[Gunni]

:hi: Katie!
Die beiden Teile waren super! Die Versteigerung war total super, und Mer's gedanken waren einfach nur super beschrieben. Herrlich war ja auch:

“Mer and Derek sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G…” she sang cheerfully and Cristina joined in right away. “First comes love, then comes marriage..-”

“STOP IT!”

hahaha...super!
Und der Kuss...awww...
Bin sehr gespannt, wie's weitergeht.

lg
gunni

[Jeane]

ich liebe derek
ich liebe ga
ich liebe deine ff

eig les ich nicht so gerne einglische ff`s ( ich hasse englisch), aber deine musste ich einfach anfangen...und konnte nicht aufhören

ich hoffe du schreibst bald weiter, sonst bekomme ich entzugserscheinungen...

:clap::clap::clap::clap:

lg tini

[Kate Austen]

Danke Gunni && Jeane (woohoo, neue Leserin! :clap: ) <3

Soviel Engagement muss doch gleich belohnt werden...

+ Möpimöp +

“Derek, I can’t..” she whispered softly and withdrew from his arms, looking straight into his twinkling cobalt blue eyes. She expected to see something like disappointment or even anger in them, something she thought she deserved. But instead she was faced with pure tenderness. Which, to be honest, confused her even more.

“It’s okay.” He softly smiled at her.

She didn’t want him to smile. She didn’t want him to be okay with it. She wanted him to be angry, to tell her what the hell was wrong with her.
That would have made it way easier.

“No, it’s not.” She lowered her head, unable to look at him right now. Unable to see him un-angry. Unable to see him looking at her. She couldn’t breathe with him looking at her like that. His look was mesmerizing and the last she needed right now was… to be mesmerized.

He gently lifted her chin up, forcing her to look at him.

Damndamndamn!

“Meri… it’s okay.” He placed a loose strand of hair behind her ear. “I won’t push you into something you don’t want.”

She smiled at him thankfully. “You won’t?”

“I won’t.” he repeated.

“Look…” After all, she felt as if she owed him an explanation. “I had a lot of bad luck in my former relationships… talking about jealousy and distrust and…” she sighed, “infidelities. And I’m still dark and twisty because of that and I guess it would not be fair if you had to deal with a dark and twisty me… Plus… the Cristina Break Up Rules say..-”

“The what?” Derek raised an eyebrow, yet an amused grin appeared on his face.

“Never mind.” she added quickly. “Anyway, these rules… whatever… say ‘Do not date hot men unless they are named George Clooney or Brad Pitt’..-”

“So you think I’m hot?”

Meredith playfully hit him on the chest, causing him to chuckle. “Would you please stop interrupting me! Anyway… My point is, I’m taking baby steps.”

“Baby steps?” he asked, tilting his head to the side.

“Baby steps.” she nodded.

Silence. He seemed as if he pondered over something very carefully. And then…

“Could you use company? With taking baby steps, I mean.” he added after he had recognised her asking glance. “You know, I’ve had shitty relationships myself and maybe we could practise group therapy.”

Huh? What was wrong with that guy? She has just turned him down the second time within a few days and he still kept it up. Either he was one of those sick stalkers who even hide behind some bushes, offering their prey self-made strawberry ice cream and stuff because they are… well… sick… or… he really, really liked her…
Tricky question.

“I… guess that’ll be okay.” she agreed finally. “But there are rules to this… therapy thing… or whatever.”

“The Dark And Twisty Club has rules?” He didn’t care what it was. He would accept everything if it meant he would see her again.

“Number one, strictly on sociable basis.”

Okay. Granted… that was a hard one. But did he have another option?

Damndamndamn!

He took a deep breath. And another one for good luck. “Strictly sociable basis, got it.”

“Number two, no giving me the face…” she continued when Derek interrupted her again.

“The face?” he asked, arms akimbo. God, she was cute when she was bossy…

“The McDreamy face. The head tilt, the smile… Stop it or else I screw group therapy!”

He exerted himself for sounding serious when he agreed to her statement with a simple nod, afraid of doing something… flirt-y.

“And three,” she declared, “no singing songs about me.”

“I do not sing songs about you, Meri.” he replied sanctimoniously.

Liar, liar, liar, sang the little man inside his head. The only thing worse than a liar is a bad liar. And he was a very big bad liar.

