hey.” She said quietly and stroked over his hair.
“Hey” He said and turned his head. She stroked over his cap-less head for some time, before she sat down beside him.
“I´m sorry.” She said after another minute of silence.
“Hm?” He said and looked at her.
“I´m sorry. I´m sorry for leaving you alone with the kids. I´m sorry for not being there. I´m sorry for not listening to you. I´m sorry for neglecting you.” She explained.
“Lorel...” He started but she interrupted him.
“No, please listen. While I was sitting in the living room today, after your outburst, snippits of what you said a week ago came back to me. I was worried about the kids and about losing their trust and their love. I apologized a thousand times to Will, but never really to you. You are important to me. Your opinion is important to me. It matters, you matter. Don´t hide yourself behind the kids, because you are just as important, we are just as important, Luke.” She told him and he resumed staring out at the sea.
“Luke, please look at me.” She requested and placed her hand on his stubbly cheek. Slowly he turned his head.
“I missed you, too. So much, honey.” She said, barely audible over the crashing waves. Luke remained silent and looked her in the eyes, as if to see if she was telling the truth. Then he pulled her to him and hugged her. He buried his head in the crook of her neck. From time to time he placed some kisses on her skin, but held her tight.
“I´m sorry. I shouldn´t have yelled at Rory, because it´s not as bad as...” He started and she placed a finger on his lips.
“Sshhh.” She shushed him and smiled before she kissed him. The kiss remained slow and romantic, but he pulled her in his lap at some point.
“Luke?” Lorelai whispered and pulled back after a few minutes.
“Yeah?” He whispered back.
“Hold me for a while?” She asked. He just smiled and opened his legs for her to sit in between. She turned around and leaned her back against his chest. He leaned against one of the rocks and slung both arms around her, to pull her tightly against him. She played with his fingers and stroked over his arms while they both listened to the sounds of the waves and looked out at the sea for a long time.
After nearly half an hour Lorelai turned her head and looked up at him. He had his nose buried in her hair and his eyes closed. She pulled her head away and he opened his eyes. She smiled up at him and he returned her smile and placed a kiss on her nose. Lorelai pressed her lips against his chin one time and then a second time before she captured his lips with hers. Her tongue teased his bottom-lip for some time before he opened his mouth and allowed her entrance.
Without breaking apart, Lorelai turned around and straddled him again. The kiss was just as slow as the one before, and had nothing to do with the heated kisses from the entire day. One of his hands caressed her face, while the other played with her curls. Her hands were busy unbuttoning his shirt and then taking it off of him. She kissed down his throat, over his shoulders, to his chest where she drew circles with her tongue and grazed his skin. When she made her way back up, their lips found each other again and Luke took off her blue top. It was chilly at the beach, and so she pressed herself even tighter against his warm body when the cold air touched her skin. He slung his arms around her again and lay her slowly down on the sand, staring into her eyes while doing so.
She smiled up at him, kissed him with a bit more passion, unbuckled his belt, opened his zipper, and tried to pull his jeans down. When it didn´t work the way she wanted she pushed him off of her and rolled them over. She kneeled beside him just to pull his jeans off and then lay down on top of him, pressing herself against him. They kissed again and Luke caressed her back, then he hooked his fingers in her skirt and pulled it down as far as he could. His hands stroked back up her back and opened the clasp of her bra.
He rolled them over again, sand from his hair rained down on Lorelai´s skin, and caused her to giggle. She stopped when he took her skirt off completely and kissed down her legs in the process. He took her cold feet in his warm hands for a few seconds and placed a kiss on each toe before he made his way back up to her. He placed kisses on her stomach and she laughed, his stubble tickled her skin. Her laughs subsided when he took her bra off and placed his lips on her own...


