When she opened her eyes for the first time [JJ]

When she opened her eyes for the first time [JJ]

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#141

23.08.2005, 16:33

Ein neuer Teil... :freu:
Um ehrlich zu sein, ich musste mir das letzte Kapitel noch mal durchlesen, bevor ich mit dem neuen Kapitel starten konnte...
Du hast deinen Schreibstil nicht verloren...du hast die Gefühle, Gedanken und die gesamte Situation wieder sehr schön beschrieben...Aber (es gibt ein aber) wie kannst du nur an dieser Stelle aufhören? Nono

Nono

Ich hoffe, Luke lässt sich nicht so einfach abspeisen...

Ich freu mich schon auf den nächsten Teil.

Nici

Honey, I'll be gone before the nightfall.

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