Apart in distance but never by heart

Apart in distance but never by heart

Caroe
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28.05.2008, 12:18

Shakka Boom, endlich habe ich es geschafft.
Tatsächlich,es ist wahr, ich habe durchgehalten.
Das Kapitel ist wieder sehr schön. Dean im Kerker?!
Aufgefallen ist mir, dass Du immer sehr altertümlich beschreibst, also wenn Jess die Geschichte quasi erzählt, dafür ist die Sprache in den Dialogen manchmal sehr modern. Ich finde, das passt nicht ganz.
Trotzdem ist Dir im groÃen und ganzen gelungen, die Geschichte schön fortzuschreiben.
Hat Lorelai Wehen? Ist sie schwanger? Hast Du das vorher mal erwähnt? *Gehirnfunktionstest durchführt*

Danke an Jo & XY ungelöst - die weltbesten Künstlerinnen

Ideenlos und stolz darauf!

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Apart in distance but never by heart - von lit*blink - 18.03.2008, 17:51

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