[Meffi]

uuuh, du hast ihn ongestellt (ich bin ja in den Genuss gekommen ihn früher zu lesen)!!

Feedback gibts gleich, ich bin aber grad erst aus der Schule und muss erst was essen.

so viel jetzt schon mal: der Teil war toll!!!

EDIT: Sooo, fertig... hier dein Feedback!

1. Ich bin NICHT gemein..okay, maybe a little...

Gib es doch zu: du bist ein bisschen viel little gemein!

2. Hasst mich doch nicht....dann schreib ich nicht mehr weiter....
*lol*

1.Das ist NICHT witzig! Bei so ner ernstern sache gibts kein *lol*!
2.Ich hasse dich aber trotzdem nicht... wenn ich weiter "betareader sein" darf...^^ BitteBitteBitteBitteBitte!!!

@Meffi: Ich hoffe die Pudding hat geschmeckt..und ich will gaaaaanz viiieeel FB von dir...wenn ich doch soooo nett zu dir bin...*lol*

Der Pudding...(ich weiß, ich nerve langsam)
Und ja, er hat geschmecktabber:!
gaaaaanz viiieeel FB gibt jetzt gleich,
weil du soooo nett zu mir bist... (wenn ich mal davon ausgehe dass der neue Teil bald bei mir im Postfach liegt...)

Okay, hier ist der vorletzte Teil:

Der vorletzte schon??? Neeeein!!!:heul:

"...I know, this must be weird for you. But always remember, concerned and caring people made this...."

Diesen Satz fand ich toll... ich will ja nicht wie mein Deutschlehrer klingen, aber ich mag Alliterationen

"Always remember", Dean said.
Then he vanished from the TV. For a few moments there was blackness. Then a Picture appeared. Luke recognized it immediately. It was him and Lorelai, standing in front of his freshly painted diner. Rory took that. About a year ago.
Again the TV appeared black. Then a white eight-letter-word came into sight. "Remember..."

Die Idee fand ich toll, immer die Bilder und dazwischen "Remember..." .
Wie ein auf Video aufgenommenes Flashback. Toll!

Another photo was on screen. This time it was taken at a festival in Stars Hollow. Luke couldn’t remember which one it was, but he saw him sitting on a bench, together with Lorelai. Obviously deep in a conversation.

Du meintest da wohl "deep in flirting"...

Again, cut.... blackness.. Again the word "Remember...". This time it was blue. It vanished out of sight.
Another Picture. Taken in front of a hospital. Lorelai with her leg in a cast, looking tired. Beside her Luke, carrying her stuff.
Luke swallowed. He realized, what this was all about.

Das erkennt er aber früh... Auch ganz süß, die Szene vor dem Krankenhaus!

"I don’t wanna see this. It’s over before it begun. She’s pregnant. I can’t do this.",

he desperately thought.

Nein, so darf er nicht denken!

He was about to push the stop-button, but...-
"Stop it", Luke said aloud.
He again was about to push the button. But ...[quote]
Toll beschrieben, wie er es immer wieder ausmachen will und dann nicht kann!

[quote] "I know you think ‘She’s pregnant with another man’s kid’. Well, I have to admit, it’s true... But let’s think this over, Luke... Remember... You baked a coffeecake at my 16th birthday, you blew balloons up for me. My dad never did that ... Remember... You served me pie, as I was in a bad mood, because I got a D on a paper. Dad never did that ... Remember... You wanted to beat up Dean, because he broke up with me. Dad never did that ... Remember... You gave me strawberry-pancakes, because I was sad about the breakup. Dad never did that ...Remember."

Again silence.
Luke was deeply touched. He really remembered.
Again Rory spoke:
"Please watch those"
Pictures appeared. Each one showing a birthday-party for Rory, since they lived in Stars Hollow. On each photo was Luke.
Rory’s face appeared again.
"See? On every single Pic you are. You’ve been there.... Have you seen my dad? No? Well, that’s because he never was there. Don’t get me wrong. I love my dad. I don’t blame him. It’s just how he is. But Luke, you’re always here. No matter what happens. You saw me growing up. You kind of raised me. You’ve been more like a dad, than my father ever has been."

