Did I tell you? [JJ]
#42

so also

tolles kapitel, super geschrieben, nur 2 sachen zum meckern
Zitat:Bücker
Ha ha, ich hab nen fehler gefunden Tongue

und dann das hier:
~Tina~ schrieb:Nach gut fünf Minuten, hatte Lorelai ihren Mageninhalt den Vögeln hinterlassen und stand nun mit dem Kopf an Lukes Brust gelehnt auf dem Fußgängerweg. Zärtlich strich er ihr über den Rücken. Beide hatten ihre Augen geschlossen, was aber eher daran lag, dass ihr Alkoholpegel relativ hoch war.
“Das war peinlich.”, flüsterte Lorelai und steckte ihre linke Hand und Lukes Gesäßtaschen seiner Hose.
“Du bist betrunken...wir sind betrunken.”, murmelte Luke nur.
“Komm mit!”, meinte Lorelai plötzlich, nahm Lukes Hand und zog ihn hinter sich her.

“Warum nicht? Warum kann ich das, aber du mal wieder nicht? Warum brauchst du mal wieder mehr Zeit, als ich? Das verstehe ich nicht!”
“Ich bin einfach noch nicht bereit für eine Ehe...” Was hatte sie gesagt? Ohne anzuhören, was sie noch zu sagen hatte, schrie Luke sie nun an.
“Mit mir! Wolltest du das nicht eben sagen? Sag doch gleich, dass du nur mal wieder bei einem Mann im Mittelpunkt stehen wolltest und mehr würde es eh nicht werden!”
“Was ist denn in dich gefahren? Wer hat denn seine blöde Anwaltsfreundin betrogen?”
“Lass Nicole daraus!” Beide kamen gerade so richtig in Fahrt.
“Nein, die blöde Kuh gehört auch dazu! Du hast doch nur mit mir zu geschlafen, weil du die alte Ziege wütend machen wolltest, weil das Flittchen mich hasst!”
“Wow, jetzt kannst du sogar schon Gedanken lesen! Wunderbar! Weißt du was? Ich werde am besten Mönch oder Papst! Dann bin ich weit weg von dir und deiner bescheuerten Kaffeesucht! Endlich werde ich dich nicht mehr sehen und muss mir dein blödes Geschnatter über mein Outfit nicht mehr anhören!”
“Ich hasse dich!”, schrie Lorelai ihm an den Kopf.
“Gut! Mir geht es nicht anders! Ich wäre verdammt froh, wenn du den Looser Christopher geheiratet hättest...nein, warte, ich wäre froh, wenn du nie einen Schritt in mein Diner gewagt hättest!”
“ Beweg deinen blöden eingebildeten Hintern aus meinem Haus und tritt mir nie wieder unter die Augen! Ich habe es satt! Satt! SATT! Ich bete jetzt jeden Abend zu Gott, dass ich dich nie wieder sehen werde!”
“Da brauchst du gar nicht beten, du blöde Schlange! Mich wirst du ganz bestimmt nicht wieder sehen!” Für das ‘blöde Schlange’ handelte Luke sich eine saftige Ohrfeige von Lorelai ein! Er funkelte sie böse an und stampfte aus ihrem Haus. Sollte die blöde Ziege doch sehen, wie sie ohne ihren Kaffee durchs Leben kommt!
der Streit begann voll plötzlich und schon hassen sie sich? fand ich ziemlich komisch

joa, aber sonst nen klasse kapitel

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