The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and beloved in return

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hippiekiwi
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26.07.2005, 22:18

wunderbar!! zwei sehr schöne teile hast du geschrieben. (hab den zweiten verpasst, typisch!)

deine rechtschreibung hat sich echt gebessert! Wink

aber der letzte teil endet etwas abgehackt. ist das gewollt? kommt mir nämlich irgendwie ein bisschen seltsam vor...

aber sonst: freue mich schon auf eine fortsetzung!!

lg, hippiekiwi

From forth the fatal loin of these two foes

a pair of star-crossed lovers take their life...

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