“I think the shower earlier was a waste of water, because now I have sand in all kinds of inappropriate places!” Lorelai laughed a while later and put her shirt back on. Luke only pulled her to him and kissed her again.
“Maybe it´s not that bad.” She grinned and he nodded.
When he had buttoned his shirt and they had found her flip-flops they slung their arms around each other and made their way back up to the house.
“I can´t believe we did it again!” Luke suddenly laughed and stroked some sand off of Lorelai´s cheek.
“After the last time I didn´t think I could ever convince you to do it again. Even if we conceived Will that night.” She also laughed.
“You´re still convinced about that? I thought we narrowed it down to some time during the honeymoon.”
“I like the thought that it happened that night. At least the embarrassment would have been worth it!” She laughed.
They unlocked the front door and were greeted by all of their offspring.
“Mommy, Daddy!” The three kids yelled, ran towards them, and jumped up into their arms.
“What are you doing down here? You should be asleep by now!” Lorelai laughed when Sara kissed her cheek repeatedly.
“Where have you been? These three kept asking for their daddy to kiss them goodnight and we got worried.”
“My oh my, seems like we are not allowed to leave the house for more than a few minutes.” Lorelai smiled at Luke and gave Sara a big kiss.
“A few minutes? You were gone for more than two hours!” Rory shrieked, but Luke and Lorelai only smiled.
“Okay, bedtime for you three! And Rory I would like to talk to you when these three are in their beds.” Luke announced and he and Lorelai walked towards the stairs with their kids in their arms.
“Geez, where have you guys been? You´re leaving a trail of sand behind you. The whole beach is on the floor in here!” They heard Rory´s voice when they walked up the stairs and both started to laugh.


TBC

[karana]

Filler chapter before the big bang:

Chapter 16: Jeffrey


After they had put the kids into their beds and kissed them goodnight, Lorelai walked into the bathroom to take another shower, the third that day.
Luke walked downstairs and found Rory in the living room on the couch, watching TV.
“We talked with Laila and she would be happy if you would sleep in the other bed in her room the next few days.” Luke said and sat down next to her.
“That´s nice and I gladly accept the offer for tonight, but I will leave tomorrow.” Rory answered. She didn´t sound angry. Hurt, maybe, but not angry.
“Rory, listen: I´m sorry I freaked out and I shouldn´t have yelled at you. But I am not going to take back what I said, at least not the basics, although part of the stuff I blamed you for is not your fault, but your mother’s. We talked about it and we´re good. And I don´t want you to leave, just because I lost it.” He told her sincerely.
“I don´t know what exactly happened to make you freak out like that, but I understand part of it. I know I wasn´t there for you or the kids and I can´t blame anybody for the negative picture they have about me. I promise you, that I will work it out with you and them someday, but at the moment I just can´t deal with it. I need someone who is there for me. I called Paris and Lane while you were gone and I will fly back to Yale tomorrow and Paris and Lane are going to come over. We are going to have a girl’s night, talk, gossip... “
“Eat lots of crap.” Luke finished with a smile.
“Yeah, that too.” Rory smiled back.
“Good night Rory.” Luke said, then stood up, kissed her on the forehead, and went back up into the bedroom.


“And everything grey in pleasant-ville again?” Lorelai asked when he sat down on the bed beside her.
“Huh?” Luke asked confused, Lorelai giggled.
“Did she accept your apology?” She clarified.
“I think so, but she said she wants to go back to Yale tomorrow to spend time with Lane and Paris.” Luke told her.
“Oh.” Lorelai said disappointed.
“I´m sorry.” Luke said as both of his hands dove into his hair, he closed his eyes and sighed. Lorelai rolled onto her stomach and moved closer to him. She took his hands in hers and gave them a squeeze.
“I never wanted to drive Rory out of the house, I´m really sorry.” He told her again.
“You didn´t. I would have liked her to stay, but maybe it is better. We can spend some time with the three little one´s, they sure could use some undivided attention, at least from my side. From you, I don´t know, maybe they are sick of you already because they saw you so much during the last year.” She grinned.
“Maybe. Maybe I should go and look for some blonde chick to spend the rest of my holidays with, while you are looking after the three monsters.” Luke grinned back, which earned him a slap on the chest.
“Don´t you dare.” Lorelai whispered and kissed him.