Das war echt super!! ( nieder mit dem sich-nicht-kümmernden-C-Monster!!^^)

"Did he just say that? I’m her dad? To the new child, too?", Luke thought.
Slowly but steady, a tear rolled down his face. He hadn’t been crying since... ever.

:heul:

"Luke," she quietly said, "This film is about to remind you. Of all the good things you have in your life. And I fervently hope, I am a good thing. Remember... You’re my angel. You got wings... My coffee hero... Remember... You drove me to the hospital, when my Dad collapsed... You’re my hero... Remember... You brought us ice at the party... You’re my hero... Remember... You technically have redone our house... You’re my hero...Remember... You always listen to me, though I often just tell crab... You’re my hero...Remember... You made me a Chuppah... You’re my hero... Remember."


Lorelai broke off.
Luke stared at the TV. All these things were true. He couldn’t look away, even if he wanted to.
"I’m her hero? Why? I never did anything special...just usual things...things going without saying", Luke thought.

--Was soll ich noch sagen?-- Als ich das gelesen hatte, hab ich dann auch endgültig geheult.
Und deshalb (und wegen dem fiesen Cliffhanger da unten) musst du einfach zugeben, dass du doch gemein bist.
Was willst du mir noch antun? Oder besser: Was hab ich dir getan?

"I know, I wasn’t always the best friend. I forgot that we wanted to paint your diner. I always annoy you with my coffee addiction. I sometimes talk too much. But nevertheless, I tried to pay you back - I painted your diner all alone, because I felt so guilty. I helped you out with Rachel, even though deep inside I was jealous. I tried to help you, when your uncle died. I even bought you a new baseball cap, which by the way, you’re always wearing. We also have given each other some hard lessons. But we always were able to work everything out, Luke. Together."

--Sag ich doch!--

Luke tried to keep the tears from rolling, but he had to admit it was a lost battle.

Ja, so ähnlich gings mir auch...

Luke, without you, I’m not complete. I’m Sharon, you’re Ozzy. I’m Lois Lane, you’re Clark Kent. I can’t live without you and not just because of your coffee. You mean too much to me."

:heul:

The tape stopped rolling.
But Luke couldn’t take his eyes away from the screen. His thoughts swirled.
"I mean too much to her? To do what? Lois Lane? Clark Kent? She’s not complete without me?", Luke thought.

Ist der schwer von Begriff!^^

Luke didn’t know, how long he had been sitting there, staring at the blank screen.

But then, a quiet knock on his apartment door.

WAS HATTE ICH DIR ZU FIESEN CLIFFHANGERN GESAGT???

... Aber du weißt ja was mich beruhigt... das Problem ist nur, ich hab keinen Pudding mehr!


...Und jetzt hab ich so viel Platz dafür gebraucht, was andere in drei Sätzen ausdrücken können!

Naja, was ich eigentlich sagen wollte: Der Teil war sooo toll!!!
(ach, das hatte ich ja schon gesagt...)

Ich hab dich lieb, :knuddel:
Tina

[Cedric]

@nina: sorry, ich habe dich bei den letzten reFBs vergessen. sorry. danke.
@jule: wow, dankeschoen...fuer das liebe FB und auch das mit talent. Hat mich sehr gefreut...
@tina: Okay...DAS FB ist wirklich lang...Dankeschoen....Sei froh, dass es nur noch einen Teil gibt, sonst koennte ich ja noch mehr Cliffhanger einbauen....*lol* Mit Betareader weiss ich nicht. Der neue/letzte Teil kommt morgen schon, weil ich ja dann fliege...einmal schauen, wenn du lieb bist....*rofl*. Mhm, das Leben waere ohne Cliffhanger langweilig...

