[Cedric]

KEIN PLATZHALTER!! :freu:

erm, cliffhanger???

[Check]

Hey Ced...muss mal nen Platzhalter bis Freitag Abend oder Samstag machen, weil ihc Besuch :lach: hab!


So jetzt gibt´s FB

So, erstmal muss ich sagen, sorry, aber Ich hasse Luke, ich hasse ihn!

Der Teil war echt toll geschrieben, aebr der Kuss hat mich gestört, und nicht wiel es Luke war, sondern wei ler einfach nicht gepasst hat!
Er war nur aus der Verzweiflung heraus...
Und dann ging es einfach ganz normal weiter, als wär nichts passiert!

Chris soll jetzt endlich mal "direkt" auftauchen *ungeduldig bin*
Man ich vergöttere ihn!

Time went by and the coffee went by. 15 cups already.

Das hat mir irgendwie gefallen

The owner himself was standing there, wearing a suit, which looked adorable on him.

Dieser Mann in irgendeiner Form adorable?
Neee. Sorry

His blue eyes

Hä? Hat Luke nicht braune Augen?
Korigiere mich, wenn ich da falsch liege


Ja eher übergangteil, aber echt toll geschrieben!

Will mehr abber:

Bye Anne :knuddel:

[Meffi]

Zitat:
Zitat von Meffi
KEIN PLATZHALTER!! :freu:


erm, cliffhanger???

Hups! da hab ich wohl nicht so gaanz das richtige wort im kopf gehabt. natürlich sollte es "kein Cliffhanger!!" heißen

[phoe-nixe]

Heyyyy Ced!

Juhu, ein neues Kapitel und dazu noch ein so tolles! Sie haben sich endlich geküsst! Und es war ein toller Kuss! Juhu!

Und Chris... bin ja mal gespannt wie er die Nummer raus gefunden hat und was er von Emily+Richard und besonders von Lore will... wird bestimmt gut Stress geben, aber ich bin mir sicher dass Luke Lore und Rory beschützen wird!!!

Freu mich schon aufs nächste Kapitel!

Love, Nina

[Charming_Holly]

Thanks for the dedication, Ced. I'm Maxi No nickname or anything, just Maxi.

He released the hug but didn’t move away from me. Instead, he stared into my eyes. And I did the same. Once again, my stomach was full of butterflies. Our noses nearly touched. I knew what was coming up. And I didn’t fight it. I knew this time, it would be right. Faltering, our lips touched. Finally, we kissed but this time, we both wanted it – and it was a great kiss. Maybe the greatest I’ve ever got. As we broke apart, I couldn’t help but smile and he did, too.

Wow, so süß, echt. The beginning of a real love story
Aber du hast Liz sterben lassen und beschwerst dich darüber, dass Lore in meiner FF ihr baby verliert? Als echt mal, mein lieber Ced.

Something slowly made down his way to earth. It was snow.

Nice cliffhanger! Gefällt mir richtig gut. Dann kann's ja nur besser werden

Aber all in all, mochte ich das chapter richtig. Wonderfully written. Keep it up

*argh* Jetzt bin ich wieder ins Denglisch zurückverfallen ^^

[Cedric]

ich gebe jetzt mal reFBs:

@ Jule und Isi: thx für das tolle FB!!! Tut mir leid wegen euren Liz-hearts aber ich wollte das sehr traurig machen, und da ist mir Liz eingefallen....mit dem-den-ihr-nicht-nennt müsst ihr euch noch mind. 1 chapter gedulden...

@Tina: Ja, endlich...ich habe dir ja versprochen, dass sie nicht 8 Jahre brauchen...eine neue Zeitrechnung...das ist eine gute Idee...ich habe auch so eine....im moment ist 5 cups of coffee, also noch nicht so spät^^ ....im nächsten Teil gibt es wieder einen marvelous cliffhanger nur für dich..*lol*

@Emmy: Ja, ich weiß, dass du Luke hasst, das ist nichts neues^^. Du findest den Kuss unpassend? mhm..naja. du hast recht, sie waren verzweifelt, but sometimes exactly this moment is the right one. I thought there was the right time....anyway, jedem natürlich seine eigene Meinung.... Nein, ich dachte auch immer, dass Luke braune Augen hat, aber Tina hat gesagt, sie sind blau. dann habe ich besser aufgepasst, und sie sind wirklich blau...