“Great!” She smiled brightly at him though he could tell he saw a glimmer of disappointment flashing in her eyes.

She could do the friends thing. Seriously. Being friends with Derek would be fun. Fun, fun, fun, she told herself. They would do funny friend-y things like… never mind. But it would be so much fun.

Funfunfun.

[Jeane]

Being friends with Derek would be fun.

hab ich das richtig verstanden??
freunde sein?

“And three,” she declared, “no singing songs about me.”

“I do not sing songs about you, Meri.” he replied sanctimoniously.

Liar, liar, liar, sang the little man inside his head. The only thing worse than a liar is a bad liar. And he was a very big bad liar.

zu geil, weiß auch nichtw arum aber ich find die stelle einfach nur genial

lg tini

[Little-Anni]

so, dann werde ich mich mal zu wort melden, wenn schon ein neuer part online ist.....der nebenbei erwähnt wieder klasse war.

dreek ist ja so süß....

“Could you use company? With taking baby steps, I mean.” he added after he had recognised her asking glance. “You know, I’ve had shitty relationships myself and maybe we could practise group therapy.”

kann man so einen mann irgendwo kaufen?

die regeln!!!! die sind echt der hammer.
besonders die 2.regel:

“Number two, no giving me the face…” she continued when Derek interrupted her again.

“The face?” he asked, arms akimbo. God, she was cute when she was bossy…

“The McDreamy face. The head tilt, the smile… Stop it or else I screw group therapy!”

ich freu mich schon ganz doll auf den nächsten part.

deine ally

[Gunni]

So, hier kommt mein fb.
War übrigends wieder ein ganz toller Teil

“Derek, I can’t..” she whispered softly and withdrew from his arms, looking straight into his twinkling cobalt blue eyes.

Was?

She could do the friends thing. Seriously. Being friends with Derek would be fun. Fun, fun, fun, she told herself. They would do funny friend-y things like… never mind. But it would be so much fun.

Funfunfun.

Als wenn...die beiden gehören einfach zusammen!
Die Rules waren gut geschrieben und das Derek das alles mitmacht um sie zu erobern ist aww...

Freu mich schon auf den nächsten Teil!

lg
gunni

[rina]

oh mein gott, ich hab mir deine ff durchgelesen ^^ ich LIEBE sie. derek als rockstar ^^ und deine dialoge. echt geil. wirklich.

aber war das jetzt das ende? geht das noch weiter? hab ich was verpasst... oder gibts die weiteren teile woanders???

[Kate Austen]

Neinnein, im Laufe der nächsten Tage kommt der nächste Teil ^^

Während meiner Klausurphasen komme ich selten zum Schreiben, deswegen die kurze Unterbrechung.

[rina]

Oh thank god =)

Freue mich schon auf den nächsten Teil... dein Schreibstil ist einfach hammer! Weiter so!!!!

[KatieSmock]

Tut mir leid, dass ich dir erst jetzt fb gebe, aber ich habs irgendwie total vergessen Es tut mir wirklich total leid.


Aber jetzt zum fb.

“Never mind.” she added quickly. “Anyway, these rules… whatever… say ‘Do not date hot men unless they are named George Clooney or Brad Pitt’..-”

“So you think I’m hot?”

Oh gott, so genial :lach:
Ich kann mir an dieser Stelle richtig gut Dereks Gesichtsausdruck vorstellen XD

“The Dark And Twisty Club has rules?” He didn’t care what it was.

haha, genial *lol* das ist so typisch *lach*

“Number one, strictly on .”

WAAAAAS?!?! Das kannst du nicht machen
Aber irgendwie erinnern mich diese Regeln an die von Mer & Mark XD
Folge 3x05 war das glaub ich... weiß aber nicht genau XD

“The McDreamy face. The head tilt, the smile… Stop it or else I screw group therapy!”

hehe, das muss er aber ehrlich abstellen, wenn es einen "sociable basis" geben soll *hrhr*

Du hast einfach wunderbare Ideen, das ist toll. Ebenfalls auch dein Schreibstil (wie schon so oft gesagt).
Aber ich bewundere, dass dir immer mehr und neues einfällt


Jaa, ich weiß, ein bissl kurz, aber méhr bekomm ich einfach nicht hin *lol*
Schreib einfach schnell weiter, dann bekommst du ein längeres XD

lg, Katie