Liebe Gruesse,
Ced

[Meffi]

@tina: Okay...DAS FB ist wirklich lang...Dankeschoen....Sei froh, dass es nur noch einen Teil gibt, sonst koennte ich ja noch mehr Cliffhanger einbauen....*lol* Mit Betareader weiss ich nicht. Der neue/letzte Teil kommt morgen schon, weil ich ja dann fliege...einmal schauen, wenn du lieb bist....*rofl*. Mhm, das Leben waere ohne Cliffhanger langweilig...
Liebe Gruesse,
Ced

Bitteschön!
Und ich bin nicht froh dass es nur noch einen Teil gibt!
Für mehr würd ich auch noch ein Paar Cliffhanger aushalten...
schreibst du vielleicht ne Fortsetzung? Das fänd ich toll!
Von wegen Betareader, das ist ja sowieso eher ne Tarnung...musst ihn mir ja nur schicken... Biiiiitteeeee!*beg*


Und ich bin lieb! Siehst du? Hab mal was gebastelt:

[jeany_loverin]

Bitteschön!
Und ich bin nicht froh dass es nur noch einen Teil gibt!
Für mehr würd ich auch noch ein Paar Cliffhanger aushalten...
schreibst du vielleicht ne Fortsetzung? Das fänd ich toll!
Von wegen Betareader, das ist ja sowieso eher ne Tarnung...musst ihn mir ja nur schicken... Biiiiitteeeee!*beg*


Und ich bin lieb! Siehst du? Hab mal was gebastelt:

genau, ich würd für mehr teile auch mehr cliffhanger über mich ergehen lassen...
aber so ne Fortzsetzung is doch ma ne super idee!
So nach nen paar Jahren, wie sie es geschafft haben das kind zu erziehen...

sag ma müsste das in dem Banner nich heissen "2 days until Ced is coming to germany" ?
oder vertu ich mich da?

[Cedric]

Bitteschön!

Und ich bin lieb! Siehst du? Hab mal was gebastelt:

again, funny and thx...okay warte ein paar minuten, dann schau in deine PM.....

@jule: technically muesste da ein is stehen, aber wenn du redest, muss es nicht unbedingt sein...das kannst du machen wie ein Dachdecker, wie ihr sagt...

[Meffi]

Yaaaaaaaay!!!! Dankeee!!!

[Franny]

Du machst mich fertig.
Die arme Lore... Der arme Luke...
Das Video war wirklich sehr gut!
Ich will auch mal so ein Video bekommen
"You´re my hero..." Ooooooooaaaaawwwwwww das war soooo !
Ich glaube das ist

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vor der Tür...
Also schnell weiter!
Ich bin echt begeistert und freu mich auf den nächsten Teil!
:knuddel: Domi

[Check]

OMG, der teil war einfach super, cedric!
Das Video war einfach

Lore war super dargestellt, dass mit dem Lois und Clark u.s.w.!
Einfach super

Mit hat der Teil so toll gefallen, mit den Aussagen von Rory, Dean und Lore

Besonders Rory hat mir gut gefallen....(auch wenn ich für chris bin)

Aber irgednwie kam mir das ein wenig wie ne sekte vor :lach:

Der Teil war echt Wow

:knuddel: bye Anne

[Cedric]

Hi guys!!
Okay, der letzte Teil. Leider...bin selber ein bisschen traurig....but I'll come back, promise.
reFBs:
@Domi: danke..naja, lese weiter..dann weisst du wer vor der tuere steht...
@Anne: thx...schoen, dass du Rory wieder magst..*lol* Naja, eine sekte..mhm...waer aber cool so eine Luke-Sekte..obwohl da moechte ich lieber eine Lorelai-Sekte...naja egal..
So, den anderen habe ich ja schon reFB gegeben...