@Nina: thx...jep, you will find out eventuelly...stay tuned.

@Maxi (endlich weiß ich es...): thx auch dir... Ja, ich mag den Schnee auch, ich bin ein winterkind...naja, mit Liz hast du recht, aber beschwere mich trotzdem weiter bei dir.*lol* Denglish ist nicht schlimm...it's the same with me.....


okay, der neue Teil kommt hoffentlich morgen, spätenstens aber am Montag.

love, CedJo

[Meffi]

Re-Re-FB:

ich gebe jetzt mal reFBs:
...
@Tina: Ja, endlich...ich habe dir ja versprochen, dass sie nicht 8 Jahre brauchen...eine neue Zeitrechnung...das ist eine gute Idee...ich habe auch so eine....im moment ist 5 cups of coffee, also noch nicht so spät^^ ....im nächsten Teil gibt es wieder einen marvelous cliffhanger nur für dich..*lol*

ich hab für lore in meinem nächsten teil auch ne neue zeitrechnung eingebaut ^^
aber das war schon bevor ich deinen letzten gelesen hab.
auf den cliffhanger kann ich aber gut verzichten... mach dir keine mühe wegen mir

Nein, ich dachte auch immer, dass Luke braune Augen hat, aber Tina hat gesagt, sie sind blau. dann habe ich besser aufgepasst, und sie sind wirklich blau...

siehst du? ich hab immer recht
ich finde Luke/Scott halt im gegensatz zu emmy sooo toll, das ich mir seine augenfarbe merken kann... warum ist der typ nur sooo alt?

okay, der neue Teil kommt hoffentlich morgen, spätenstens aber am Montag.

loooos! hopp,hopp, hopp! beeil dich!!

HDL, :knuddel:
Tina (dein fanatischer Fan, du weißt schon...)

[Cedric]

siehst du? ich hab immer recht
ich finde Luke/Scott halt im gegensatz zu emmy sooo toll, das ich mir seine augenfarbe merken kann... warum ist der typ nur sooo alt?

vielleicht kann man ja dort auch eine neue zeitrechnung einbauen, dann wär er gar nicht so alt...
Dann will ich aber Lauren haben....

[Cedric]

okay...
the new part...but I have to say, I don't like it really..but I couldn't think of another way to write it either....just don't be too cruel with me, okay? I promise the next part will be better....

reFBs are already given, so here's the next chapter:


for Tina, because she wants to have a new time calendar....*lol*

part XV:



I watched the snow slowly coming down to earth but I didn’t really notice it. I was much too concentrated on the events that happened that day. To see a wacky wife and a straight laced husband, who were so totally different to my parents... Thinking of them, my heart became heavier. I never talked about them really. I remember Patty and Babette trying to talk to me about my mom, when I was younger but they gave it up soon. And as my father died, I completely became a loner. Never wanted to be attached in somebody else’s life and it worked out really fine until Lorelai showed up here in Stars Hollow and turned my life upside down.
Suddenly I helped her with things about her parents, I really didn’t want to do. But I just couldn’t resist her – she still made me amazed. And I could feel that I was falling in love with her. I mean, this kiss had just been marvelous. But it wasn’t just the kiss. It was the fact that I would do everything for her, although I didn’t always understand her reactions.
Just at that moment she left me sitting there on this cold bench and I didn’t know why she ran. But after hearing the name Christopher, she was different. Stiff. And her eyes mirrored something like fear. I couldn’t help but notice the same look on her face like her mother’s as she got that telephone call in the morning.
I was incapable of thinking about anything else, sitting on that bench. I didn’t know how long I sat there but it had become dark around me. It was that time, I realized, I was freezing. Slowly, I stood up, and almost crashed into Mia, who stood right in front of me. I hadn’t heard her coming. On her hand she had Lorelai’s daughter, Rory.
"Oh, sorry", I apologized, "I didn’t see ya there."
Mia just smiled weakly. She looked rather worried. And looking at Rory, she did, too.
"What’s up with you two?", I asked becoming worried myself.
"Have you seen Lorelai? She didn’t show up at work or anywhere else. We’re desperate, we really searched everywhere and Rory said, maybe you know where she could be."
I was slightly surprised that Rory suggested me to help them but perhaps Lorelai mentioned me before. I skipped it and answered,
"I don’t know. Actually, I was with her today. We sat here, together...", I glimpsed at my watch, "Five hours ago. But dunno where she could be right now. She didn’t tell me."
The three of us stood in the Stars Hollow Park, shivering and racked our brains. Finally, I decided to do something.
"Okay, let’s search the town again. She can’t be far away. Let’s split up. Mia, take Rory and search the north. I’ll do the south. We’ll meet in an hour right here. If we haven’t found her by then, we... but we will find her."
Rory and Mia just nodded and turned around. I did the same. Aimlessly, I wandered around the streets, looked into every shop, every restaurant, every coffee shop. She was nowhere.
Fear made its way up my body and stroked my heart.
Where did she go?
I instantly hoped nothing was wrong, that she didn’t get into an accident or something like that. That would tear my heart apart. Again, curiosity appeared inside of me, why in the world, I was so deeply connected to her...
I kept on looking. But still no sign. Then, suddenly a thought reached my mind.
My favorite place to go. It was my grandmother’s old Bed & Breakfast. Not far outside Stars Hollow. It once had been a beautiful little inn. It always reminded me of the Waltons’ house and as I was five or something like that, my mother wanted to restore and open it again. But well, she never did. Faith wanted her somewhere else. Since then, it was my own hiding place. Two days a year. On January 18 and November 12, the dates my mom and dad died.
I owned this place now, but never even considered to open it. Too much memories, too much hurt...
Single-minded, I walked down the driveway to the Dragon Fly Inn, as my mom labeled it, and I couldn’t believe my luck. On the stairs sat my mystery-woman.
Quietly and carefully, I sat down beside her and said,
"Your daughter and Mia are searching for you. They’re worried. And so was I."
She looked up.
"I’m sorry. I just needed some alone time. Time to think... I didn’t wanna frighten anybody."
I just nodded. I could reconstruct her feelings. But still, I didn’t get why she ran away from me. It had to be about that Christopher and as I looked into Lorelai’s eyes, I could see the same kind of fear in her eyes than a few hours before.
Carefully, I asked her:
"Lorelai, why’re you here? What is it about that Christopher?"
She said nothing, just stared out into the landscape.
There was total silence around us. No bird was singing, no car passing by. I almost could hear the snow reaching the ground.
Suddenly, after about ten minutes, Lorelai opened her mouth,
"Chris... Christopher is my... is my... my husband.", she stuttered.
"Husband? You’re married?"
I was shocked. I hadn’t expected that. Everything, but not that.
"Yes, I am. He’s the... the reason... I’m here. I just couldn’t stand it anymore. I mean, I tried. I really did, but he was too... he just never..." Her voice cracked.
I could see tears streaming down her face. I desperately tried to find an handkerchief but I had none, so I just hugged her carefully. A few moments went by in silence, then,
"Luke, can I tell you something?"
Again, I just nodded.
"Okay", she sighed, "I’m gonna start at the very beginning. Maybe it’s none of interest for you but I... I have to tell... somebody. And you are... you are..."
Again, she broke off. And again, I said nothing. I just looked at her closely.
Finally, she spoke further.
"Chris and I married when we were seventeen. Because of Rory, of course. But I thought, I loved him. I thought it was right. And it really worked out fine the first two years. He was totally in this relationship. He found a job, not a bad one, might I add, and cared about Rory and me all the time. I thought he was happy. But... but suddenly he was changed, like from one day to another. He came home late, was drunk or just bad tempered and..."
She broke off again and looked at me, then she put forward,
"Promise me, never to tell anybody?"
I was slightly confused and curious at the same time. Again, I felt incapable to say anything, consequently I just nodded again.
She caught up for air, cleared her throat and continued...



love, Ced

[jeany_loverin]

platzhalteeeer

EDIT:
EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! Gah Ced, muss das denn immer sein -.-

Ich weiss nicht, was du hast...
ich find den teil toll! <3
Das Lorelai sich Luke öffnet ist klasse!
Und ich liebe Lukes Gedanken.
Auch die Idee, dass das Dragonfly Luke gehört find ich klasse!

Also ich hab nichts zu meckern!

hdl

Jule