The next morning they were woken up by the ringing of the phone.
“Oh, no, who is that?” Lorelai mumbled and searched for the phone on the nightstand, with one hand and closed eyes. It took her some seconds to find it and, still with closed eyes, she answered it.
“Yeah?” She asked sleepily.
“Lorelai, I thought I taught you to never answer the phone this way.” Emily´s voice came through the speaker.
“Was that it? Can I go back to sleep?” Lorelai yawned.
“If you give me Luke before you do then you can, I didn´t want to talk to you.”
“You didn´t?” Lorelai asked, sat up and opened her eyes.
“No, I want to talk to Luke. Can you get him on the phone please?” Emily demanded.
“Luke, Luke! My mother’s on the phone for you.” Lorelai said and nudged him. He only held out his hand, still with closed eyes and took the phone from her.
“Good morning, Emily.” Luke said sleepily.
“Good morning, Luke, I hope I didn´t wake you up.” Emily said. Lorelai, who had put the speaker on, so that she could hear everything, huffed.
“It´s okay.” Luke only said. Lorelai huffed again.
“Now as for the reason why I am calling. You remember I told you about Jeffrey?” She asked and Lorelai looked at Luke with raised eyebrows.
“Yes, I remember Jeffrey.” Luke nodded and sat up.
“Who is Jeffrey?” Lorelai whispered to Luke, who just placed a finger over his lips to signal her to be quiet.
“He stopped by yesterday, with a huge... thing and then he stuck it in and made a mess.” Emily explained and Lorelai burst into laughter. Luke grinned and placed his hand over her mouth.
“After he made that mess, he decided to get on top of the roof.” Emily went on.
“Oh my god, this is beyond dirty! Who is Jeffrey? Her callboy?” Lorelai laughed.
“But when he left, after nearly three hours and an incredible mess, he didn´t fix it to my satisfaction and now I wanted to ask you if you could stop by when you get back and look at it?”Emily asked.
“Gross mom, he is my husband, I am not going to share!” Lorelai said loud enough for Emily to hear.
“What is she talking about Luke?” Emily asked.
“I have no idea.” He lied and grinned at Lorelai.
“So could you stop by and fix it?” Emily asked again.
“Geez, mom, get dad some viagra.” Lorelai whispered and Luke had to laugh.
“Yes, I will stop by as soon as we get back.” Luke told her and they said their good-byes.
“Tell me that you are not having an affair with my mother.” Lorelai said as soon as he hung up.
“I am not having an affair with your mother.” He told her with a serious expression.
“But with her gardener or what?” Lorelai pouted and lay her upper body on top of his.
“Ah geez.” was all Luke said before he kissed her.
“Good morning beautiful.” He smiled when he pulled back.
“Luuuuke?” She pouted instead of returning his greeting.
“Yes?”
“Who is Jeffrey?” She wanted to know.
“That you want to know!” He only grinned and got out of the bed.
“Luuuke.” She whined.
“I´m going to make breakfast, any special requests?” He asked and slipped on sweatpants and a shirt.
“Jeffrey?” She asked with a pout and puppy-eyes.
“I don´t know the recipe for that one.” He said, kissed her again, and walked out of the bedroom.


Downstairs he found a notice on the kitchen door saying that Rory had already left and that she would call once they were back at Stars Hollow. Luke took the paper, sighed, and walked into the kitchen, where, to his big surprise, he found William coloring.
“Will, what are you doing in here? I thought we told you not to go into the kitchen alone.” Luke said.
“But I wasn´t alone. I heard something and thought it was you, but it was only Rory and so I stayed here and superlized her so that she wouldn’t set the kitchen on fire.” William defended himself and Luke had to laugh.
“You mean you supervised her, Will. Good morning.” Luke smiled and placed a kiss on William´s head.
“Morning daddy.” William yawned.
“How long have you been up?” Luke wanted to know while he filled the coffee-machine.
“I don´t know. But I colored two Winnie-the-Poohs since Rory left.” William told him and held up the coloring book for Luke to see.
“Really great Will. But why don´t you set the table while I make breakfast?” Luke suggested.
“Okay.” William shrugged and went to work.