Okay, der naechste/letzte Teil gehoert allen, die mir hier immer so lieb FBs gegeben haben...thx...


Part XI:

Luke quickly tried to whip away his tears. After a few moments, it knocked again. Outside the door stood Lorelai.
As they couldn’t see anymore, what was going on in the diner, she, Rory and Dean decided to go in there and wait together with Patty and Babette. But Lorelai couldn’t stand it anymore. They have been waiting for one and half an hour. The tape just had a duration of 35 minutes. Then suddenly Lorelai stood up and without a word, went upstairs. But she didn’t knock immediately. First she had to collect herself. Then she knocked. Carefully. No answer. She waited. She knocked again. Finally she could hear noises from inside. A few moments later, the door opened.
Luke stopped breathing, as she saw Lorelai standing there. He didn’t know what to say. So he just made a step back, to let her know, that she could come in.
Lorelai stepped inside. Immediately, she saw the still running TV. But there was just the test-screen.
"He watched it ‘till the end, then", Lorelai thought, not knowing why she wasn’t more relieved.
Then she looked at Luke. He seemed smaller to her. She searched for his eyes, but he didn’t look at her directly. It seemed like he was focused on a point right above Lorelai’s head.
Both of them stood still. Neither said one single word.
Finally Luke opened his mouth, closed it, and opened it again.
"Lorelai." He hesitated.
"Can I say this? It will hurt her... and me."
He started over again.
"Lorelai, I can’t..", he broke off.
Lorelai made a step forward.
"I need to stop him, saying anything with ‘I can’t’ in it.", she thought, more and more desperate.
"Shh..", she said, again stepping forward.
But Luke made a step backwards. He stumbled, but fortunately, he just fell into his armchair. Inevitable, he had to smile.
"Now I’m sitting here like a jerk, unable to go anywhere.", he thought.
For the first time now, he looked directly at her. She looked exhausted. Pale. Just like on the tape. Now he searched for a sign in her eyes. They took his breath away. He often had looked into those heavenly blue eyes, but as he did now, they were brighter. They seemed to shine somehow. Luke recognized it. It was hope, but at the same time fear. It confused him. So he just sat there, staring at her.
Lorelai, still standing were she was, too, stared into Luke’s eyes. They were red. As though he had cried. Lorelai didn’t remember ever seeing him cry. It was novum.
At this moment, Luke tried again to say something.
"Lorelai", he began, "This tape...it was...but I...but I can’t do..".
Lorelai interrupted him.
"Luke. Please don’t say ‘I can’t.’ Because you do."
A tear made its way down her face.
"Just listen to me now... If there’s a ‘No’, I won’t be mad, just disappointed, okay? Will you?"
Luke remembered those words. It were his. Luke again tried to say something but the words just didn’t came out of his mouth. So he simply nodded. "Yes."
Lorelai caught up for air. Then she slowly began to speak. Very slow.
"Luke, did you remember?"
Luke, again nodded.
"Everything on this tape is true. I don’t know what I would do without you. You’re like the air that I breathe. I can imagine, what you think right now, that I’m crazy, expecting that you would say ‘Everything’s fine. I wanna be with you.’ See, I don’t think you would, but all I know is, you’re the one for me."
Luke stood up.
"No, Lorelai. I’m not the one, I’m sorry...", he breathed hard, his voice cracking.
"Don’t speak further, Luke. Just listen to me one more minute, okay? When you say ‘Go!’. Then I’m gone. I promise."
Like in trance, Luke nodded again.
"What do I have to expect?", he thought. He sat down. Again looking closely at a point right above Lorelai’s head.
"Luke, if you’re not the one, then why does my soul feel glad today?
If you’re not the one, then why I’m crying on my bed?
If you’re not the one, then why does your name resound in my head?
If you are not mine, then why does your heart return my call?
