Say you missed me [complete]

Say you missed me [complete]

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17.07.2007, 13:27

Hey...

Finde den ersten Teil schon mal sehr vielversprechend! Big Grin

Big Grin

Ich finde du hast den Teil einfach sehr gut geschrieben.
Vor allem das Ende des Teils war toll! Freu mich für Rory und Jess, dass sie endlich wieder zueinander gefunden haben!
Würde es toll finden wenn du auch noch ein bisschen Spannung einbauen würdest. Also ich meine, dass Rory und Jess vl nicht wieder ganz so schnell wieder als Paar glänzen sollen. Bringt mehr Aufregung. Wink

Wink

ABER, ich finde deine FF wirklich ausgezeichnet, also mach weiter so!

Freu mich schon auf den nächsten Teil!

Lg
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