Through all of these years (complete)

Through all of these years (complete)

Gunni
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16.02.2007, 14:05

Und ich bin auch dabei^^
Ja, ich wollte "Beach epiphany" lesen, nur irgendwie habe ich es nicht geschafft.
Also, erstmal ein riiiiiesengroÃes Lob für deinen Schreibstil. GroÃartig! Sehr detailreich, jedoch nicht zu kompliziert, es ist leicht zu lesen. Das erste Kapitel hat mir auch sehr gut gefallen- Luke als einen alten menschen zu zeigen, der vielleicht nochmal sein Leben durchdenkt, finde ich prima, die SL gibt viel her.
Meine Lieblingsstelle war die mit den Keksen. Die fand ich irgendwie unheimlich traurig. Sich Luke vorzustellen, der den Keksgeruch erwartet und dieser dann nicht präsent ist...:heul:
Aber wirklich sehr sehr schön...
Freu mich auf das nächste Kapitel!

lg
Gunni

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