If you are not for me, then why does this distance maim my life?
If you are not for me, then why do I dream of you as my husband?
If you are not mine, would I have the strength to stand at all?"
Tears were streaming down her face now. She looked into Luke’s eyes. They were shimmering. Then she could see a tear rolling down.
"I know, it’s a hard one, I mean with the baby and stuff. I know that Luke. And I know why you’re so far away. But I also know, that this much is true. We’ll make through, Luke. And I hope you are the one, I share my life with. And I wish that you could be one, I die with. And I’m praying you’re the one, I build my home with. And if I’m not made for you, then why does my heart tell me, that I am? Is there any way, that I can be in your arms?"
Luke stood up. Tears were dropping from his nose, his lips. He made a step forward.
"Lorelai..."
"Wait, one little thing", Lorelai quickly said, but nevertheless stepping closer to Luke.
"I hope I love you all my life."
Another step. Now they were like one yard away from each other. Lorelai could see every single tear, rolling down Luke’s face.
He made a step forward, too. Then he took both of her hands.
"Lorelai", his voice was rough, quiet. Barely hearable. But Lorelai couldn’t imagine a more wonderful sound.
"Lorelai. Nobody ever did something this... this amazing for me before. But now, you’re the one, who has to remember. Remember... 2 months ago. I said that it may seem weird, because we never even dated. Remember?"
Now Lorelai was the one, who just nodded.
"What I wanted to say, way back then – and what I want to say now, too, is...".
He took a pause. He made another step forward. Their noses nearly touched. He directly looked into her eyes.
"In those heavenly blue eyes..."
Luke cleared his throat.
"Is, that I love you, Lorelai. I mean, I thought, I had lost you. I mean, you’re pregnant. But Rory opened my eyes. I feel like her father. I would do everything for her, she’s right. I love her, too. And the baby...I can love it, too. I mean, I already do. Lorelai, in my heart is there you are.... What you said before, every single word is true. I love you. I..."
Lorelai interrupted him. "Shh..."
"Wha...", Luke wanted to say. But he had no chance.
Lorelai leaned forward and kissed him.
----
Meanwhile at the Gilmore house. The phone war ringing. The answering machine sprang to life.
"It’s us. Speak, if you must. Peep."
"Hi, it’s Chris... Uhm, I just wanted to say, that I still think that The Offspring rules, but Metallica is okay, too. Alright, that’s it. Bye."
----
Finally they broke apart. Luke whiped away Lorelai’s tears.
"Don’t cry. This is gonna work. I know of that", he smiled and kissed her again.
"I’m sorry, Luke, but could we go downstairs? Just for a minute? Four very important persons in my life are sitting there, waiting for a sign...", Lorelai put forward.
"Okay. Let’s go. I mean, they’re important for me, too, then."
With these words, he kissed her again, took her hands and together they went down the stairs, and walked through the curtain, which separated Luke’s private from his business life.
Patty, Babette, Dean and Rory were sitting at the very same table, where Lorelai had left them.
As Rory saw the two of them coming down, smiling like that, she immediately sprang up.
"Everything’s fine?", she asked, already knowing the answer. She was beaming.
"Yeah."
First Rory hugged her mom, then Luke.
Luke hugged her, smiling. Then he said.
"Yeah, everything’s fine. No, it’s great... fantastic. I thought, I would never gonna be able to tell, Rory, but I love your mom."
He leaned forward and again kissed his great love.




Love,
Cedric

[phoe-nixe]

Oh Ced!

Das war ein soooo toller letzter Teil! Ich bin richtig gerührt! Zuerst dachte ich noch "Oh nein... Luke... sag nicht I can't!" aber dann hat sich ja doch noch alles zum Guten gewendet! Lorelai's "Rede" war ja wirklich herzergreifend! Alles super toll beschrieben! Ich bin den Fan Ced!

Hoffe du schreibst bald ne neue ff! Ich liebe englische ffs und vor allem natürlich deine!

Kisses, Nina