“Daddy?” William asked after some time. Luke was making the pancakes now and William placed the cups on the table.
“Mmh?”
“Did Rory leave because of me?” William wanted to know.
“Why are you asking?” Luke asked back. He didn´t really know what to say to that.
“Because I think mommy will be sad and maybe she will leave also. I was in the kitchen the whole time and watched Rory leave, because I thought maybe mommy wanted to go with her and I wanted to say bye.” William admitted.
“Will, Rory left because because we talked to her and told her that you and your sisters are more important than anything else and that we want to have a nice time with you. And because she said that she needs someone who has a lot of time right now, we said that we can´t help her at the moment. She understood that and decided to go and spend some time with Paris and Lane, because she loves you too and wants you to be happy.” Luke explained and hoped that William wouldn´t sense that he was not telling the truth a hundred percent.
“So mommy will stay with us here and not go to Rory or the hotel because I wasn´t behaving at the water-world?”
“Will, I think you know that your behavior towards Rory was not acceptable. I think you should apologize to her when you see her the next time, because she was very sad about that. And your mother will stay with us the whole time and she will be around more after we get back .”
“She said that?”
“She promised it.”
“Do you believe her?”
“I believe her.” Luke nodded.
“Okay, then I do too.” William decided and nodded approvingly in Luke´s direction.
“Good.” Luke said smiling and ruffled through William´s hair, then flipped the next pancake.


After William had woken up Lorelai and the twins, they all sat together and ate breakfast.
“Luke?” Lorelai asked.
“Mmh?” He grunted, knowing what was coming.
“Jeffrey?” She said with a pout and puppy eyes.
“Jeez, mommy, why are you saying Jeffrey every few seconds?” Laila asked annoyed.
“Because your grandmother is having an affair and your daddy knows it and he won´t tell me!” Lorelai yammered.
“What?” William asked shocked. He did not know what an affair was, but he knew that it wasn´t good.
“Don´t listen to your crazy mother, she doesn´t know what she is talking about.” Luke told the kids and Lorelai´s pout got more extreme.
“Daddy what are we doing today?” Sara ignored her mother.
“Why are you asking your daddy?” Lorelai immediately asked.
“Because daddy decides.” Sara shrugged.
“So not true! I have the power here and he is my willing slave.” Lorelai said and laughed evily.
“You wish.” was all Luke said and the kids laughed.


They spent the rest of their day on the beach. While they lay next to each other on their towels Lorelai whispered “Jeffrey” from time to time and no matter what Luke did, she wouldn´t stop.
“Okay that´s it!” Luke said annoyed after three hours and jumped up.
“What? No, Lukey please stay.” She whined and grabbed his hand, to stop him from going back to the house.
“Then shut up already! I won´t let a stupid guy who tried to repair your mother’s fireplace ruin my vacation!” He said.
“Ha! I win I win!” Lorelai laughed and rolled around in the sand, then suddenly stopped.
“What?” Luke asked smiling and sat down beside her again.
“I just remembered, that when we get back a week later there will be the chocolate festival, isn´t that great?” She smiled back.
“I am not going this year!” He told her.
“I bet you will.” She grinned and kissed him.


TBC

[Lauren4eva]

jahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Die erste ^^

Also: War einfach nur genial geschrieben, ich wollte ja eigentlich nur ein bisschen Beschäftigung, aber dass es gleich 2 Teile sein mussten... ^^ na ja, musste halt mein Morgen bzw. Vormittag dran glauben ^^

War einfach nur klasse geschrieben und dass Lorelai Luke im 2. Teil immer und immer wieder mit "Jeffrey" genervt hat, fand ich einfach nur urkomisch

Freue mich (mal wieder) auf einen weiteren Teil und hoffe, dass er relativ bald kommt...